Disengaged battlefront part1
RazorK
Join Date: 2002-08-02 Member: 1053Members
Join Date: 2002-08-02 Member: 1053Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Here weeee gooo!</div>Well... after some thought, I've decided to write my own story for NS <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> here it is:
Three years after the first confrontation of the "Unkown Beings"... Lt. Vel Dereck commands his team of 5 TSA Marines(Jack Terrance, Vick Grander, Ben Proctor, Adrian Powels, and Doran Jolinski). His group is known as R+ Unit (RiskPlus Unit). The elite of the elites, the best of the best in the TSA. Him and his men underwent 10 years of rigorous training. Their Job: Engage the hostile lifeforms quickly, Use, whats called Filtered Uranium Sulfur Gasbombs (FUSSY as they would like to call it) and capture the immobolized Lifeform (stunned from the gas) back to the nearest Testing Facility owned by United Science Corp(USC)... The job is very dangerous, But they all have managed to survive in all their missions.
Rathine Studaber, the TSA Admiral, informed the Lt. Vel and his team that there will be colonial movement that will be going through the Yamova System, where one of the alien raids have taken place. He told him of his job: "Scout and Report, use extreme prejudice force if harassed"
Two days after his mission breifing, Lt. Vel and his men enters the Pheluos Space Probe.
Doran: "Hey vel, where the hell are we going again?"
Vel: "Doran... How many times do I have to say to call me Lt. Vel, LT. VEL!!!"
Doran: "Jeez man, sorry... didn't know you were so sensitive of your name... LT VEL"
Vel: "Alright boys... I'll go over the mission again, We go in, check out the place, and report back... as simple as that ok?"
Jack: "Can't we use some Fussy's to bring some aliens back and turn them into cash?"
Vel: "No, we used them all last time remember Jack? your the one spreading that sh*t all over the place, you lucky we had level 3 armors on or our brains woulda popped out of our ears..."
Jack: "Heh oh yeah... but we did make some loot?"
Ben: "Hey Luitenant, is that the place?"
Vel(with a weak voice): "Yeah..... what a dump"
Vick: "Man I'm getting chills behind my back..."
The Team, driving their probe, carefully inspected the area where the graveyard of ships and colony ships float heavily in space... Just then, a blip went off on Vel's radar. It's similar to a distress signal.
Vel(confused): "What the hell? A hot signal in these parts? No way, aint no one been here since 20 years!"
Doran: "Whats that Vel?"
Vel: "Uh... nothing, we're gonna have a stroll in that old broken USC Colony Ship"
Jack: "Oh c'mon... Do we have to? look, no one been here for over 20 years right?"
Vel: "Lets hope so..."
The Team lands their probe near the docking station of the ship, As they landed, Vel now found over 30 distress signals from within the ship! Relunctantly, he never told his men about it...
(to be continued...)
Hope u enjoyed the first part of the story! <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
Three years after the first confrontation of the "Unkown Beings"... Lt. Vel Dereck commands his team of 5 TSA Marines(Jack Terrance, Vick Grander, Ben Proctor, Adrian Powels, and Doran Jolinski). His group is known as R+ Unit (RiskPlus Unit). The elite of the elites, the best of the best in the TSA. Him and his men underwent 10 years of rigorous training. Their Job: Engage the hostile lifeforms quickly, Use, whats called Filtered Uranium Sulfur Gasbombs (FUSSY as they would like to call it) and capture the immobolized Lifeform (stunned from the gas) back to the nearest Testing Facility owned by United Science Corp(USC)... The job is very dangerous, But they all have managed to survive in all their missions.
Rathine Studaber, the TSA Admiral, informed the Lt. Vel and his team that there will be colonial movement that will be going through the Yamova System, where one of the alien raids have taken place. He told him of his job: "Scout and Report, use extreme prejudice force if harassed"
Two days after his mission breifing, Lt. Vel and his men enters the Pheluos Space Probe.
Doran: "Hey vel, where the hell are we going again?"
Vel: "Doran... How many times do I have to say to call me Lt. Vel, LT. VEL!!!"
Doran: "Jeez man, sorry... didn't know you were so sensitive of your name... LT VEL"
Vel: "Alright boys... I'll go over the mission again, We go in, check out the place, and report back... as simple as that ok?"
Jack: "Can't we use some Fussy's to bring some aliens back and turn them into cash?"
Vel: "No, we used them all last time remember Jack? your the one spreading that sh*t all over the place, you lucky we had level 3 armors on or our brains woulda popped out of our ears..."
Jack: "Heh oh yeah... but we did make some loot?"
Ben: "Hey Luitenant, is that the place?"
Vel(with a weak voice): "Yeah..... what a dump"
Vick: "Man I'm getting chills behind my back..."
The Team, driving their probe, carefully inspected the area where the graveyard of ships and colony ships float heavily in space... Just then, a blip went off on Vel's radar. It's similar to a distress signal.
Vel(confused): "What the hell? A hot signal in these parts? No way, aint no one been here since 20 years!"
Doran: "Whats that Vel?"
Vel: "Uh... nothing, we're gonna have a stroll in that old broken USC Colony Ship"
Jack: "Oh c'mon... Do we have to? look, no one been here for over 20 years right?"
Vel: "Lets hope so..."
