Ns_sedna

victor-SDZ

<div class="IPBDescription">a new map for a new planet!</div> At first I want to tell you that I'm speak french (I'm not french), and I'm apologize for my english. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
I've begun a NS_ map for a couple of monthes. Today, I've decided to call it "ns_Sedna", the name of the 10th planet of our solar system. It isn't a definitiv name.
Here you have some screens. It will take long time to finish it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> , but I make this topic now for the map (progress/evolve?).
I hope you going to like it <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

The screens are links, for the eventual's 56k
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna1.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 1</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna2.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 2</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna3.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 3</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna4.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 4</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna5.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 5</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna6.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 6</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna7.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 7</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna8.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 8</a>
<a href='http://omasu.free.fr/ns_sedna/ns_sedna9.jpg' target='_blank'>ns_sedna 9</a>

Thank's for your comments...

Naigel

Well... it looks kinda empty... try adding in some more detail.

Thaldarin

Sedna has not officially been acclaimed a planet. I wouldn't hold your breath, as they've been tracking things like that for years, none of which had a potential planetary orbit.

Anyway back to the map, try to show them in thread, people can't be bothered to open up the links, especially if your 56K like me, loading them all up individually takes effort. I agree with past comments, very empty. Lacking contrast and colourful lighting. Would like to see something creative in that department.

Kalessin

The lighting needs a little more spicing up, but it looks like you have some solid brushwork going on there. I am very interested in that sector based door you have. I tried to implement something like that in my own map, but in the end it wouldnt work with anything more than 4 moving sections.

Keep up the good work <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Alcapwn

All of your pics remind me of DukeNukem 3D levels.... <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

The door in pic9 would be really cool....you just need to add some more random stuff like windows or broken ceiling tiles or something...make it look like something <b><i>happened</i></b> in there.... <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

victor-SDZ

Many thanks for this comments, it can really help me.
More details... good idea <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> !
For the door of 9th picture : We can discuss of it on MSN or ICQ, and perhaps I'm going to send it to you...
Interested people can add me to ICQ or MSN contacts!