Freezer Burn Part 2

BaconTheory

<div class="IPBDescription">Make Up Your Own Ending.</div> What the Marines saw shocked them. Their comrades from Fireteam Charlie were webbed up to the ceiling, some dead others barely alive. A low groan came from above them. When they looked up, a soldier was trying weakley to get out of the web.

"Commander...they got us, we tried to fight but..."

"It's ok soldier. Save your strength."

"You must leave NOW. They are coming down the hallway..."

"Like hell, we're gonna fight them off!"

Just then they heard a loud scuttling noise. About 25 or so Kaharaa, including 2 fades and an Onos rushed down the hallway toward the platoon.

"Stand your ground! Wait for my signal!"

"...OPEN FIRE!!!"

The platoon unloaded their ammo into the oncoming mass of Kaharaa. Some of them dropped like flies. However, one of the Fades mauled down 2 of the marines. The scene was that of madness. Grenades, gunfire, smoke and bodies were strewn across the catacomb tunnel floors. When the scene cleared up, only about 5 marines were left. Just when they thought it was over, the Onos came out from anothjer tunnel and charged them. Was this the end of the line?

Well thats it for now, I want the fans to make up their own ending of what happens. Thanks for all of your support!

zooby

The soldier strapped to the ceiling managed to slip his knife out and began to cut away the now-weak strands of web. As the Onos came charging down, the marine fell from the ceiling and landed on the Onos. He began digging the knife into the Onos's hide, tearing it this way and that best he could.

Stakhanov

The onos created a stunning shockwave by releasing its whole body's mass upon the ground , and proceeded to swallow the webbed marines. A sneaky gorge caught the remaining troops with more webs , letting them watch their comrades being devoured one after another.

BaconTheory

I like both of those endings. I like zooby's with the marine riding the Onos.

nooby

Whilst the Onos charged, the 5 marines reloaded and back up a few feet, there they waited, each thinking of a previous moment in time that stood out with the poignancy of life, the memories of a time when life was but simple and pleasant. As the Onos closed each returned to the moment and with a delicacy of motion that belied armoured figures, they dived into side tunnels and fired at the Onos as it went past using all the ammo they had just reloaded, Why? because it was payback. The Onos was decimated by the concerted attack. The marines reloaded again, all were thinking, was this all they had to look forward to the rest of their lifes.

Gliss

<b>Note: You can't 'knife' webs, according to storyline...</b>
They were feeling rather confident of themselves. They proceeded to move down the hallway from where the Aliens had bursted from. They moved quietly, and slid along the walls, carefully glancing behind them and above them from time to time. Eventually, they reached the corner, with a huge door on the other side. They all examined it, looking for a spot to open, when suddenly the door stuttered. It slowly opened, and the Marines jumped back behind the corner, all ready for a huge fight again.
(I'm going to make up names here...)
Nothing happened. They waited for an eternity, or perhaps 30 seconds, when Kevin signaled to Joe to peek around the corner. Since Joe was the bravest, he nodded and ever so slowly looked around the corner where the doors were.

"There's nothing there!" he said in a low whisper.

He quickly signaled for them to move forward. Just as the group lurched forward a few steps toward Joe, blood splattered all over Joe's face. He stumbled backwards and screamed loudly, and the rest of the team could see it: A giant, deathly hole had been torn into Joe's stomach by what appeared to be a Fade claw, which quickly was pulled back. Everyone jumped to his backup and emptied shell after shell into the area behind the doors. When everyone was satisfied, a few people leapt to Joe's assistance, while the others looked on. There was nothing there! They turned around to tell Joe and the others--but they were gone! A trail of red blood replaced them...