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<div class="IPBDescription">Critics...</div> Constructive Criticism please.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    edited April 2004
    Ignore the size <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> I want it small, if its too small i will make it bigger.

    What do you prefer?
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    edited April 2004
    This will be the pattern behind the site by the way, and i have a completed flash header, just gotto find somewhere to host it to show you guys... and girls.
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  • OmegamanOmegaman Join Date: 2004-01-11 Member: 25239Members
    edited April 2004
    Very nice, it's easy on the eyes, with neat color schemes. A simple, efficient design.
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  • panda_de_malheureuxpanda_de_malheureux Join Date: 2003-12-26 Member: 24775Members
    i prefer the first, but dont really like grey color for the background, maybe a nice green-brown, : D it would really freshen it up
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    edited April 2004
    Ok, finished. I dont plan on any more BIG changes, other than inserting my flash heading.

    Edit i fixed Contract to CONTACT heh.
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    I'm not liking that white next on the orange strip.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    What do you recommend then?
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  • ctxctx Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4592Members
    Text needs a 1 pixel black border. White bars too blurred, orange bar too blurred as well. Other than that, okay.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    Erm... Like this? I think i prefer the old one..


    The white bars arent blurred, they are actually a gradient that made a blurred bar like effect.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    There we go, much easier to read.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Anyone know where i can upload a 4kb flash file so i can post on here?
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  • coilcoil Amateur pirate. Professional monkey. All pance. Join Date: 2002-04-12 Member: 424Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    I have to say that the fuzziness is disorienting. It makes me feel like I'm not focusing my eyes right, especially juxtaposed with the in-focus text.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    Well, its better than just the usual, flat, or beveled bar..?
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  • coilcoil Amateur pirate. Professional monkey. All pance. Join Date: 2002-04-12 Member: 424Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    <!--QuoteBegin-Dunsby+Apr 12 2004, 04:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Dunsby @ Apr 12 2004, 04:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Well, its better than just the usual, flat, or beveled bar..? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It's different, I'll give you that. Different can often be good. But I don't think this is a good different, because it makes my eyes wig out.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    What can do you suggest then mi lord?
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    Shameless Bump. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • FamFam Diaper-Wearing Dog On A Ball Join Date: 2002-02-17 Member: 222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    I couldnt figure out how to put my suggestions into words, so I just drew a pretty picture instead. I suggest more definition, ala:
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  • AbraAbra Would you kindly Join Date: 2003-08-17 Member: 19870Members
    Looks nice... BUT i don't like so much (or at all) bluring on a webpage. Thats just my opinion. The colors arent my cup of thea either.

    That is what i mean, but don't listen all too much to me, iam just one out of... a lot.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    <!--QuoteBegin-Fam+Apr 14 2004, 12:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Fam @ Apr 14 2004, 12:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I couldnt figure out how to put my suggestions into words, so I just drew a pretty picture instead. I suggest more definition, ala: <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    But Fam, thats to plain and original.
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  • FamFam Diaper-Wearing Dog On A Ball Join Date: 2002-02-17 Member: 222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    You need to make it so that users can READ your website. White text on Orange is pretty hard to read, even for people with perfect eyesight with a good font. You also need to give your eyes a distinct eyeline along the information you wish them to see. On yours, the eyes are drawn along the two white blurry lines, rather than along the menu or to the title.

    The colours work, but youve got them all blurring into one another. The font is too complicated for something as important as a menu. Your title section and body section, although seperated, have the same background color, which makes them bleed into one another.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    How do you create your effect on the bars so well? I mean, it appears to be coming out at the top and have a shadow at the bottom.
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  • FamFam Diaper-Wearing Dog On A Ball Join Date: 2002-02-17 Member: 222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Those are custom Layer Styles, although theyre just eas easy to do with gradients and overlay modes.
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    Where did you get the style from?
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