The Team lands their probe near the docking station of the ship, As they landed, Vel now found over 30 distress signals from within the ship! Relunctantly, he never told his men about it...
(to be continued...)
Hope u enjoyed the first part of the story! <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
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Lt. Vel and his men cautiously walk through the inner docking staging of the colony ship, They all take out their HMG's as if they are ready to be attacked... As Jack took out his life form reader, he calms down and puts his gun away.
Jack: "No signs of life here but us"
Vel: "Good, everyone, find the nearest command post"
Marines: "Yes sir!"
The marines frantically, enters the hull of the ship, a never ending maze. Vel slowly follows them as if in a trance...
Vel: "Strange... No bodies, no bones, no armor sets? If hundreds of people were killed here, you'd think we'd find some bodies or some type of items that would show people were here, as of now?"
Ben(through radio): "Sir, we received the closest command point, its in sector 3, room B"
Vel: "Good work, I'm heading there right now"
Vel, in a hurry, runs towards sector 3, as he turns towards the corner of sector 2, he hears something...
Vel(nervously): "what was that?"
Vick(confused): "What was what sir?"
Adrian: "Did you see something there Luitenant?"
Vel(relunctantly): "No there's nothing here"
Doran(suspicously): "I hope your right sir..."
Vel, finally, reached the command post and started up the command protocol on the computer. All of the security cams screens starts to flash on, one by one... The team now sees everything from sector 1 to sector 4... the rest are blacked out or broken.
Vel: Alright boys, looks like we're gonna have to get those cams back online..."
<To be continued>
MORE TO COME!
Vel, in a serious mood, heads towards the command chair, and put his head set on. He quickly activates the security system from the staging docks all the way to sector 4. The 5 marines pack up on needed items and starts to exit the command post. Vel then ordered the computer to lock the door shut.
Vel: "Alright guys, you know the whole deal, I'll follow you guys through the cams, you guys do the work... heh"
Jack: "Oh yeah Vel, thats REALLY reassuring..."
Vel: "I happen to be in your shoes a few years back before I became a luitenant damn it! I know what I'm doing"
Ben: "Alright boys, cut the chatter, we're about to enter sector 5, we don't know what the hells in these parts, so keep your gaurds up"
Jack and Ben leads the front, Vick and Adrian leads the back, while Doran (the current welder/engineer) is in the middle.
Jack: "There we go, there's one of the cams up there, Doran do your thing!"
Doran: "I'm on it"
Vick: "I'll cover"
The team are now at the corner of sector 5 near the entrance, there are 2 hallways leading diagnolly up and another going right.
Adrian: "Can't you hurry up any faster damn it?"
Doran: "Hey, this is serious work here..."
Adrian: "Just speed it up, I don't like this place..."
(Adrian hears a strange clicking sound)
Adrian(startled): "?"
Ben: "Whats wrong Adrian?"
Adrian: "I thought I heard something..."
Ben: "You must be hearing things, no one's been here for over 20 years man"
Adrian: "I'm not hearing things damn it, I know I heard something! the sound came from down this hallway"
Ben(through Radio): "hey Luitenant, grant us permission to investigate a suspicious noise east from the first sector 5 cam"
Vel: "Permission granted"
Ben: "Alright Adrian, lets see if you heard anything or not..."
Adrian: "I never said I wanted to check it out!"
Ben: "Well then, you shoulda kept your damn mouth shut!"
Ben: "Hey guys, we're checking out the hallway to the right, meet up at the command post when you're done fixing that cam alright?"
Vick: "Yeah, I copy that"
Ben and Adrian, with their weapons ready, head towards the east hallway carefully. Adrian seem to be sweating more than usual... Just then, They heard a grunt from somewhere...
Adrian: "I told you I heard something!"
Ben: "What in the hell was that?!"
Adrian: "I don't know, but it didn't sound to pleasant..."
Ben: "Keep your guard up..."
Adrian(Gulp): "Yeah..."
They start walking down the hallway... the deeper they go in, the darker it is and more noises they hear"
Adrian: "Damn... its dark as hell in here!"
Ben: "Turn on your red vision"
Adrian: "On"
Ben: "Carefull, the sounds getting louder..."
(a dark object in an instant just flew past them)
Ben: "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!"
Adrian: "I don't know, but I think we got company!!!!"
(The two sees a mass of dark things in front of them... moving about)
Ben starts shooting at the dark spots in front of him, taking down atleast 5 of them... But more keeps on coming on the way...
Ben: "Damn... There are just too many of them here!"
Adrian: "Fussy!"
Ben: "You got one?!... Jesus!! then throw one at them!"
Adrian(throwing the fussy): "Gas masks on!"
Adrian pegged the Fussy directly right at the dark objects... a direct hit! The gas slowly but surely oozes out of the canister. Ben and Adrian then runs back to the command post.
Ben(running): "Damn, we got some aliens on aboard... I knew Vel was lying to us about when he didn't hear anything back there..."
Adrian(running): "I don't care, I just wanna get out of this damn ship!!!"
Ben starts calling Vel on the radio...
Vel: "what is it?"
Ben: "We got company!... A WHOLE LOT OF THEM!"
Vel: "what?!"
Ben: "Unlock the doors!"
Vel: "Doors unlocked!"
