My First Poem

TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
The cow flies north on the highway to concur
the evil lies breathless tomorrow ice cream cake
Orc clap clap funnel cake in the earth
for a better day...

Comments

  • NuketheplaceNuketheplace Join Date: 2002-09-02 Member: 1266Members
    Hrm, interesting. I might edit in some commentary once I think to understand it.
  • pardzhpardzh Join Date: 2002-10-25 Member: 1601Members
    Haha, I thought it was going to be all angsty or something.
  • QuaunautQuaunaut The longest seven days in history... Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14759Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    Alright for my next piece, as this has been stirring some controversy...

    I call this poem...

    "Untitled"

    Hey you, yes you
    Don't abuse the truth
    Manipulating mind over mass media

    Conformity to Society
    The bridge to no reality
    We hide behind invisible walls
    Not to be seen, but to be heard.

    Ka ka ka...
    the bird chirps happily around the sunset burrito.

    The end.
  • QuaunautQuaunaut The longest seven days in history... Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14759Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    Tek. You do remember me, right? Old Q? The one Evil hates(One day, I will slit mebs throat <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->)
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    edited February 2004
    my original lyrics:

    <b><span style='color:blue'>Sweet Zombie Jesus (Rotting Christ)

    Gangrenous Savior
    Come to me my children of light
    Hush do not fear
    My horrid and decomposing sight
    Hold out your cup
    Taste my flesh and drink of my blood
    Swallow down
    My blasphemy written on mud

    Your God has given me life, I simply feed on the populous
    Pray to me in the charnel, repent of your ways if carnal
    Decomposing lord and Christ, give unto me your life
    Blood stained on holy skin, Second coming of sin

    Dressed in white
    I come to spread the word of God
    Prepare to bathe
    In my river of desecrated blood
    Words spoken soft
    From my mouth of rotting spoil
    Watch me now
    As I take your life from the impure soil

    Spoken in tongues I mislead, with your blood I appease
    Resurrection from the dead, blasphemy I fill your head
    Decomposing lord and Christ, give unto me your life
    Blood stained on holy skin, Second coming of sin

    The devil wants your soul
    But I want even more
    Tempted by my ancient sin
    Zombie Jesus is coming again
    Resurrected from the holy word of the lord
    I am reborn to kill the young and old
    Listen to my soft-spoken tongue whilst I preach
    Now do not scream as your body I begin to eat

    Preaching my tongues
    I lure you in with kind and soothing tongues
    Crucified and revived
    I return hungry for the blood of Christians
    Prayers of the blind
    They wish to quicken my tortured rebirth
    Soon it come to pass
    I will be raised from the wormy dead earth

    The devil wants your soul
    But I want even more
    Tempted by my ancient sin
    Zombie Jesus is coming again
    </span></b>


    and yes the name was partialy inspired by futurama <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    Im feeling it Impy. *snaps fingers*
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    edited February 2004
    I like to Haiku.
    I'm very creative, but
    Only for three lines.
  • AngeluszAngelusz Harmonic entropist Join Date: 2003-07-10 Member: 18072Members, Forum Moderators, Constellation, NS2 Playtester
    Impy, that's freaky.

    teknical, don't become a poet. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    And so I was browsing around, and saw someone post a new topic with their awesome super dy duper poem. I will now counter that poem.

    I call this...

    "Roses are Red"

    Roses are red
    The sun is yellow
    wait, im blind now...

    The sun blinded me,
    with upmost affection
    like a rose
    but with thorns...

    Thorns of guilt
    hurt my thoughts
    on how beautiful they are...

    And when all else fails, sell the comm chair.
  • pardzhpardzh Join Date: 2002-10-25 Member: 1601Members
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
  • LastLast Join Date: 2003-10-06 Member: 21463Members
    sounds more like a rap to me, but that's cool too. You sound really emo tho, but there's nothing wrong with that, you'll just find a bunch of people who'll despise you because of that.

    impy: wow. see a doctor.
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    Let me say one thing. These poems are not jokes...jeez. =\
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    <!--QuoteBegin-TeKniKaL+Feb 3 2004, 11:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (TeKniKaL @ Feb 3 2004, 11:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Im feeling it Impy. *snaps fingers* <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    haha <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> nice

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Impy, that's freaky.
    <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    thats what i go for =o
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    edited February 2004
    damn i dont want this thred to die... so ill do my part to keep it alive
    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    rawr:



    <b><u>Necropolis</u>

    Sunken walls of decaying flesh
    Marking the paths of death
    Hollowed out graves
    Littering the putrid caves

    Existing long past the dawn of time
    Hear lies a city built on centuries of ash
    Many have clamed the walls a refuge
    All only to perish from the aftermath

    Sleeping inside its walls safety does not bring
    Buried under the centuries lies the ashes of evil
    On moonlight nights its servants rise from the ground
    Only to slay all who inhabit the rotting walls

    Walls 3 feet thick
    Dripping with serpent sh*t
    Bones draped over spikes
    Skulls mounted on pikes

    Villagers from the local town gather?
    They assemble to burn necropolis down
    But soon the shadows will be reborn
    For under the blood moon the dark king is summoned once more

    The creatures lying dormant rise
    Anger to the invaders of there catacombs
    The shadows consume the rising siege
    Under the vile king?s incantation rises an evil Legion of undead

    ?Oh Lurkers under the soil
    Eons have passed sense blood dripped from your veins
    Now arise from your darkened slumber
    Cripple the living with your plague of old
    Reclaim your crown from the severed heads of the living
    Claim your hellish Reich on the earth once more
    This I ask of you in my name?
    In the name of Lucifer?

