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SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">By... me :)</div> i just made this render, and thought i would like to hear you peoples oppinion on it...

<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/bored.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>


i'm properbly going to make more on it tomorrow, but for now, im of to bed only 4½ hour till school... <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • RPG_JssmfulhudRPG_Jssmfulhud Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4006Members
    Very nice! You should add some effects so it seems that the marine is actually flying backwards, not just 'hovering'. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    love the position, but the backround needs to be edited so he doesnt look like hes floating.
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  • SudzzSudzz Join Date: 2003-08-01 Member: 18663Members, Constellation
    Very nice. But the shadow needs some editing. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • UntitledUntitled Join Date: 2003-02-09 Member: 13348Members
    Camera position isn't all too great. What is he shooting at? =/


    Everything else, great job. Love the shadows, and the spot light thing, and the akimboness, just needs a back drop.
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  • CaLFiNCaLFiN Join Date: 2002-11-04 Member: 6909Members
    His legs look a little stiff there... Maybe bend them a little and make them a little wider appart <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • LegionnairedLegionnaired Join Date: 2002-04-30 Member: 552Members, Constellation
    OMG! HE'S HOVARING WITHOUT FLAPPING!

    Someone had to say it.

    Maybe add a little bit of flail to the legs, but otehr than that... nice work!
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Legionnaired+Sep 16 2003, 10:40 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Legionnaired @ Sep 16 2003, 10:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> OMG! HE'S HOVARING WITHOUT FLAPPING!
    [...] <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    i. hate. you.




    other then that, thx for the great replys <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> i'll see if i get time to work on it later to day, gotta go to school soon <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    edited September 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--RPG_Jssmfulhud+Sep 16 2003, 04:33 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (RPG_Jssmfulhud @ Sep 16 2003, 04:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Very nice! You should add some effects so it seems that the marine is actually flying backwards, not just 'hovering'.  <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Hovering, or hovar--Damn you, Legionnaired.

    It looks nice, but I think there should be green blood splattered or something. Evil looking, neh?
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  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    edited September 2003
    gripes...

    1 - feet... if you were jumping like that, your feet wouldn't be pointing up
    2 - shadow... teach me how, and i'll stop gripeing... and we,, other's have said it. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
    3 - Guns... use a real sprite instead of drawing them in?
    4 - trigger... what's he using to pull the trigger?
    5 - skinny... eat something, and stop being skinny dang you!


    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> nifty
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  • lilbadwolflilbadwolf Join Date: 2003-01-21 Member: 12542Members
    It looks like the new Max Payne.
    Imagine if we had bullet time in NS <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • RedfordRedford Monorailcatfjord Join Date: 2002-04-28 Member: 528Members, NS1 Playtester
    absolutly no sense of motion in that image. You'd think he had installed antigravity units in his arse.
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  • Sir_RobinSir_Robin Join Date: 2003-05-26 Member: 16724Members
    nice render <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> , but:

    is he using mini-flamethowers?
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    edited September 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--Delarosa+Sep 17 2003, 12:15 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Delarosa @ Sep 17 2003, 12:15 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->gripes...

    1 - feet... if you were jumping like that, your feet wouldn't be pointing up
    2 - shadow... teach me how, and i'll stop gripeing... and we,, other's have said it. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
    3 - Guns... use a real sprite instead of drawing them in?
    4 - trigger... what's he using to pull the trigger?
    5 - skinny... eat something, and stop being skinny dang you!


    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> nifty<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    1. it was late and done quick, i'll try to fix them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    2. huh ? :S

    3. I wanna try to make the muzzles 3d if i can <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    4. ssshh unimporten detail <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ( i'll fix that too, or block you're view or something )

    5. Can't, not hungry <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->


    <!--QuoteBegin--Sir Robin+--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Sir Robin)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> [...] is he using mini-flamethowers? <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    no it's my pathitic attempt at making a muzzle-flash :S



    oiii english teacher.. gtg <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    did some tweaking, but haven't got the light in yet, can't seem to get it right <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->


    <img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/nolight.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
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  • RPG_JssmfulhudRPG_Jssmfulhud Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4006Members
    Looks like he's smiling... Or it's just the jpg compression... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    It's the jpeg... but i kinnda like it... what is more humiliating then getting killed by some smart-**** marine that smiles <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • JeeRJeeR Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19237Members
    I won't try to give you advices since I'm still begining in 3D development, but I can say it's better now in it's actual form than in the previous pic you've posted <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    In order to add some life and movement to the scene, though, why not adding bullet cases flying in mid-air from the guns and showing somehow the trajectory the marine has followed in his jump? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--JeeR+Sep 17 2003, 12:12 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (JeeR @ Sep 17 2003, 12:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I won't try to give you advices since I'm still begining in 3D development, but I can say it's better now in it's actual form than in the previous pic you've posted <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    In order to add some life and movement to the scene, though, why not adding bullet cases flying in mid-air from the guns and showing somehow the trajectory the marine has followed in his jump? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    whoa... easy now.. im learning as i make.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> but the bullet cases shouldn't be to hard... but that jump-thingy... i think that is going to be kinnda hard, and give me headaches :S
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    hmmm

