My First Fan Fic
HotShot
Join Date: 2003-08-23 Member: 20137Members
Join Date: 2003-08-23 Member: 20137Members
This is my very first fan fic so yeah here it is....
"RECON TEAM ALPHA REPORT!" screamed the commander. "REPORT IN ****!" nothing but static responded to the commander's order. "Corporal Henderson, trace the communication logs of Recon Team Alpha up to the point where we lost their transmission, ASAP. I want to know how I could lose a five man recon team in less than 30 seconds." "Yessir," replied Henderson. Ten minutes passed...."I found them sir," said Henderson. "Good, patch it through to my screen." said the commander. "Yessir," replied Henderson. A small message board popped up on the commanders screen. He scrolled down the comm log and found the latest transmission from the team.
<b><BEGIN TRANSMISSION></b>
<i>Riker:</i> This is Recon Team Alpha, now entering Block C.
<i>HQ:</i> Roger that, report back when you've finished searching the block.
<i>Riker:</i> WILCO
<i>Sten:</i> I got a bad feeling about this Luitenant.
<i>Riker:</i> You have a bad feeling about everything Sten so just shutup.
<i>Phiszman:</i> I agree with Sten LT. Somethings not right.
<i>Sten:</i> OMG!! WHERES FEG??
<i>Feg:</i> Im right here you little baby.
<i>Sten:</i> Jesus, i thought you got lost.
<i>Feg:</i> Im not as stupid as you Sten so dont you worry your little...
<i>Riker:</i> Cut the chatter, we have a mission to do.
<i>Feg, Sten:</i> Yessir
<i>Riker:</i> Wheres Kane?
<i>Feg:</i> I dont know sir he was right behind me when we were in.....
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>Riker: WTH
<i>Kane:</i> OMG! THEY'RE EVERYWHERE! I NEED HELP NOW!! NOW!!
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<i>Riker:</i> KANE, WHAT IS YOUR POSITION!
<i>Kane:</i> IN CORRIDOR C! OMG!
<i><u>-Kane Offline-</u></i>
<i>Riker:</i> SH*T, SH*T, SH*T!
<b>HQ:</b> Recon Team Alpha whats your status
<i>Riker:</i> We have one man down and.....
<i>Phiszman:</i> What was that?
<i>Sten:</i> OMG MAN THATS IT, GAME OVER MAN, GAME OVER!
<i>Feg:</i> SHUTUP STEN!
<i>Sten: </i>THERE IT IS!!
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<i>Riker: </i>HOLD YOUR FIRE MARINE! Short controlled bursts we need all the ammo we can get. HQ is busy giving ammo and medpacks to the Assault Teams. So dont expect them to drop any for us.
<i>Sten:</i> Yessir, sorry sir.
<b>HQ:</b> I say again what is your status Team Alpha?
<i>Riker:</i> We...
<i>Feg:</i> I see them sir....
<i>Riker:</i> We'll get back to you on that.
<b>HQ:</b> What was that?
<i><b>[I][B]-gunfire-</b></i>
-gunfire-[/B][/I]
<i>Riker:</i> REMEMBER SHORT CONTROLLED BURSTS!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> HAHAHA! GOT ONE!
<i>Phiszman:</i> Watch your six Sten!
<i>Sten:</i> OMG!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<b><u>-Sten Offline-</u></b>
<i>Phiszman:</i> SH*T!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<b><u>-Phiszman Offline-</u></b>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> PHISZMAN!!! PHISZMAN!!!
<i>Riker:</i> GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Riker:</i> Feg drop your mines and follow me!
<i>Feg:</i> Yessir!
<i><b>-mine placed-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-mine triggered-</b></i>
<i>Riker: </i>Hurry in here!
<i><b>-Door G in Block C accesed-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg: </i>HOLY SH*T SIR! WHERE DID THEY ALL COME FROM
<i>Riker:</i> I dont know but keep your eye on that door and at that vent. You got me Marine?
<i>Feg:</i> Yessir
<i>Riker:</i> HQ this is Recon Team Alpha do you read me?
<i>Riker:</i> I say again this is Recon Team Alpha do you read HQ?
<i>Riker:</i> ****!
<i>Feg:</i> THEY'RE COMMING THROUGH THE VENT!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Riker:</i> COME GET SOME!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> THE DOOR!! AAHHH!!
<b><u>-Feg Offline-</u></b>
<i>Riker:</i> FEG!!
<b><u>-Riker Offline-</u></b>
<b><END TRANSMISSION></b>
"How could this happen? Intel showed this area wasn't heavily infested."
"Heavy Assualt Team Delta, report" said the commander.
"This is HA Team Delta, watcha got for us?"
