The changing tides

Bill

<div class="IPBDescription">Part 1</div>Well, this is my second attempt at a Natural Selection fanfiction.   For the record I don't know EVERYTHING about how the NS universe works so expect some inaccuracy.  The story does feature such great things as space, skulks, space stations, marines, and what have you. The story is basically about one of the first captured specimens and what follows.  If people actually don't think it's horrible I'll write a part 2.  Anyways, here ya go:

<a href="http://www.geocities.com/depthchargehaha/changingtides" target="_blank">http://www.geocities.com/depthchargehaha/changingtides</a>

sharpsword6

Bill that wasn't bad at all. It was really good I like it a lot. My favorite part was at the end since that's where that action was. That is like a real good story because you ended right when the alien started going crazy. Heartbeating ending, I definelty think you should make a second part because I am looking totally foward to it. <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

dragonsblade

good story bill i thincks u should make others because you seem to have a nack for storys <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

Sgt_X

Not too bad. I hope you continue this.

Bill

Ding!

Part 2!  

<a href="http://www.geocities.com/depthchargehaha/changingtidespart2.html" target="_blank">http://www.geocities.com/depthchargehaha/changingtidespart2.html</a>

(warning: violence and naughty words) <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

[Edit: Quetion, would the team mind if I put a pic of the skulk for reference on the page as long as I gave credit and linked back?  I showed some of my friends but since I assumed only people who know about NS would read it I didn't bother describing it]

Sgt_X

Good job, I especialy like the part at the end. LOL <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

Edit: I better get in gear, this guys going to steal my fan base away. <!--emo&;)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'><!--endemo-->

sharpsword6

Now thats what I call a good story, both of them just are incredible. <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

Bill

And finally:

<a href="http://www.geocities.com/depthchargehaha/changingtidespart3.html" target="_blank">Part 3</a>

<!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> Hope ya liked it!

[Edit:ok I just realized there are a good deal of spelling errors, I typed it fast and late at night.  I'll probably fix it later]

Sgt_X

Ohhh, suspencful.