Ns - The Behemoth

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  • noobynooby Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15717Members
    Congratulations on a very good story. An excellent read.
  • DestroyerDestroyer Join Date: 2003-12-21 Member: 24611Members
    cookie for YOU!

    i wish this would be stickied,it should be greatest story evar!!!!
  • raz0rraz0r Join Date: 2003-07-24 Member: 18395Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Destroyer+Feb 11 2004, 04:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Destroyer @ Feb 11 2004, 04:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> cookie for YOU! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    DAMN RIGHT
    That story rocked x10, i hope there will be many more to come.

    <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tiny.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tiny.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • CookehCookeh Join Date: 2004-02-02 Member: 25965Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Fire Eel+Feb 11 2004, 08:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Fire Eel @ Feb 11 2004, 08:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> its a common occurance known as "Relationship formed under intensive circumstances"

    No, seriously. You have heard of it don't you? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    heej.. gimme a break.. was just messing around..

    I said before i loved your story.. and i'll say it again ! your story rox!
    now the TSA can copy this brave story and make it to be thought to those little TSA-newbies !
  • SDJasonSDJason Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16841Members
    Dude... i got chills man..... best freaking story ever.....

    I swear i got chills..... woah...

    U rock man

    ~Jason
  • LD-DarkcommandoLD-Darkcommando Join Date: 2003-12-15 Member: 24418Members
    hey i think someone should make a map of the behemoth.... it would be a awsome map with a very cool background story...
  • NineteenNineteen Join Date: 2003-12-23 Member: 24701Members
    That was an amazing story


    Tell us all when u start another <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • skulk-goes-boomskulk-goes-boom Join Date: 2004-02-02 Member: 25962Members
    This story owns Harry Potter anytime <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> . But the only thing is i am not really in with those story where everyone die.
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    Thanks for the replies guys, if Behemoth does get stickied.....wow. My aim for the Behemoth at first was to reach at least 2000 views and be stickied, if you read the earlier chapters.

    Anyway, my next thing to do would be to include 'Reference Guide To The Monsters Of Behemoth'. Maybe by today, it will be done.

    After that, I would do proof reading.

    After that, I would do even more stories linked to Behemoth.

    Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.
  • DustinMichaelsDustinMichaels Join Date: 2003-12-26 Member: 24776Members
    Best story every!

    Make another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Dustin Michaels
  • FyxdFyxd Join Date: 2003-08-29 Member: 20355Members
    let the person who wanted to map it map it <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • zoobyzooby Join Date: 2003-08-26 Member: 20236Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->After that, I would do proof reading.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Good idea. You do have some random spelling mistakes here and there.

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->After that, I would do even more stories linked to Behemoth.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You put it on a seperate server. Say your own. Link it up. Done.
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
    I could add this to my site, but dont know if i want to copy it all from here. I guess everyone loves this story. If you can, make another story.
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    strange....hardly anyone is reading my reference guide to the monsters of Behemoth

    ? ?
    <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • aonomusaonomus Dedicated NS Mastermind (no need for school) Join Date: 2003-11-26 Member: 23605Members, Constellation
    woooooooooooooooooooow, that is such a map to make... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • 5c0ut-WHoR35c0ut-WHoR3 Join Date: 2003-05-14 Member: 16288Members
    Stuff the map.. someone make a movie =)
  • NineteenNineteen Join Date: 2003-12-23 Member: 24701Members
    I am <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    edited February 2004
    Hmmm, now I am concentrating on making a Platinum-Version of NS The Behemoth

    Its bascially a slightly improved version of Behemoth without all the gramer mistakes and with slightly more detail, along with a new layout.

    <span style='font-family:Arial'>Behemoth</span>

    <span style='font-family:Times'>Behemoth</span>

    <span style='font-family:Courier'>Behemoth</span>

    <span style='font-family:Impact'>Behemoth</span>

    <span style='font-family:Geneva'>Behemoth</span>

    <span style='font-family:Optima'>Behemoth</span>
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    Bump.

    P.S : You guys think I should concentrate on Nightmare or Behemoth Platinium or make a Behemoth RPG?
  • NineteenNineteen Join Date: 2003-12-23 Member: 24701Members
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
    Yeah, nightmare, depending about how long it will become...
  • KoniaXKoniaX Join Date: 2003-02-16 Member: 13641Members, Constellation
    wow..... /cry

    best story ever. <----

    you ever thought of becoming a professional writer?
  • R_A_CR_A_C Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16273Members
    WOW! I started reading at like 4:30 this afternoon and read off and on 'till now at 9:00! So much for catching up on the tons of homework I was gonna do! great story man.
  • Lt.RealnessLt.Realness Join Date: 2004-03-17 Member: 27379Members
    edited March 2004
    Hey!
    First! Nice work! Your fanfiction is great! I´m also a good story writer, but I´m a German and my storys are (mostly) in german.
    I´m currently writing on a Natural Selection fanfiction , since a couple of weeks. I´ve got 17 Pages now (in MS Word). I´m thinking about translating this story into english. But mainly I´m thinking about printing my story as a book. I don´t know, how many guys of ya are good in german :/
    Maybe, I can post a part of my story here...
    It would be nice, when u can give me some feedbacks about this...
    Now, to the writer of this story! U did a great job! really! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> go on as u did before <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    cya
    greetings from Berlin,Germany <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    thx for the replies guys. Actually, multiple people have suggested to me that I actually publish the book, but I wouldn't do it, not unless Flayra gives the 'yes'.

    Oh yeah, I 'd appreciate it if you people would read Ns The Behemoth Platinium. Afterall, it is supposed to be the improved version with more goodies.
  • Lt.RealnessLt.Realness Join Date: 2004-03-17 Member: 27379Members
    Well I think, that I will just print 10 books.
    5 are for my squad members (cuz my story is about me and my squad) and the rest hmm I think I will sell them to good friends or stuff like that...

    uhm what about my story? Is somebody interested?
  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    Just 1 thing i wonder in chap 7 when the marine got spored. Aint spores choking so you cant breath not acid that burns the flesh and armor off you or am i wrong here? Hm but the armor does go down in NS but i recall that i somewhere redd "Choking spores"
  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    Quote from the manual : "This insidious attack appears to come from nowhere, filling a volume of around 12 cubit feet with a corrosive cloud of spores. These spores appear to rot any foreign organic matter – thankfully, marine structures and turrets are unaffected"

    Now you understand?
  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    Ah ok thx.

    BTW Magnifiscent story especially loved the berzerk chap with hundreds of Kharaas, heh hmg and shotty strong fella *imagines*
  • DarkCharismaDarkCharisma Join Date: 2004-03-26 Member: 27552Members
    Okay this is the first time I read your story, and I think it's AWESOME. I'm new to these forums and to NS, so maybe someone can clear something up for me.... WHAT THE HECK IS A SCORPIAN THAT HOVERS WITHOUT FLAPPING?! Was it some sort of alien that was never implemented into NS?


    BTW, I'm not gonna shoot onos anymore; actually, I'm going to drop down on 'em with my JP and knife their heads. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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