The two reach the command post and burst into the room, everyone in the area are all confused of the sudden intrusion... Vel, expecting them, runs towards them.
Vel: "What exactly did you see?"
Adrian: "I don't know, it was dark. But we did see an army of unkown beings"
Vel: "... Looks like we're gonna have to report this to the Admiral. Men, pack up!"
The team packs up and head towards the staging docks only to find their ship battered and destroyed.
Vel: "Oh man... I think we have a problem..."
(TO BE CONTINUED)
MORE TO COME!
You should check your spelling and grammar but other than that good job!
The team runs towards the broken ship with huge bite marks on it...
Vel: "My god... What the hell happened here?"
Vick: "Looks like something took a big bite of our ship..."
Doran: "Don't ask me to fix that..."
The crew heads inside the ship to get a hold of something that is useful and not broken...
Vel: "Damn... They just ravaged both the inside and the outside! Try to find something of use right now"
Adrian: "I think the radio's working..."
Doran: "Let me take a look..."
Doran walks towards the radio comm and starts tinkering with it... he seemed determined and in 3 minutes fixed the radio comm.
Doran: "I think we can use the radio now..."
Vel: "Good, let me see"
Vel walks towards the radio and starts entering in the signals to where it is going to be sent...
Vel: "What were the wave digits to base again?"
Ben: "223-297-9838-13"
Vel: "Got it..."
Vel enters the digits in quickly and presses the enter button
::: Sending Verification Wave :::
::: Verification Wave Authorized :::
::: Receiving Wave Signal :::
::: Wave signal recieved from 223297983813 :::
::: Local Wave signal is 937861443310 :::
::: Connected to 223297983813 :::
::: Welcome to CommNet :::
Vel: "We're in!"
Vel: "Now, all I have to do is send a message to the admiral..."
::: Admiral, if you can see this message, please respond, it's very important! :::
::: Enter :::
::: Sending current message :::
::: Message sent... :::
...
...
...
::: Message recieved from connected host :::
::: Read message? Yes or No :::
::: Yes :::
::: Lt. Vel? What's going on? :::
::: We have a really bad problem right now... :::
::: What sort of problem? :::
::: Looks like we're stranded on the colony ship USC 19345 :::
::: What? HOW?! :::
::: It seems that we weren't the only ones on this ship... :::
::: Are you sure about that? :::
::: I'm positive... our ships been destroyed with huge bite marks on it... :::
::: Damn! I will be sending reinforcements and a rescue team as soon as possible! :::
::: Thank you sir! Please hurry, I don't know when these guys will attack! :::
::: I'm sorry... There we be a 1 week delay before we can reach you! Looks like the Colonial traffic isn't going well for our ships! You will have to wait until traffic clears. This is Admiral Studaber out :::
::: Connectin Closed by host :::
::: Logging off CommNet :::
::: Thank you for using our service! Have a nice day :::
Vel slowly sits back down on the chair... as if he lost all hope.
Vick: "Well? What he say?"
Vel: "He's going to send a rescue team in when the traffic from the Colonial Movement clears... he estimates 1 week for the rescue team to launch their ships..."
Jack: "WHAT?! You've got to be kidding me!!!"
Adrian: "We'll all die in here before they come!"
Vel: "Stop saying that! No ones gonna die alright?!"
Doran: "........"
Vel: "Whats the matter Doran?"
Doran: "I'm sorry if I haven't brought this up yet... When I was fixing the cams up at sector 5... The ground started to change into a slimey substance... I checked up on it on the upper hallway... it looks like the walls were closing up by itself. Somethings controlling that slime... We'll all be trapped in here if that slime spreads..."
Vel: "Great... THIS IS JUST GREAT!"
Vel: "How am I suppose to command this team when you aren't honest!"
Ben: "LIKE THE TIME WHEN YOU DIDN'T TOLD US ABOUT THE DISTRESS SIGNALS AND THE NOISES!?!?!?"
Ben suddenly grabs Vel by the throat
Ben: "I have a family back at my home... If I die, its all your fault! ALL YOUR FUALT!"
Vel: "......"
Jack: "Ben, calm down... there's nothing we can do now!"
Jack pulls Ben away from Vel. Ben angrily sits back down taking out his picture of his wife...
Vel: "He's right... It's all my fualt... we're all going to die here. I'm sorry guys... I shouldn't deserve to command...
Jack: "Cut that out Vel! Right now... we need a commander, and you're the only one with the experience! You're the only one who can work the command post!"
Vel: "....."
Vick: "yeah... without you, we wouldn't survive one bit in combat!"
Jack: "So how about it? Are we going to survive or are we going to let these aliens know that us humans are weak?!"
Vel: ".... Alright boys... Lets get started..."
Adrian: "Do we have to?..."
Vel: "Thats an order soldier!"
Adrian: "I hate your stupid psychological speeches Jack!!!!"
The team grabs all the nessecary items they need and head back to the Sector 3 Command Post... There, they strategize their plan to take out the aliens on board...
Vel: "Alright boys... its time to let these aliens know what us humans can do! Ready your HMG's, we're going to have some serious lead pounding to do!"
(TO BE CONTINUED)
MORE TO COME!!!
great job man!!! Bring us more or at least me =)!
The team, after going over their plan once more, heads out of the command post.
