Caged backstory

manah

<div class="IPBDescription">In three fruity flavours!</div><a href="http://www.planethalflife.com/manah/maps/ns_caged/story.html" target="_blank">html</a>

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hmmm ... tasty. Enjoy.

neag

A good story.

Freestyler

THats a great story that only leaves me with one question:  is the map set aboard the mining complex or the ship that took them there?

manah

Neither, it’s set aboard the 02883, the last cleanup vessel at the site of the mining colony.  Sorry if its not made clear.

Greedo

Ah ha ha ha.  That was incredible.  If you weren't pumping out such good levels, I'd seriously suggest that you write some more stuff.  I really liked the whole atmosphere you had going throughout the story.  Great job.

Rob

Very good.  Extremly well written suspense and progressing story-line.  If you have anything else you'd like to write, by all means!

manah

Thanks! Glad you all liked it ...
I was pretty nervous about posting this, I've not written any fiction for years.

Bubba

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