    </b>
  • HawkeyeHawkeye Join Date: 2002-10-31 Member: 1855Members
    There once was a marine called Rocket
    Who thought he could comm and luck it.
    Well aliens got res,
    The Onos grew big,
    Comm threw up his hands and said, "**** it."
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    <!--QuoteBegin-Hawkeye+Feb 5 2004, 12:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Hawkeye @ Feb 5 2004, 12:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> There once was a marine called Rocket
    Who thought he could comm and luck it.
    Well aliens got res,
    The Onos grew big,
    Comm threw up his hands and said, "**** it." <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    haha nice =)
  • HawkeyeHawkeye Join Date: 2002-10-31 Member: 1855Members
    *takes a bow*

    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    edited February 2004
    cool i didnt know i still had this one on my computer...

    my ode to cannibal corpse songs =)

    checkit

    <span style='color:red'><b><u>Rotting Return</u>

    Gasping lungs choked with dirt
    Your eyes dripping with blood
    Digging with skeletal hands
    You free yourself from the mud

    Pail moon light illuminates your corpse
    Limbs stiffened, convulsing to walk
    Maggots left in a trail as you stumble
    Face missing, still unable to talk

    Hunger now unbearable, your search for release from the pains
    Unstoppable blood thirst, you continue to rot till nothing remains
    Skin falling off, you limp down the dark street
    Vital organs failing, you search for something living to eat

    You feel your flesh crawling with maggots, fear gripping your mind
    Rotting dead skin goes numb with rigor, your life is left behind
    Turning down the ally, you find a salivating meal
    Children playing in a park, your horrid pain they will soon feel

    Chasing the frightened victim
    Soon in your horrid grasp
    Decaying bony hands
    Ripping open the Childs past
    Opening the lifeless victim
    Digging through the gore
    Feeding on the innards
    Now you crave more

    You can feel your body rotting
    You can feel this life bleeding
    Sanity leaves, this world is fading
    Open wounds, your blood is draining

    My half decomposing brain, infected
    Lungs sink into my stomach, digested
    Thoughts linger as this cracked skull leaks
    Yearning for a fresh tomb, what I now seek

    Forcing your rigored body to run, Hungry again from the pains
    You make your way to the cemetery, Home again to lie among the remains
    Sealing yourself in the fresh earth, you feel almost whole again
    Feeling the cold dirt sustaining you, you wish for your end again

    Dreaming with the dead, you wake up blind
    Wishing for the deaths, of all mortal kind
    Eyes widen to terror, you feel the cannibal thirst return
    Back again among the living, … Rotting Return!

    Chasing the frightened victim
    Soon in your horrid grasp
    Decaying bony hands
    Ripping open the Childs past
    Opening the lifeless victim
    Digging through the gore
    Feeding on the innards
    Now you crave more

    Once again you ravage the city
    Your morbid grasp holds no mercy
    Incubated from in the grave
    Dilated soul vacant gaze

    Cannibalizing, the frightened mortals
    Gorging, on there dormant entrails
    Feeding, on unrelenting gore
    Unburied, searching for more

    Making your way to the church, you giving into the morbid urge
    Opening the door under a trail of blood, you see a human and surge
    Tearing down on the victimized flesh, you spill blood on the floor
    Face dripping with blood you turn a corner, just to find another meat wh*re

    Piling the skulls of the victims, you leave your mark in blood
    Brutally carving the lifeless bodies, erasing all sign of good
    Alter splattered in blood, you continue your morbid quest
    Spawned in the grave, eternally trapped with unrest

    Chasing the frightened victim
    Soon in your horrid grasp
    Decaying bony hands
    Ripping open the Childs past
    Opening the lifeless victim
    Digging through the gore
    Feeding on the innards
    Now you crave more...</b></span>
  • HawkeyeHawkeye Join Date: 2002-10-31 Member: 1855Members
    Oh man, that's bad ****!

    Did you make that?!
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    Looks like my turn to take this show back...I call this one

    "The Onos That Could"

    There once was a Onos named TeknikallySuckyOnos
    Who tried his best to win
    his mouse sensitivity was one
    which took him forever to spin

    Then one foggy christmas eve
    The onos saw a marine
    He charged and charged with all his might
    and did only 10 damage

    "Damn the stupid charge and leap damage is f***ed up"
    The onos would scream and shout
    Then came Impy the lerk
    And the onos ate him.

    Up jump the boogie
    the Onos finnaly did something useful
    so now you know the moral of this story
    Stay in school kids.

    The End?
  • Impy_The_LerkImpy_The_Lerk Join Date: 2003-05-24 Member: 16652Banned
    <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • TeKniKaLTeKniKaL Join Date: 2003-01-27 Member: 12802Members
    <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • HawkeyeHawkeye Join Date: 2002-10-31 Member: 1855Members
    <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tiny.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Vulgar_MenaceVulgar_Menace Join Date: 2003-10-29 Member: 22118Members
    Haiku Poetry
    Its perfect for the lazy
    I really Like it
Sign In or Register to comment.