Vel: "Alright Doran, where did you see the slime again?"
Doran: "Near the corner between sector 4 and 5 sir..."
Vel: "You fixed the cams up on sector 5 right?"
Doran: "Yeah I brought up atleast 5 cams"
Vel: "Good.. Let me see now..."
Vel switch on the Sector 5 cams, he moves the view around and watches carefully... He spots something.
Vel: "Woah... we got a huge infestation near the fuel department"
Jack: "You'd think we can blow em up by shooting the tanks in there?"
Vel: "Nah... its too risky, you'll probably get caught in the blast."
Vel: "I have an idea... We can use a DelayBomb"
Ben: "Hmm... those kind of explosives has a timer on it right?"
Vel: "Yeah, it looks like a simple grenade, but there is a case which you can open on front of it and place the timer in"
Vick: "Now thats some cool sh*t!"
Adrian: "Hmm.. I think I have 2 Fussy's left.."
Vel: "Excellent! We can use those to hold them sh*theads off for a bit"
Vel: "Doran... I need you to build a few sentries around the corners of the sectors"
Doran: "I copy that"
Vel: "Vick, as usual, you cover Doran while he builds them"
Vick: "Roger... Looks like I'm stuck with your\ for the rest of my life, Doran..."
Vel: "Careful guys, I see some movement ahead, get your guns ready and move out!... It's time we have some fun!"
Jack: "YeeeeeHaaaaaa!"
Jack, Ben, and Adrian heads out to where the Fuel Department while Doran builds sentries for defensive purposes and Vick covers for him.
The 3 marines arrived at the Fuel Depart., they see huge amounts of slime expanding from the darkness inside the fuel room.
Adrian: "Uhhh... Who's going to go in first?"
Jack: "I went last time, so I'm out of the picture"
Ben: "How about we all go in together OK!?"
Adrian: "Yeah yeah...."
The three enters the now darkened fuel room, they turn on their red visions and power up their weapons. Just then, the door behind them has been replaced with the slime and now they are trapped in the room!
Jack: "Oh sh*t!!!"
Ben: "Damn it, we're trapped in!"
Jack: "hey, try blasting it open!"
Adrian: "Roger!"
Adrian aims at the slime blocking the entrance and starts firing a whole swarm of lead into the blockade... Everytime he would break open the slime, it would regrow back!
Adrian: "Sir, weapon has no effect!!!!"
Ben(Through radio): "Vel! We're locked in the fuel room! Its a trap! I repeat, it's a trap! We need some assistance NOW!"
Vel: "What?! Damn it!, I'll try to unlock the doors!"
Adrian: "No use sir, its covered in some strange slimey stuff!"
Vel: "Damn it! I'll try to see if I can do something!"
Jack: "Uhh guys... Not to be interrupting you but... we got some friends over here..."
Adrian and Ben looks at what Jack is pointing at... They all start to panic more as they see 4 dog-like aliens with sharp claws coming out of their legs...
Ben: "oh sh*t... those guys don't look too happy!"
Jack: "He has some nice huge claws there... *gulp*"
Adrian: "What are you guys waiting for?! FIRE!!!"
Jack: "You got it!"
The 3 starts aiming at the 4 hostile aliens and starts firing with their HMG's. They learned to concentrate fire on one alien and manage to take one down... The rest runs around the room, circling the 3 marines with super fast speed.
Jack: "Ah crap! Got any ideas Ben?"
Ben: "I say we try making friends with them?"
Jack: "No time for jokes BEN... WE.. ARE... GOING... TO DIE!
Ben: "NO we're not... They're just too fast!"
Adrian: "Oh wait... I have a Fussy!"
Jack: "What?! THROW ONE YOU IDIOT!"
Adrian: "Idiot?... you dare call me an Idiot?"
Ben & Jack: "THROW IT!!!!!!!"
Adrian: "OK!"
Adrian throws the Fussy near the area where they are circling them... The smoke oozes out slowly and the 3 marines quickly wears their gask masks. Eventually... the aliens move slower and slower until they can't move anymore. It will be 1 more hour until the aliens will be revived.
Jack: "That was a close one..."
Ben: "No kidding"
Adrian: "I say we kill them while we still can"
Jack: "Good idea!"
The 3 marines effortlessly, yet angrily, fire at the paralyzed aliens and kills them one by one.
Ben: "I'm glad that's over..."
Adrian: "Me too"
Jack: "Hey whats that over there?"
Jack suddenly points at a huge organ-like reactor pumping like a heart
Jack: "Hey.. this must be a hive!"
Adrian: "A what?"
Jack: "Its like a generator for the aliens, looks like it supplies them with this slime too..."
Ben: "You think the slime would slowly die away when we kill this thing?"
Jack: "Worth a try... Its the only way to find out if we want to get out of here alive"
Adrian: "Lets give it a go, I still have lots of ammo left, heh"
Meanwhile, Doran and Vick reaches the end of sector 5 and is now setting up their last sentry.
Doran: "Last one"
Vick: "Thank god, I'm bored, I want some action damn it!"
Doran: "Well, atleast this job doesn't get you killed!"
Vick: "What ever..."
Suddenly a small alien just jumped right infront of Vick and starts ripping into his armor! Vick falls on the floor yelling in pain. Doran starts panicking and takes out his pistol.
