[2id] Story ^_^
DTStrongBad
Join Date: 2003-07-20 Member: 18299Members
Join Date: 2003-07-20 Member: 18299Members
this is a small exerpt from a story i am writing.:
TSA's [2iD] Second Infantry Division has lead many campaigns to the Alpha Centauri Sector, to keep order in the galaxy. The [2iD] unit utilizes it's seasoned veterans and newly recruited marines to their fullest potential, working as 1 group, 1 body, 1 mind. Some of us have fought side by side since the Guerra de Azules Soldados(1). But that was the past, So long ago that no one hardly remembers it, we do. We are not the originals but once the core had the best it was only a matter of time before they had a record of our Nueral Scan Analysis an D.N.A. in Cry-SuS they had all they needed to develop the core [2iD] Marines once again.
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Log 1
Commander Daniel Budde II:
Fenix/ResereXion shipped out to the Alpha Centauri sector. The crew is getting prepped
for suspended animation. Weapons and Equipment have been cleared and ready
to go, munitions, communications and nano tech are in working condition. I am
making rounds of the suspended animation chambers and double checking that
everyones station is in order.I am now preparing to enter my chamber
and will be offline for the next week.
/end log
Log 2
Commander Daniel Budde II:
We are en route to the CLR Space Station, E.T.A. 7 days. We are only 30 parsecs away. Everyone's vital signs are normal.
The CLR's condition is not as well, status reports are unstable with dangerously high concentrations
of the Extra Terrestial substance and O2. At 0800 hours I will pull the boys out of suspended animation.
/end log
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Tell me what you guys think about it any suggestions, positive and negative response ok as long as you have good reasons!
-[2iD]Bill D. Hives[SgT]
TSA's [2iD] Second Infantry Division has lead many campaigns to the Alpha Centauri Sector, to keep order in the galaxy. The [2iD] unit utilizes it's seasoned veterans and newly recruited marines to their fullest potential, working as 1 group, 1 body, 1 mind. Some of us have fought side by side since the Guerra de Azules Soldados(1). But that was the past, So long ago that no one hardly remembers it, we do. We are not the originals but once the core had the best it was only a matter of time before they had a record of our Nueral Scan Analysis an D.N.A. in Cry-SuS they had all they needed to develop the core [2iD] Marines once again.
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Log 1
Commander Daniel Budde II:
Fenix/ResereXion shipped out to the Alpha Centauri sector. The crew is getting prepped
for suspended animation. Weapons and Equipment have been cleared and ready
to go, munitions, communications and nano tech are in working condition. I am
making rounds of the suspended animation chambers and double checking that
everyones station is in order.I am now preparing to enter my chamber
and will be offline for the next week.
/end log
Log 2
Commander Daniel Budde II:
We are en route to the CLR Space Station, E.T.A. 7 days. We are only 30 parsecs away. Everyone's vital signs are normal.
The CLR's condition is not as well, status reports are unstable with dangerously high concentrations
of the Extra Terrestial substance and O2. At 0800 hours I will pull the boys out of suspended animation.
/end log
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Tell me what you guys think about it any suggestions, positive and negative response ok as long as you have good reasons!
-[2iD]Bill D. Hives[SgT]