Spacestation Orion
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Join Date: 2002-09-27 Member: 1352Members
<div class="IPBDescription">ns_orion</div> Ok, After alot of struggeling I have finnaly come to a near completition of this ns_map.
Its not 100% I still have som r´s to waste and some tweaks to do. Right now Im looking for a server to test it on.Anyways I have to thank those ppl:
Toor-
Clawfinger
gvide
olleman
The layout was formally made by Driftwood- But me and T- have made some major changes.to it. Anyways remeber not complete but here are some pics:
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/ns_nya/ns_nya0000.JPEG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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Enjoy, and CRITISIZE!!
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Its not 100% I still have som r´s to waste and some tweaks to do. Right now Im looking for a server to test it on.Anyways I have to thank those ppl:
Toor-
Clawfinger
gvide
olleman
The layout was formally made by Driftwood- But me and T- have made some major changes.to it. Anyways remeber not complete but here are some pics:
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/ns_nya/ns_nya0000.JPEG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0002.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0003.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0004.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0005.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0006.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://tsa.navids.com/hosted/tailgunner/screens/ns_nya0007.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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Enjoy, and CRITISIZE!!
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Comments
This is a preet old screen, i have some vents to the right and stuff.
One problem I have though, is that your walls look like eclipse and veil. The floor grating too... and, well, the pipes. And the green lights on the walls. Everything seems taken straight out from thta other space station... which makes your map lose points. This could be fixed, I think, by a simple global texture change... nothing drastic, just take the wall_lab texture (I think that's its name) and run it through a color filter in photoshop or other image editor of your choice. I would reccomend either a blue tint, or a grey tint to go along with the feeling your lights convey.
Layoutwise-- The two lower hives seem better connected than the upper hive. It seems to me that this would make those two hives more valuble to either team than the northern hive, since from either of the lower hives, the other lower hive is easily accessable, whereas the upper hive is out in the middle of nowehre. Yes, you have vents adding extra conneectivity, but still... I'm a -little- uncomfortable with it. Playtesting would, of course, show whether I'm right or wrong in this matter.
invader Scoot: There should not be =/
For starters the walls look a lil boring in a few pics flat with next to no detail
not to mention ive spotted a few textures that need a lil alignment.
Also i agree with fieari that the pink wall_lab textures have been slightly over used and are not getting any more original. Changing the colour of it would be a bonus in originality.
Other than that the map looks good it is not to dark for the aliens or to bright for the marines keep up the work i hope to see it when its completed.
i mean nice
but more rts
ah.. yes...
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Playtest, now, on the double <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> !
Oh yeah, I said veil-esque. That's right.
But still, looks very nice.
Also one small comment The Hive shown in the screenshot has a spelling error I think it was meant to say Airconditioning
anyways changed the textureset, and fixed some lightning the r_speeds are somwhere around 4-500 and The map runs pretty good with ppl, but there is still things to add.
The vents should be retextured and moved, so they cant be reached by marines.
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thath texture change realy made it look alot cooler
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Yea CJ Lightning has alwaays been my badside of teh mapping, Im going to get the map layout ready first, then copy somethign like 1000 rmfs, and spread on cds and on the net =) (u never know) and then im going to play with lightning, test out some new textures etc, The ramps yea i know, some othr ppl complained about that too. Im going to Put a elev on soem place, and change out some ramps and put in steps instead, <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Like crackerjack said the ramp does look a bit out of place. Maybe try some stairs or a lift? Or maybe add some trim or rail on the right side?
The lay-out seems nice, althought I haven't tested your map. It's complicated enough. The design overall seems very interesting and you have nice ideas. Haven't seen RT nozzle placed on water like that before.
<b>Negative:</b>
Althought the design is good the map misses something.. Add more details. Textures are very nice now. I dunno if you meant the lighting to be that but I'd like some more different colour. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
gtg.. classes start..
Especially:
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...and...
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They look excellent. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
But all the "255 255 255"-lighting makes it look a bit gray and boring. Maybe give the lights a little blue or yellow tone.
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