I Was Bored

CoolCookieCooks

<div class="IPBDescription">so i tried realism</div> hi guys, this is my first piece of 3d realism in cinema 4d, wud like some nice helpful feedback please <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

MeanMrMustard

looks good.
Reminded me of Star Wars....jabbas palace surroundings etc.

Very nice.

The lighthouse creates more mood. The building and light could symbolise good..which is at war with the darkness and the creatures it helps to hide away. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

Good work.

PerfectionsFlaw

Someone's skinny dipping in the picture!

Err, or is that a boat? <b>:::scratches his forhead:::</b>

CoolCookieCooks

skinnydipping <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

i forgot to texture him tho so hes grey :S

MeanMrMustard

I thought it was boat at first..

But it looks like a human figure.

RPG_Jssmfulhud

Looks good, but:

- change the color of the light to white
- give the volumetric light a bit of noise (like soft turbulence or something that you like)
- get a better texture for the landscape
- maybe add a bit more transparency and light bounce to the water

Otherwise, good work. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

(only remember that creating landscapes in C4D is not really so *whoa*. Get yourself the world creater plugin, which is more powerfull and you'll achieve much better results). <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->