Ransom battles onos

Venmoch

<div class="IPBDescription">Rogue platoon sneak peek!</div>OK rogue platoon is a bit thinky at the moment so I thought I'd put this up because I know that some people don't like stuff that requires you to think!

Here it is <a href="http://venmoch.clanpages.com/roguepsneak1.htm" target="_blank">Ransom Battles Onos</a>

As for Rei, I'll let you formulate your own ideas on her!

Jops

I like in venmoch, nice work you really set up the enviorment and the desperation that all of the marines feel. Good job:)

DeadalouS

hehe good story... very very nice

Vecdran

Very good <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

Venmoch

Thanks all, I have another 3 chapters, just need to write them up <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->

Kuroneko

Ayanami Rei-chan!!!!!!!!


anyways, good story...me likes...skulk like too, don't ya
*growl*
shut up!!
*growl!!*
riiight, Like I'm gonna do that! HAHAH!
*chomp!*
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*chuckle*

Venmoch

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Not quite, but heavily based on her!

I was waiting for someone to notice it! I like to pay tribute to various influences in my writing, Evangelion was one of them, I based the characters look on Rei Ayanami but I also made her Character slightly different!