A Story
Demiguise
Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
Well i was bored, so i made this.
Only short i may add more.
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A story
The darkness around her was infinite. It was mind-shattering, all she remembered was walking into the room assigned to her. She heard screams, footsteps anything and everything that scared her. She glanced to her right, to her left, wondering where she could be.
Then a light, it was dim but it was still light enough for her to see her hands. She felt her mind being opened up, Knowledge filling her, making her aware. As the knowledge filled her, the light grew stronger and stronger. Then an almighty flash? everything lit up and she saw an alien. She did not know what it was, she had never seen one before. The alien turned and began walking away.
?Wait stay? she cried
?I cannot, you must go back to your world now?
She felt sleepy and fell down, not knowing what had just happened to her. Her eyes slowly opened, she heard bleeps around her.
?She?s awake? said a familiar voice
?What happened?? she said in a creaky voice
?You had an accident, you crashed into a lamp-post and were critically injured. You are lucky to be alive right now.? The voice grew more familiar
?The alien? in my dream? She gave up trying to talk and went back to sleep.
Hint: She's in a hospital
Only short i may add more.
Guess what time-period its in and you get a cookie <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
A story
The darkness around her was infinite. It was mind-shattering, all she remembered was walking into the room assigned to her. She heard screams, footsteps anything and everything that scared her. She glanced to her right, to her left, wondering where she could be.
Then a light, it was dim but it was still light enough for her to see her hands. She felt her mind being opened up, Knowledge filling her, making her aware. As the knowledge filled her, the light grew stronger and stronger. Then an almighty flash? everything lit up and she saw an alien. She did not know what it was, she had never seen one before. The alien turned and began walking away.
?Wait stay? she cried
?I cannot, you must go back to your world now?
She felt sleepy and fell down, not knowing what had just happened to her. Her eyes slowly opened, she heard bleeps around her.
?She?s awake? said a familiar voice
?What happened?? she said in a creaky voice
?You had an accident, you crashed into a lamp-post and were critically injured. You are lucky to be alive right now.? The voice grew more familiar
?The alien? in my dream? She gave up trying to talk and went back to sleep.
Hint: She's in a hospital
Comments
Good so far. More detail is necessary, though. And don't use hints... the reader should be able to imagine where the characters are.
I put the story into the Future sorta, just before the Kahraa come and attack that is what the alein was... a Gorge