Vick: "AHHHH, HE'S RIPPING INTO MY SKIN! DORAN GET HIM OFF, GET HIM OFF!!!!"
Doran: "Hold still! I can't get a clear aim!"
Doran aims nervously and fires 5 shots... Luckily he fired at his direct target, and the alien is now motionless.
Doran: "Vick, Can you hear me? Vick? VICK!!!"
(TO BE CONTINUED)
MORE TO COME!
makes me wanna play NS!!!
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/me feeds cookie to RazorK!!!
<b>WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE!!!</b>
(you tought i wouldnt do it eh?)
IM YOUR #1 fan!
BTW even my cat is purring in anticipation for he next one lol!
Doran hurries over to Vick and slaps him a bit to see if he'll wake up. He checks his pulse... he's still alive. Doran calls Vel on the radio.
Doran: "Sir, Vick's wounded!"
Vel: "What? HOW!?"
Doran: "Aliens sir..."
Vel: "Damn it! Bring him over here QUICKLY, I think we got some med packs here"
Doran: "Copy that!"
Doran Carefully puts Vick over his left shoulder and walks cautiously with his pistol in his right hand. He reaches the command post in 10 minutes... Vel quickly gets off the command console and heads towards the medpacks he found.
Vel: "Lay him down on the table"
Doran: "Yes sir..."
Doran lays him down on a large brown table 13 feet away from the console.
Vel: "How did this happen? Something with huge claws must of dig deep into his armor..."
Doran: "actually, it was a small alien, and he just came out of no where..."
Vel: "Wouldn't your visors picked him up already?"
Doran: "We saw no blip on our screens..."
Vel: "Looks like these guys can evade our detection..."
Doran: "Probably... hey, his Vick going to be alright?"
Vel: "Not sure, I need more advance medicine than this to cure that poison on his chest..."
Doran: "Where are we going to get one?"
Vel: "There should be a sick bay near between sector 5 and 6, I'm not quite sure where... I'll try to find one"
Doran: "How's the other guys doing?"
Vel: "They ran into some trouble, but they took care of it"
Vel, gently rubs alcohol on Vick's chest and some type of strange chemicals to to stun the poison for 5 more hours...
Vel: "This should keep him alive long enough until we find something useful in the sick bay."
Doran: "Alright I'll go..."
Vel: "Go tell the others, I'll tell you their coordinates..."
Doran: "Alright, I'm off"
Vel: "Good luck"
Doran quickly exits the command post and went to the coordinates Vel gave him. There he meets up with the other 3 marines with a destroyed hive behind them...
Doran: "Woah... what the hell happened here"
Jack: "It got a little messy in here"
Adrian: "Yeah, but the slimes seem to be dying"
Ben: "Thats good..."
Jack: "So whats up Doran? why you here? Where's Vick"
Doran: "He's wounded and poisoned..."
Ben: "What? Thats impossible!"
Doran: "Its true... If we don't find his cure in 5 hours, he be dead..."
Adrian: "DAMN... how did this happen?"
Doran: "Well... it looks like we got some aliens that can't be detected through our visors..."
Jack: "Great... so we don't know if they're watching us now?"
Doran: "Thats right"
Ben: "So, how are we going to find his cure anyways?"
Doran: "Vel told me that there is a sick bay here between sector 5 and 6"
Adrian: "Hmm.. looks like we going into unkown territory, again"
Vel contacted the 4 through radio...
Vel: "FOUND IT!!! Its in sector 6 room 10A
Jack: "Alright.. Lets move out guys!"
The four marines head out of the fuel room and starts to walk towards the end of sector 5... As they enter sector 6, they start to see weird shape of bones and such. They also find 3 cams lined up from the entrance, corner and near room 3A.
Adrian: "What do you think made these bones?"
Jack: "... I do not want to know..."
Ben: "Hey Doran, you think you can fix those cams up?"
Doran: "Yeah, I'm on it"
Doran starts fixing the cams in sector 6, he fixes the other 2 quickly, but the last one seems to give him problems...
Doran: "Hey guys... come here"
Jack: "Whats up?"
Doran: "I don't know... this cam is weird, its moving by itself..."
Adrian: "Try to see whats inside..."
Doran: "Thats what I'm trying to do... it won't budge"
Jack: "Let me try... Obviously, this work requires muscles!"
Ben: "Shut up boney..."
Jack: "Hmph..."
Everyone backs away, as he bangs and hits the cam to break it open
Doran: "Jack... We're here to fix the cams, not racially extinct them all in this ship..."
Jack: "Shut the hell up!"
Jack returns to opening the camera... Just as he does, the cover pops open and a swarm of microscopic insect-like flyers came out of the cam, flying into Jack, and crawling towards a hole
Jack: "Jesus! I HATE BUGS!"
Adrian: "ooh... looks like someone here is afraid of little bugs! eh big muscle boy!"
Jack: "You better shut yer mouth!"
Adrian: "Make me!"
Ben: "Alright you to! Cut it out..."
Ben: "You ok Jack? You sure you don't need to be examined?"
Jack: "Nah.. I'm alright, just got shaken up a bit"
Doran: "Woah... they just ate everything inside this cam!"
Adrian: "Must have been hungry..."
