Alone and afraid
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Join Date: 2002-10-18 Member: 1542Members
Join Date: 2002-10-18 Member: 1542Members
<div class="IPBDescription">My first ns fan fic...</div><a href="http://www.forumplanet.com/planethalflife/topic.asp?fid=1891&tid=849837" target="_blank">Alone And Unafraid</a>
Feel Free to post critiques etc, I'm a fairly experienced writer, I enjoy critscism. Enjoy!
Feel Free to post critiques etc, I'm a fairly experienced writer, I enjoy critscism. Enjoy!
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just one thing: you might want to make it so the guy DOESN'T soil his pants. You know, if he gets into more action later it's going to be bad if the guy has .... you know.