Co_rar

StorM

<div class="IPBDescription">My first 'ever' map</div> Heh. I know it aint great or anything, although alot of people play it atm

co_rar (could'nt think of anything else) is my first map, after seeing a mate make a nice readyroom, i decided to learn.

Screenshots

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Marine Spawn

<img src='http://www.xes-powered.net/storm/rar1.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

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Main hallway

<img src='http://www.xes-powered.net/storm/rar2.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

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Alien Spawn

<img src='http://www.xes-powered.net/storm/rar3.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

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Don't be too harsh <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Pheno

Nice one, looks good from screenys.

Get a host for the download and ill get it on the station server.

(hopes its the same storm i know)

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StorM

hehe yeah Pheno (=]THV[=StorM), its on same host as images,
<a href='http://www.xes-powered.net/storm/co_rar.zip' target='_blank'>Download Here</a>

Invader_Scoot

Well I found a leak in the map, it should save you from the skybox. No skybox = better map!

StorM

yeah cheers for that, i also found another one, if you look at screenshot of rines spawn, look at the edging on the left, small gap, hardly noticable.

Invader_Scoot

So fix those leaks, get rid of the sky box, and release it again! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

brute_force

Well, from the screens, I can see that your map needs more detail. The walls are completely flat and the lighting is extremely bland. Try experimenting with differently shaped walls and ceilings, add in pipes, computers, machines, etc. Also, if you aren't using texture lights already, do so. It makes the lighting look alot better, and try mixing with several colors in the same room. Light spots also help to create a certain contrast between light and dark.

Also, never release a map with a box around it, it causes the engine to render twice as much, it uses up lots of resources such as lightdata and clipnodes, and also makes the compile much longer.

Grizzly

i allready relesed a mapp named "ns_roar" ;D
hey, good first atempt <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Invader_Scoot

<!--QuoteBegin-ShdwStal+Apr 13 2004, 12:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (ShdwStal @ Apr 13 2004, 12:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Well, from the screens, I can see that your map needs more detail. The walls are completely flat and the lighting is extremely bland. Try experimenting with differently shaped walls and ceilings, add in pipes, computers, machines, etc. Also, if you aren't using texture lights already, do so. It makes the lighting look alot better, and try mixing with several colors in the same room. Light spots also help to create a certain contrast between light and dark.

Also, never release a map with a box around it, it causes the engine to render twice as much, it uses up lots of resources such as lightdata and clipnodes, and also makes the compile much longer. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
He said it was his first map...

brute_force

<!--QuoteBegin-Invader Scoot+Apr 13 2004, 07:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Invader Scoot @ Apr 13 2004, 07:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-ShdwStal+Apr 13 2004, 12:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (ShdwStal @ Apr 13 2004, 12:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Well, from the screens, I can see that your map needs more detail. The walls are completely flat and the lighting is extremely bland. Try experimenting with differently shaped walls and ceilings, add in pipes, computers, machines, etc. Also, if you aren't using texture lights already, do so. It makes the lighting look alot better, and try mixing with several colors in the same room. Light spots also help to create a certain contrast between light and dark.

Also, never release a map with a box around it, it causes the engine to render twice as much, it uses up lots of resources such as lightdata and clipnodes, and also makes the compile much longer. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
He said it was his first map... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
I know, I'm just trying to offer some advice <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Sorry if I come off harsh.

StorM

<!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo--> I made skyboxes because i just was fedup after a while of the damn leak's so it was an easy solution at the time, did'nt know the effects

Pheno

Stormy son. im editing the name of the .bsp

Just incase u release a new version

Loading it onto the server as

co_rar_b1