[wip] Zerostrung

DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
ok, the story of how i found the Zerostrung....


i was wandering around the <a href='http://www.cgtalk.com' target='_blank'>CGtalk</a> forums, and somehow made it to a <a href='http://my3blk.deviantart.com/' target='_blank'>Deviant Art Users's Profile</a> i then looked around and found... <a href='http://www.deviantart.com/view/334442/' target='_blank'>This Image</a>

and then i looked around the forums, because i know brigadeir wolf was looking for names, and i saw a few good ones in there, so i went in all sneakily and all, and stole onf Sid recommended <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> thanks sid/brig

from the two above sources, i present an hour and a half's worth of work... the Zerostrung....

<img src='http://www.brotherhood-online.co.uk/delarosa/Zerostrung.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>

Comments

  • rabbityrabbity Join Date: 2003-07-02 Member: 17866Members
    the grip and trigger guard could do more work, other than that its an okay model i guess, just dont like the gun, its ugly :o
  • coilcoil Amateur pirate. Professional monkey. All pance. Join Date: 2002-04-12 Member: 424Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Agreed, grip & trigger guard need work; I also think the clip would look better if it curved as the original concept. Also, take some time and work on your smoothing groups; you can clean this up a lot with some careful work there.

    With a good skin, this could be a very cool-looking gun. (:
  • MalambisBZMalambisBZ Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9559Members
    Can you post a flat shaded pic? Those smoothing groups are messy.
  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    flat shaded, cause i haven't smoothed anything yet...
  • SidSid Corwid of the Free Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12903Members, Constellation
    Lookign Awesome, Del! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    ...Whatever happend to that old Pistol you were working on? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    its waiting to be skinned atm, unless delas skinned it already =]
  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    nah sid, it got lost in a format...

    cookie, he's (i think) not talking about the one that you meshed...


    anyway, UPDATE...
  • SidSid Corwid of the Free Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12903Members, Constellation
    Lookin' good! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • TalnoyTalnoy Join Date: 2003-01-04 Member: 11779Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    looks cool


    good job! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • BurncycleBurncycle Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9759Members, NS1 Playtester
    I think in the future, that guy should use a ruler when drawing <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Given the awkward position of the frontal trigger, I'd do a double trigger on the main grip, kind of like the Morita.

    Other than that, it's gettin there <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> keep it up
  • sportysporty Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17782Members
    the banana clip looks strange imo
    but the rest looks good
  • SidSid Corwid of the Free Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12903Members, Constellation
    It does look a little small, the maagzine does. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • DrfuzzyDrfuzzy FEW... MORE.... INCHES... Join Date: 2003-09-21 Member: 21094Members
    Lol reminds me of a melted SVD Dragunov
  • MalambisBZMalambisBZ Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9559Members
    The grip and clip should be a bit thicker.
  • Cheez1Cheez1 Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12900Members
    I think this has potential, deffenatly futuristic, and very origional (it ought to be if its from those guys)

    Keep it up.

    Man too many good models being worked on now <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • BlackPantherBlackPanther Join Date: 2002-02-11 Member: 197Members
    good art, but badly modeled imho.
    The gun has a lot more straight lines then your model shows, cuz right now, it looks like a bunch of cylinders which were twisted and extruded all around.
    Also, try and change the smooth groups for the different parts of the model.
    Look at the art pic again and see the different shades in colors. Those different shades need to have their own smoother groups. It breaks up your model a lot more which is good.

    Also, be careful near the trigger area. Don't make it too thin or it will look too fragile.
    And redo the trigger guard with boxes, not cylinders.
  • QuaunautQuaunaut The longest seven days in history... Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14759Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    I dunno. It doesn't look that good, just plainly....I probably wouldn't like the concept anyway, it just doesn't seem like my style. Then again, it ain't made for me.

    BUT! T2K ain't workin. FIX IT! I WANNA GET MAH MODELS!
  • Fox_OneFox_One Join Date: 2003-01-15 Member: 12310Members
    Beware the blob.

    I'm sorry, I think it looks good too, just someone had to say it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • SWAT_PointmanSWAT_Pointman Join Date: 2003-10-05 Member: 21458Members
    Sorry to say but you would catch me dead using this model <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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