Monster, Part 16
DeepShadows
Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">The first gate</div> <a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/part16.html' target='_blank'>Click here to read part 16</a>
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>Click here if you have not read the story/want to catch up</a>
Sorry this took so long, but school has started for me and I've been trying to get settled in. Now that I am, I can get back to writing this story. There's been a lot of "talking," but after the next chapter there's going to be a lot of fun in store (Depending on what you consider fun.)
semi-spoilers:
<i>Not to give away too much, but there is something I have decided on for the story. That is the consept that the bacterium alters the minds of those onboard the comprimised station. That is, if they don't have protection. Frontiersmen have built in systems for nutrient suplimentation and removal of general micro bacterials. The parasite is larger than a microscopic bacterial, so keep that in mind. Anyway, those without protection are slowly manipulated by the bacterium, if in the end don't end up becoming the kharaa themselves. Spiffy, eh? Eh... I'm working on the details.</i>
/semi spoilers
Anyway, good and bad comments always welcome. Tell me if you have any problems with it, story wise, writing wise, whatever. Enjoy - 17 and 18 WILL be up soon. <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif'><!--endemo-->
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>Click here if you have not read the story/want to catch up</a>
Sorry this took so long, but school has started for me and I've been trying to get settled in. Now that I am, I can get back to writing this story. There's been a lot of "talking," but after the next chapter there's going to be a lot of fun in store (Depending on what you consider fun.)
semi-spoilers:
<i>Not to give away too much, but there is something I have decided on for the story. That is the consept that the bacterium alters the minds of those onboard the comprimised station. That is, if they don't have protection. Frontiersmen have built in systems for nutrient suplimentation and removal of general micro bacterials. The parasite is larger than a microscopic bacterial, so keep that in mind. Anyway, those without protection are slowly manipulated by the bacterium, if in the end don't end up becoming the kharaa themselves. Spiffy, eh? Eh... I'm working on the details.</i>
/semi spoilers
Anyway, good and bad comments always welcome. Tell me if you have any problems with it, story wise, writing wise, whatever. Enjoy - 17 and 18 WILL be up soon. <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif'><!--endemo-->
Comments
Have you thought of typing it in wordpad and then copy and paste to this forum, we wouldn't get those pop-ups then.
Good story.