Ben: "Luckily they didn't set their hunger on you Jack..."
Jack: "yeah yeah... Lucky me"
Jack: "Lets move out people... we don't have time here!"
Doran: "Alright, let me tell Vel we got some cams back online"
Doran(Through Radio): "Vel, we got 2 cams operational in sector 6, try to see if their working..."
Vel: "Yeah, they're working fine. One more thing, once you get the medicine, check the sector 4 cams, they went dead all of a sudden."
Doran: "Strange... that shouldn't happen"
Vel: "Oh yeah, and sector 9-15 cams are all operational, don't know how, but we are in luck this time."
Doran: "Alright, we're moving out now Vel"
Vel: "Good luck"
The 4 marines walks quickly down the hall of sector 6, they past by room 1-9A... They finally reach the sick bay.
Doran: "This must be the place"
Ben: "Lets check it out"
The group walks in the dark room of the sick bay... a huge 40x40 room, with 5 ceilings lights hanging by a strip of wires, flashing repeadetly in the room. The room has a eerie green to it, with chemicals and needles scattered all over the place.
Jack: "Try to turn on the light switch"
Adrian: "Not working sir..."
Ben: "Whats that over there?"
The marines walks toward an operating table with a cloth covering some kind of object underneath it... They slowly open up the cover and find a fresh dead body, with missing limbs and blood all over him.
Jack: "Oh man... this guy didn't go well..."
Ben: "Thats strange... This guy looks like he's been dead for only an hour or so."
They find other limbs and other fresh dead bodies scattered through the deeper part of the room.
Doran: "Uhh guys... this is getting creepy... How can there be be fresh bodies here if no ones been down here for 20 years?"
Ben: "Don't ask me... I'm getting alittle worried myself..."
They start to hear something... a large thumping noise. The thumping noise started to get louder and louder, the ground started to shake more as the thumping became louder...
Adrian: "What was that?!"
Jack: "EARTHQUAKE HIDE!!!"
Ben: "shut up you retard! We're in a ship, there's no earthquake!"
The thumping noise finally stop and the shaking halted... Then they here a large grunt and before they knew it... There was someone at the door...
Doran: "Thank god... the noise stopped"
Jack: "And the earthquake is over!"
Ben: "shhh... you heard that?"
Adrian: "Sounded like a grunt..."
The team finally realizes a LARGE TREMENDOUS figure blocking the door with large red gazing eyes, and smoke coming out of its nose...
Ben: "HOLY SH*T!"
Jack: "WHAT THE **** IS THAT?!?!?!"
The Large monstrosity yells out a ear cracking roar
Ben: "RUN!"
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MORE TO COME!
Great job as usual!
The 4 marines ran at the tone of Ben's command. They run into an extension of the sick bay, which is another huge 40x40 room while the Behemoth charging after them. They hide behind a table that is directing its top sideways...
Jack: "What are we going to do?"
Ben: "Hey... whats this?"
Adrian: "I don't know, but its glowing green"
Jack(through radio): "Vel, we found something... I'm putting you through my vid screen"
Vel: "Hmmm... thats a Traunt Syrome... bring it over here, maybe we can use this"
Jack: "No can do sir! There is a 10 feet monster out there!"
Vel: "Oh crap... level 5, get out of there!"
Jack: "Level wha?"
Vel: "GET OUT NOW!"
Just then, the Huge figure stopped quickly near the entrance of the room. Without hesitation, he charges at the table.
Ben: "Holy sh*t... he's coming at us!"
Jack: "How did he know?!"
Doran: "RUN!"
The four gets out of there just in time... The large beast rammed into the table... shattering it into pieces with such speed! The marines take out their weapons and starts firing while strafing towards the entrance until the beast recovers from the charge.
Ben: "Keep shooting!"
Doran: "Jack, go back to the command post and give that syrome to Vel!"
Jack: "Gotcha!"
Jack runs after shooting a bit more at the beast. He runs out the door and into the hallways and speeds down the sector.
Ben: "Reloading!"
Adrian: "Roger! Firing!"
Doran: "Get ready! He's coming!"
The monster finally recovers and charges at the entrance... It charges right past the three marines and out the entrance, right into the direction Jack was running.
Adrian: "What?"
Doran: "Don't ask... I'm confused too..."
Adrian: "Isn't that the direction Jack was running?"
Ben: "... crap, he knows!"
Meanwhile, Jack, running heavily, just arrived at the beginning of Sector 4... He rest for a moment.
Jack: "Whew... I hope the guys aren't dead yet..."
Jack: "Eh?"
Jack suddenly hears a rumbling noise... Like an army charging... He looks behind himself where the long sector hallways is... He waits to see whats coming.
Jack: "What in hell?"
Suddenly, the beast, along with what seemed hundreds of other small aliens, were charging after him!
Jack: "Oh Sh*t!!!!"
Jack quickly turns around and runs down the sector 4 hall ways... With the army of aliens gaining after him, he stops looking back and starts running his hardest. It looked like the sentries around the corner was no match for the numbers of aliens. As Jack reached the end of Sector 4, he contacts Vel on the radio.
Jack: "VEL OPEN THE DOOR!!!!!!!"
Vel: "Whats wrong?"
Jack: "OPEN THE DOOR!!!!!!"
