Some work i made

ChromeAngel

I stongly recommend a second route to and second entrance for the far left and far right hives.

Battousaix

First of all, i suck at layouts. Secondly, you cant see the storage area or the crew quarters from the powerplant because there´s a door, also, you cant shoot straightly to the hangar hive because there´s a lift......

And, i think im gonna make a new layout, or fix this one.

Battousaix

ok guys heres the fixed layout <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Scythe

I spot the perfect Lerk perch on top of those pipes in the first shot. Very nifty.

Nice look you have going on here, that layout looks very balanced. Keep it up!

--Scythe--
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TychoCelchuuu

Quite good, possible r_speed problem if you can see right through the weapon depot from the end of one of the hallways.

ChromeAngel

Uhmm... tweaked it a bit, this might work better.  I hope I haven't mangeled areas that are already done  :|

Battousaix

wow thx <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> it looks great in that way =)
and the only are done is the storage area, and i just gotta fix the place the doors are, the hangar hive and the engine room, i had the crew quarters and the marine spawn but they are sucky so im goin to build them again from scratch....

Battousaix

Ok guys, remember the dust readyroom?? now they can´t tell me anything about it <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

Terawatt_99

nice, i like it <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

JediYoshi

Bah, I kinda liked the dust readyroom idea.

Trane

well it still is the dust room.....  just cooler.  THat new layout looks very good, though having the slow lifts could or could not work out...  but thats easily editable if it doesnt work.

bob2

*shakes fist* More screenies!!!!   <!--emo&:angry:--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/mad.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':angry:'><!--endemo-->

Insane

Nice work, the new shots are looking good.  I like what you did with the readyroom.  Good thnking  <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> I would suggest trying to make it a leetle more moody, then you'll have it. A decent particle system would look good in there.