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kyliegirl

<div class="IPBDescription">ns fan fic story</div> Yes the planet is Bast in the story ok! i dont care if you say bast is a ship, i made up a planet bast <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> so there <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> hehe..

anyways i wrote this story, I aint bothered to proof read it really and I wrote it due to boredom. but anywhos, its a bloody long story, and i duno how but I managed to write it all straight outa the top of my head. If ya end up finish reading it, tell me whatchya think <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->


<b>UPDATE</b>

I have finally proof read and made a web page for the story along with a picture for every chapter. so go ahead and check it out. enjoy the pics and the story. ive fixed hopefully all spelling mistakes.

<a href='http://www.opticpower.com/kylie/story/' target='_blank'>CLICK ME!!!!!!</a>

lerky

i really love that story!! Scythe is soo cute i love his personality, with a care in the world. and lerkys <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::lerk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/lerk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='lerk.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::lerk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/lerk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='lerk.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::lerk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/lerk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='lerk.gif'><!--endemo--> w00t
are you going to write a follow up!?!

Fury

omg that story ams teh win!

more!!! WE DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!! <!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif'><!--endemo-->

SkinnY

i clicked the link, and was like "hey, it aint so long" till i saw the scrollbar in the bottom :/

so this might take me some time to read, but if its as great as your pictures it'll be a joy to read <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

kyliegirl

lol i shouldve said its 10 chapters long <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

i hope you know how to word wrap in word pad or note pad. or open it in word.

either way hope ya enjoy. I dont think ill write a follow up, as this was done over boredom. but if i think of another story ill be sure to write it out.

Bill_Door

I have to say this, while it isn't my favorite fanfic, its certainally close. While its not the epic that Stravo's <a href='http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?t=4533' target='_blank'>Starcrossed</a> (note its a WIP), this was much more personal piece of fiction, with a single strong viewpoint. It works and works well.




<span style='font-size:1pt;line-height:100%'>I've posted a link to a Star Wars v Star Trek board... There goes my street cred!</span>

kyliegirl

here is the pic for the story, it was drawn when i was taking a break from writing it and i was drawing the 2 main characters of the story, so here ya go. the book cover more or less <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ^_^

there were more pics i drew from the story but they arent worth posting. though i may end up proof reading the story and fixing it up and adding pics for each chapter, thats if anyone thinks it worth the trouble . <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

RPG_Jssmfulhud

Aww, that's cute. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Bill_Door

<!--QuoteBegin--.:|AMAS|:. kyliegirl+Nov 11 2003, 06:24 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (.:|AMAS|:. kyliegirl @ Nov 11 2003, 06:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->here is the pic for the story, it was drawn when i was taking a break from writing it and i was drawing the 2 main characters of the story, so here ya go. the book cover more or less <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ^_^

there were more pics i drew from the story but they arent worth posting. though i may end up proof reading the story and fixing it up and adding pics for each chapter, thats if anyone thinks it worth the trouble . <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
Yep, its a good idea. Its worthwhile for such a good story.
The cover looks good as well.

kyliegirl

all updated links ^ up there. proof read, pics done, web layouts done.. mind you its been annoying the crap outa me trying ot get it to work, finally its all functional.

Beast

I must get around to reading this sometime. Sorry I have not already, but I am very busy at the moment <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

kyliegirl

ok well I am now writing a follow up, the 2nd part has 10 more chapters also, i have just finished chapter 7 and am moving to 8, i have started doing the art for them..


what to expect in part 2

dillens life, more about him so you understand him
more lerks
more marines
more fighting
new characters

the part 2 is the final of this story and i shall finish it very soon along with more lovely art on it ^^, one pic is tempting me to turn it into a card <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> . ah well, its part of the story ^^

That_Annoying_Kid

OMG


kylie you need to tell me these things!


I will read this whole story in class, I'm on chapter 2 right now


the artwork looks sweet, but thats to be expected

nooby

Well done. I like the story and would like to read the rest.

spinviper

Write chapter 11 and all the way to chapter 1111

Charge

OH MY GOD I LOVE IT! MUCH MORE INTERESTING THAN ANY BOOK.

Just.

Oh.

My.

God.

I.

Want.

Part.

Two.

spinviper

Status??!??

kyliegirl

status of part 2-

chapters 1-8 done,

9 and 10 going in progress when i get back next week, when i get home <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

xect

Must admit that the idea of some boy befriending a cold-blooded killer species by what seems to be human bodylanguage alone disturbs me. But then again, I didnt read all of it so it might be explained later on.

That_Annoying_Kid

nope, I'm pretty sure your left hanging

it was a good story

this story does a great job combining vivid storytelling with uber artwork

Kylie, have you posted about your story in the offical fan-fic directory?

spinviper

Kylie?<!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->

spinviper

bump?