    <img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/motion_thing.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>


    maybe ? yes ? no ? are you insane ?
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  • JeeRJeeR Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19237Members
    edited September 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->whoa... easy now.. im learning as i make..  but the bullet cases shouldn't be to hard... but that jump-thingy... i think that is going to be kinnda hard, and give me headaches :S <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->


    Well, sorry if I got you confused <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
    I don't think this should be really hard to do though. I've made some (crapy) schematic showing you (somehow) what I meant (I would have done a scan, but right now I can't).

    We see the scene from the left.
    Imagine the little stars are the bullets.
    Imagine the strange thingy on the right is an arm holding a gun (I didn't bother retracing the entire dude <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->).
    Imagine the line at the bottom is the ground.
    Is it clearer now? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    <!--c1--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>CODE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='CODE'><!--ec1-->


                                    *       *                                    __ 
                         *                          __*____,              [   ]
                *                                  :[---]--C-  \______/   /
         *                                                      \_________/
    *
    _________________________________________

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  • JeeRJeeR Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19237Members
    edited September 2003
    Ow! Okay! I see I really got you confused now <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
    What I meant was that the place where bullets are "hovering" would show the trajectory of the marine <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Because adding bullet cases floating in the air is already adding some life to the pic.

    Now if these bullets follow a certain curve, then automaticaly the brain will retrace the movement suggested by the positions of the bullet cases <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    It's like drawing a guy from front view. He's holding two pistols and aims at the reader.
    If I want to suggest that he's slidding from left to right, I'll add bullet cases placed in 2 beautiful curves each one starting from one pistol and going to the left of the drawing.
    See what I mean?

    Here's another try at illustrating what I mean (damn scanner)... Only one curve of bullet cases drawn (the (8) is a gun viewed from front)
    <!--c1--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>CODE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='CODE'><!--ec1-->
    ? ? ? ? ? ? ?* ? ?* ? ? ? ?
    ? ? ? ?* ? ? ? ? ? ? ? * ?  (face)
    ?* ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?(8) ? ? ?    (8)
    <!--c2--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--ec2-->
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  • SkinnYSkinnY Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
    okayyy... you've managed to confuse me quit abit now... but...


    <img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/better.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>

    any better ?


    ps.

    ( i'm very open to suggestions on how to make nice muzzles... )
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  • MajinMajin Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16829Members, Constellation
    First Off
    DAMN GOOD WORK
    I really want akimbo now! <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Next instead of flames like they are make it look more like a burst of hot gasses (like IRL)

    <span style='color:black'>............</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
    <span style='color:black'>...........</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
    ___N<span style='color:black'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span><span style='color:black'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
    ____|||<span style='color:yellow'>*******</span>
    ____|<span style='color:balck'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span><span style='color:black'>.</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
    <span style='color:black'>.............</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
    <span style='color:black'>...............</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
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  • JeeRJeeR Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19237Members
    It's WAY better now, particularly with the shadows from the light IMHO <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    WEll, on the muzzles part, I'll have to pass, but if I can add something, for the love of details, if you can manage to give a random direction for some of the cases, it would be even better (if you look close, each case is directed toward the same direction, while usually they fly in a random behaviour...) <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Don't do anything yet to it, I'll post a pic as soon as my scanner is fixed in order to show you more properly what I'm meaning <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    GW! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • JezpuhJezpuh Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15157Banned
    edited September 2003
    It's nice, but add detail, like bending his little finger, turning his head a litte, bend his back, move 1 feet, you know the deal.
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  • Owen1Owen1 Join Date: 2003-04-13 Member: 15457Members
    u got casings flying off... but where are the bullets, its easy to add em... maybe even sum bullet time waves **hint** <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • JeeRJeeR Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19237Members
    Maybe the bullets are already in this fade's belly? Let's not forget that the time for a case to fall on the ground, you may probably put alot of steel in an alien's carcass <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • RPG_JssmfulhudRPG_Jssmfulhud Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4006Members
    This keeps getting better and better. Love it! Keep up the good work. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Simple_CompoundSimple_Compound Join Date: 2003-05-09 Member: 16180Members
    well nice work. i would also like to know how the hell one makes a "render". i now know how to put the models in any position i want but how do you get them to look so smoothe etc.?
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  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    He should be a little higher off the gfround
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