"A search and destroy mission. Head towards Block C and kill any and all Kharaa infestation there."
"Isn't Recon Team Alpha there sir?"
"Not any more..... if you happen to find any bodies from Team Alpha. Retrieve them...... No one gets left behind."
"Yessir"
To be continued..... if you like it.
"RECON TEAM ALPHA REPORT!" screamed the commander. "REPORT IN ****!" nothing but static responded to the commander's order. "Corporal Henderson, trace the communication logs of Recon Team Alpha up to the point where we lost their transmission, ASAP. I want to know how I could lose a five man recon team in less than 30 seconds." "Yessir," replied Henderson. Ten minutes passed...."I found them sir," said Henderson. "Good, patch it through to my screen." said the commander. "Yessir," replied Henderson. A small message board popped up on the commanders screen. He scrolled down the comm log and found the latest transmission from the team.
<b><BEGIN TRANSMISSION></b>
<i>Riker:</i> This is Recon Team Alpha, now entering Block C.
<i>HQ:</i> Roger that, report back when you've finished searching the block.
<i>Riker:</i> WILCO
<i>Sten:</i> I got a bad feeling about this Luitenant.
<i>Riker:</i> You have a bad feeling about everything Sten so just shutup.
<i>Phiszman:</i> I agree with Sten LT. Somethings not right.
<i>Sten:</i> OMG!! WHERES FEG??
<i>Feg:</i> Im right here you little baby.
<i>Sten:</i> Jesus, i thought you got lost.
<i>Feg:</i> Im not as stupid as you Sten so dont you worry your little...
<i>Riker:</i> Cut the chatter, we have a mission to do.
<i>Feg, Sten:</i> Yessir
<i>Riker:</i> Wheres Kane?
<i>Feg:</i> I dont know sir he was right behind me when we were in.....
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>Riker: WTH
<i>Kane:</i> OMG! THEY'RE EVERYWHERE! I NEED HELP NOW!! NOW!!
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<i>Riker:</i> KANE, WHAT IS YOUR POSITION!
<i>Kane:</i> IN CORRIDOR C! OMG!
<i><u>-Kane Offline-</u></i>
<i>Riker:</i> SH*T, SH*T, SH*T!
<b>HQ:</b> Recon Team Alpha whats your status
<i>Riker:</i> We have one man down and.....
<i>Phiszman:</i> What was that?
<i>Sten:</i> OMG MAN THATS IT, GAME OVER MAN, GAME OVER!
<i>Feg:</i> SHUTUP STEN!
<i>Sten: </i>THERE IT IS!!
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<b><i>-gunfire-</i></b>
<i>Riker: </i>HOLD YOUR FIRE MARINE! Short controlled bursts we need all the ammo we can get. HQ is busy giving ammo and medpacks to the Assault Teams. So dont expect them to drop any for us.
<i>Sten:</i> Yessir, sorry sir.
<b>HQ:</b> I say again what is your status Team Alpha?
<i>Riker:</i> We...
<i>Feg:</i> I see them sir....
<i>Riker:</i> We'll get back to you on that.
<b>HQ:</b> What was that?
<i><b>[I][B]-gunfire-</b></i>
-gunfire-[/B][/I]
<i>Riker:</i> REMEMBER SHORT CONTROLLED BURSTS!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> HAHAHA! GOT ONE!
<i>Phiszman:</i> Watch your six Sten!
<i>Sten:</i> OMG!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<b><u>-Sten Offline-</u></b>
<i>Phiszman:</i> SH*T!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<b><u>-Phiszman Offline-</u></b>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> PHISZMAN!!! PHISZMAN!!!
<i>Riker:</i> GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Riker:</i> Feg drop your mines and follow me!
<i>Feg:</i> Yessir!
<i><b>-mine placed-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-mine triggered-</b></i>
<i>Riker: </i>Hurry in here!
<i><b>-Door G in Block C accesed-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg: </i>HOLY SH*T SIR! WHERE DID THEY ALL COME FROM
<i>Riker:</i> I dont know but keep your eye on that door and at that vent. You got me Marine?
<i>Feg:</i> Yessir
<i>Riker:</i> HQ this is Recon Team Alpha do you read me?
<i>Riker:</i> I say again this is Recon Team Alpha do you read HQ?
<i>Riker:</i> ****!
<i>Feg:</i> THEY'RE COMMING THROUGH THE VENT!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Riker:</i> COME GET SOME!!
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i><b>-gunfire-</b></i>
<i>Feg:</i> THE DOOR!! AAHHH!!
<b><u>-Feg Offline-</u></b>
<i>Riker:</i> FEG!!