Vel: "WHY?! Whats wrong?!"
Jack: "OPEN IT, OR I DIE... ALONG WITH THE DAMN SYROME!"
Vel: "Alright... you better have a good explanation!"
Jack: "OH, I DO!"
Jack finally reaches the command post and quickly enters the room... He quickly runs up the ladder where Vel is.
Vel: "What the hells the matter with you?!"
Jack: "Lock the doors!!!!"
Vel: "WHY?"
Jack: "DO IT! I don't have time to explain!"
Vel locks the door... and just in time, for the things that were chasing Jack are now pouding on the door...
Vel: "What the hell?!"
Jack: "I don't know... I was just going back to the command post with the syrome when we were attack... and all of a sudden, hundreds aliens started chasing me!"
Vel: "Hundreds? No way..."
Jack: "I'M NOT LYING!!!"
Vel: "Well then... that door isn't gonna hold long, and if we don't think of something... we're dead meat.
Jack: "........"
The aliens started pounding harder and harder into the door, denting it even more each time they pound... it will be a matter of time until they can get in.
(to be continued)
MORE TO COME!
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DIE ONOS DIE!
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Vel: "We gotta think of something fast!!!"
Jack: "....."
Right when hope was lost.. Vel spots something on Jack's back.
Vel: "Wait, whats that?"
Jack: "Whats what?"
Vel: "On your back"
Jack: "WHAT ABOUT MY BACK? It's not a good time to look at my back ya know?!"
Vel: "Take off your armor"
Jack: "Why?!"
Vel: "Thats an order!"
Jack confusingly took off his armor and handed it over to Vel.
Vel: "What in God's name is that?"
Vel spots little glowing insects on his armor...
Jack: "What the hell?!"
Vel: "What is this?"
Jack: "Those flies that must of ran into me, must of stucked on to me!"
Vel: "Might be the reason why everyone's after you..."
Jack: "You mean like a beacon?"
Vel: "Exactly! These things must be giving off some kind of psionic waves or noise..."
Jack: "Kill it!"
The two starts stomping on the armor... killing all the insects that was on Jack's armor. Just when the door was about to break... the pounding stopped...
Vel: "Whew... I guess I was right"
Jack: "What now...?"
Vel: "We'll see if the other guys are alright"
Vel starts calling the other marines through the radio.
Vel: "Ben you there?............ Hey Ben! Come in!"
Vel: "Adrian you read me?"
Vel: "Doran! Are you there?!"
Jack: "Damn now answer?"
Vel: "No... What could've happened?"
Jack: "Hey! The admiral sent a message!"
The two looks at the CommNet screen and found that the admiral just sent news.
Vel walks towards the CommNet Console and opens the message.
Admiral: "Vel... If you're reading this, we just sent the rescue team. They should be there at 05: 00 hours... You're coming home!(Message sent 03:43)"
Vel: "Whats the time Jack?"
Jack: "11: 00 sir"
Vel: "... They were here 6 hours ago?"
Jack: "Not likely... haven't seen them or their ship yet."
Vel: "Well there are over 20 staging docks in here..."
Jack: "... Well lets give this medicine to Vick"
Vel: "Yeah"
Jack takes the Taunt Syrome out of his belt compartment and handed it over to Vel. Vel walked towards to Vick, and starts pouring the Syrome on Vick's wound.
Vel: "Hope this works..."
Vel started wrapping bandages over Vick's wound... Vick wakes up with a nasty headache...
Vick: "Oh man... my head hurst. What happened?"
Vel: "Do you remember anything?"
Vick: "Yah, something jumped out at me and started clawing my chest while I was screaming like a baby... yah, thats about it"
Jack: "Glad to have you back"
Vel: "Alright Vick, we need to run some tests, Those alien claws can be poisonous you know? We just poured some medicine on you, so I think you'll be alright"
Vick: "Ok..."
Vel heads over to the med pack and starts taking blood samples and placed them in a glass casing. He analyzed it under the computer and found no traces of poisons found...
Vel: "Well... I guess you're lucky, not even one drop of poison in you"
Vick: "Woo hoo"
Jack: "Here, put on your armor, doesn't give you any excuse to go on vacation..."
Vick: " Damn..."
Vel: "Alright guys... The rescue team must of been in here, the others are missing, and we're all alone here..."
Jack: "Me and the others did see fresh dead bodies in the Sick bay..."
Vel: "Could you identify them?"
Jack: "No sir... they were just too... out of place, if you know what I mean"
Vel: "Alright, we'll go there and see if the guys are still in the sick bay or not"
Vick: "Lets go... I want to go home"
Vel: "Alright, we need to stick together, so I'm coming with you guys"
Jack: "Yeah, finally you'll see how it's like in our shoes"
Vel: "Whatever... Lets go"
The three walks out of the command post and starts a new search for the rescue team and their fellow teammates...
(to be continued)
MORE TO COME!
ps: Glad you kept Vel alive!
I certanly hope not your a good author...
Vel and the rest nervously enters the sector 6 hallways. The area is covered with heavy darkness and a thick smoke. They can hardly see through the smoke even with their red visions on.
Vel: "Careful, these critters might pop out of nowhere... This would be a good time for them to attack us without us noticing it."
Vick: "Duh..."
Jack: "Hey hey... look, there's the sick bay we were in before!"
Vel: "Alright, lets check out the place"
The group starts to head into the sickbay in a squad formation... They hold their weapons up high and watches the surroundings carefully.
Vick: "Looks clear"
Vel: "Good... now where did you see these dead bodies before Jack?"
Jack: "Right here... ugh, makes me wanna barf"
Vick: "Woah... I know what you mean"
Vel takes a good look at the bodies and notices that the uniform that they were wearing was the same as him and his team.
Vel: "Check this out... a TSA Emblem"
Jack: "Hey... you're right! Thats kinda weird... to see them here"
Vel: "Unless these guys are the rescue team the admiral sent us"
Vick: "Are you sure?"
Vel: "Yea, you gotta remember, the admiral sent a message about the rescue team arriving 3 hours ago..."
Jack: "Damn it... How many docks can there be in here?!"
Vel: "Maybe atleast fourty-nine... sixty at the most"
Vick: "I know this place is huge... but c'mon, that many?"
Vel: "Yeah, this was a colony ship..."
Jack: "C'mon, we gotta find the others"
The team gets up and starts walking towards the second room... They watch in horror a group of aliens, shredding into pieces, what looks to be Adrian.
Vel: "NO! ADRIAN!"
Vick: "You son of a b*tch! You're all dead!"
Vick, compulsively starts firing at the aliens and takes down two of them... the other two starts running into the vents of the room. The group runs towards to what was left of Adrian...
Jack: "Damn it! Those Bast*rds!"
Vick: "I'll KILL THEM ALL!"
Vel: "Calm down... There's nothing we can do... for now"
Vick: "But.. I just can't believe he's dead, been with us for 14 years..."
Vel: "Yea, It pisses me off to, but you gotta keep yourself cool, its a part of being a Marine... now grab his DogTag and lets find the others..."
Jack: "Yeah... (Grabbing and holding Adrian's DogTag Tightly)... Lets go"
The three sadly walks out of sick bay and starts heading out to sector 7... They find something on the floor at the end of sector 6.
Vel: "Hey... whats that? Looks like Doran's Welder"
Vick: "Yeah, it sure is... they might be close by"
Vel: "Jack, try to use the radio, maybe their in range"
Jack: "Yeah, I'll try... (Using the radio on his helmet), Doran... Ben... Can you hear me? Come in! Come in!... Nope no answer, only static"
Vel: "Damn it... well, we might need this welder, it can come in handy later"
Vick: "Hope the others aren't dead yet..."
The group finally reaches the entrance to sector 7, They cautiously start walking in the now darker halls of the ship. The group starts turning on their red visions and readying their weapons.
Vel: "Holy sh*t... wouldn't think it would be this dark in here..."
Vicl: "Ewww... what the hell is this gooey stuff on the floor?"
Jack: "Yeah man... this stuff is nasty"
Vel starts looking down...
Vel: "Oh man... the same slime from the Fuel Dep."
Jack: "Yeah you're right!'
Vick: "Guys... what the hell is that?"
Vel: "Err... Take cover! I think it spoted us!"
Jack: "Wha? its not even moving?
Vel: "Jack GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!!!!!"
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MORE TO COME!
Jack stares at the unidentified object and turns to Vel that is yelling at him.
Vel: "Hurry! Jack get down!!!"
Jack: "Its not even moving..."
Vick jumps at Jack and gets him out of the way. Just in time... a propelled projectile just skidded Vick's back.
Vick: "Wooo... that was close"
Jack: "What in God's name was that?"
Vel: "Sentry!"
Jack: "Wha? They have one too?"
Vel: "Yeah... throw me a grenade"
Jack throws one of his grenades to Vel... but the Sentry effortlessly destroyed it while the grenade was in mid-air.
Jack: "Damn it! This thing is fast!"
Vel: "Can you get a clear throw at the sentry?"
Jack: "No... it'll get me first"
Vel: "here, I'll throw you this little metal, and you throw another grenade to me at the same time"
Jack: "Got it..."
Vel throws the metal piece alittle faster than Jack, but the sentry took the bait and shot at the metal piece first.
Vel, caught the grenade.
Vel throws off the pin and readies to throw the grenade.
Vel: "Fire in the hole!"
The grenade was flung at the sentry... the sentry missed the grenade and it landed right next to it... it exploded and took out the sentry with it.
Vel: "Yeah! Got it!"
Vick: "Alright... We better be more careful... right Jack?"
Jack: "Shut up"
Vel: "Alright, lets move out"
The team head into the sector 7 deeper halls... it is pitch black and there is basically no light source. They hear something up ahead.
Jack: "Damn it.. I can't see far with the red visions..."
Vick: "Yeah.. bear with it"
Vel: "Shhhh... I hear something"
Vel heads towards a small compartment and hears breathing.
Vel: "hmm... you hear that?"
Jack: "Probably Alien scum... lets blast it"
Vick: "Hold on, lets just see whats in it first"
Vel: "Yeah, that would be best"
Vel slowly opens the compartment off the wall... and nervously awaits to see whats inside.
(to be continued due to technical issues, sorry! )
MORE TO COME!
great job! Altough I dont nessesarily like to be continued but you said because of technical problems so i forgive you! <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->