<b><u>-Riker Offline-</u></b>
<b><END TRANSMISSION></b>
"How could this happen? Intel showed this area wasn't heavily infested."
"Heavy Assualt Team Delta, report" said the commander.
"This is HA Team Delta, watcha got for us?"
"A search and destroy mission. Head towards Block C and kill any and all Kharaa infestation there."
"Isn't Recon Team Alpha there sir?"
"Not any more..... if you happen to find any bodies from Team Alpha. Retrieve them...... No one gets left behind."
"Yessir"
To be continued..... if you like it.
Comments
Keep the Kharaa goodness coming!
"Alright ladies we got a new job to do."
"What do we got sarge?"
"Kharaa infestation that needs to be eliminated in Block C."
"Block C!?! Thats where Recon Team Alpha is right?? My brother is in there, maybe he can help us with intel. You know tell us what they have and what not. Golly, I havent seen him since we landed on this god forsaken outpost."
"Umm... Phizzy.... we aint gonna get no help from your brother..."
"Why not Sarge? He mad or somethin?"
"Naw Phizzy..... nuthin like that..... your brothers dead..."
"WHAT?!? HOW COULD HE BE DEAD?? HES THE BEST SHOT IN OUR OUTFIT!! HES THE FASTEST RUNNER IN OUR OUTFIT!! HE CANT BE DEAD, HE CANT!!"
"I'm sorry Phizzy..... he... he died valiantly..."
"NOOOOOO!! THATS IT!! WHY THE FU*K ARE WE STANDING HERE!! WE NEED TO KILL THOSE KHARAA!!"
"Now just wait a minute Phizzy we need to do a personel and weapons check. It will only take a few minutes."
"SOUND OFF PEOPLE!"
"Law, Chow here. Me and my HMG are ready to go"
"Phiszman, Jr here. Im ready to shove a grenade down the Kharaa's fu*kin throat!"
"All right Phizzy calm down man. Oh yeah, Halbert, Gregory here. HMG up and runnin."
"Krueger, Hans here. HMG ready."
"Mathis, Chris here. GL ready."
"Alright ladies, obviously I'm here..... my HMG is fine now lets move out! Phizzy, since you're so eager to kill some Kharaa you take point. Try not to wear us out, its a good 70 meters to Block C from here"
"Yessir"
Phizzy led them down a long dark corridor at a pretty fast pace. They passed a small outpost manned by two light armored marines. They waved a quick goodluck sign to the passing team and returned to watching the walls and ceilings for any sign of Kharaa. When the team was about 20 meters from Block C they heard something.
"What's that?" asked Krueger.
"I dunno but keep your eyes open. Phizzy slow down a bit." ordered the Sarge.
"Yessir" replied Phizzy although he was reluctant to slow down he eventually did.
All of a sudden Phizzy stopped, causing the rest of the column to stumble and fall.
"Do you hear that?" asked Phizzy
"Its gunfire... but how could that be?" asked Krueger.
"I dont know but whoevers out there needs our help, combat formation people, Law you got the point." said the Sarge.
"Yessir"
The group spread into a daimond formation and began to advance. As they were advancing they traveled past blood splattered walls, obviously from one of the members from Team Alpha (Kane). They stopped at a fork.
"Which way is the sound comming from?" asked Mathis
"I dunno seems to be comming from...." the Sarge was abruptly cut off by a deafaning explosion. They passed a mine a little while back in the corridor and it was set off by a skulk trying to sneak up behind the team.
"Good golly. Im thankful that mine was there cuz if it wasnt I woulda been the first one bit!" said Law with a hint of sarcasm in his voice.
"Awwww you afraid your gonna get your little asian balls bit off. dont worry they're so small that the Kharaa wont be able to findem let alone bitem!"
"Shut up Halbert we have to find out where that firefight is comming from!"
"Sorry Sarge."
"Wait! Hey Sarge you here that! That sounds like......"
(far off in the distance)
"Luietenant! Luietenant! They're comming through the southern barricade!"
"Stay frosty Phiszman! Sten! Whats your status?"
"Im hit pretty bad LT. I dont know if im gonna make it!"
"Shut up you'll make it! Phiszman how much ammo you got left?"
"20 bullets left in my LMG, 5 in my pistol."
"How bout you Sten?"
"I had a full clip in my LMG but one of those damn Kharaa took my gun!"
"It took your gun??"
"Yessir, in my opinion it seems like these guys want us alive..."
"I didnt ask for your opinion! None of that matters right now anyway! I heard a transmission from HQ. They're sending a Heavy Assault Team to our block. All we need to do is stay alive until they get here."
Phizzy heard it, they all heard it, but they didnt believe it. Everyone from Team Alpha was supposed to be dead.
the thrilling continuation comming soon....