Another One! (concept)

manrinmanrin Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19340Awaiting Authorization
edited April 2004 in NS Customization
<div class="IPBDescription">better then my old one isent it???...</div> oi

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  • RuByRuBy Join Date: 2002-12-12 Member: 10732Members
    why the blinding pink?
  • manrinmanrin Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19340Awaiting Authorization
    is that the topic?

    btw, CUZ I FELT LIKE MAKING IT that...
  • JezpuhJezpuh Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15157Banned
    Couldn't you at least try to cut the lower pink, it not like it needed or anything.
    As for the concept, eh.. detail? Are you even trying or are you just wanting to finish concept after concept. If you put more than 10 minutes into something, changes are that you'll end up with something nicer.
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    imo the clip looks like burnt bacon, try using a straight long clip on the gun
  • SRT_RabbSRT_Rabb Join Date: 2004-01-31 Member: 25808Members
    tbh that thing looks extreamly uncomfortable lol, and a wee bit too bulky, even for a hmg
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    now that you have updated the pic, try making the front grip come out a bit, rather than go along with the flow of the edges of the gun
  • CaptainPanakaCaptainPanaka Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4718Members
    a short tip for future concepts:

    Save it as GIF or PNG! JPG is very bad for graphics because of the evil compression <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • R3CONR3CON Join Date: 2004-03-02 Member: 27048Members
    looking good BUT you need more details and not so bulky <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> but keep on concepting y?u?l get better trust me <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • ClashenClashen Join Date: 2003-08-22 Member: 20087Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-CaptainPanaka+Apr 28 2004, 08:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CaptainPanaka @ Apr 28 2004, 08:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> a short tip for future concepts:

    Save it as GIF or PNG! JPG is very bad for graphics because of the evil compression <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It looks worse when you save it as GIF in MS Paint, and i don't know if you even can save as PNG in MS Paint.
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
  • manrinmanrin Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19340Awaiting Authorization
    its jpg to save space and not all day loading for 52kb ppl....
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    52kb is nothing...
  • manrinmanrin Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19340Awaiting Authorization
    edited April 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-CoolCookieCooks+Apr 28 2004, 02:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CoolCookieCooks @ Apr 28 2004, 02:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 52kb is nothing... <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    i know
    my self i got 10 mb...

    but i know a few ppl on 52kb/S complaining all the time on not long loads cuz its not a jpg pic and so on


    Updated pic again.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-RuBy+Apr 28 2004, 11:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (RuBy @ Apr 28 2004, 11:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> why the blinding pink? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    the true question here is why not the blinding pink? <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SRT_RabbSRT_Rabb Join Date: 2004-01-31 Member: 25808Members
    you makin fun of pink? lol
  • rabbityrabbity Join Date: 2003-07-02 Member: 17866Members
    yeh its very bulky, needs to be more streamlined
  • mephmagemephmage Join Date: 2004-03-24 Member: 27514Banned
    edited April 2004
    First some advice for all the critiques out there, stop being so wasted?
    Mainly you tell the person whats bad and whats good about the model, perhaps in a nice way too?
    And ask him to make a new concept instead of modifying this one into something YOU guys want...
    And stop the god damn "why the blinding pink?".
    Thats just being an idiot, you ask polite, "May i give you an advice about the background, you might want to change it into a less brighter colour, that would be easier to look at."

    is that so hard?


    Alright, advice for the concept artist.

    Try and make the body a bit less high the next time, because a weapon is alot better when its long and slinky instead of high and bulky.

    The warhammer 40k weaponry are stupid! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    And try to include those simple details (any other detail can be added to make the weapon look a bit more advanced, but IMO, all those "cool details" can be hid behind metal plates, like on ur concept.

    Details:
    Safety thingy
    Magazine release of some kind
    Shell Ejection port (Ususally on the right side of the weapon.)

    Then there is about 100 other details that could be added, IE: slide release, slide-lock, barrelvents, heatshield, etc.


    And probably one of the most important rules, try imagine holding the weapon, would it be comfortable? Is it ergonomic enough? Would it be easy to wield? Not to heavy in the front? or the back, or too heavy at all, or too long, or too breakable?

    (That last one is easily fixed with titanium weaponry <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->)


    Edit: Take a look at this simple weapon, and you see some basic detailing.
    And some advanced, but the magazine release and the safety thingy is the two probably most important things <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Edit: Added a smaller image
  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members
    the bullets being in the open like that is a bad idea....
    *remembers ww2 disaster*
    <img src='http://en.wikipedia.org/upload/8/89/Chauchat.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
  • MelajoMelajo Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15171Members
    You mean WW1 disaster...

    Reason for that is that dust and other things can get between the rounds, increasing the possibility of jams and stuff.
  • Private_ColemanPrivate_Coleman PhD in Video Games Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7510Members
    edited April 2004
    meh. just use a transperent clip. Who said it was out in the open?
  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Sushi08023+Apr 28 2004, 08:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Sushi08023 @ Apr 28 2004, 08:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> You mean WW1 disaster...

    Reason for that is that dust and other things can get between the rounds, increasing the possibility of jams and stuff. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    bah i knew i made a mistake in there somewhere <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    well i saw it on the history channel and the mostly talk about ww2 so i just remembered ww2
  • Acid_SnakeAcid_Snake Join Date: 2003-07-29 Member: 18550Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-CaptainPanaka+Apr 28 2004, 01:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CaptainPanaka @ Apr 28 2004, 01:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> a short tip for future concepts:

    Save it as GIF or PNG! JPG is very bad for graphics because of the evil compression <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Actually....if you save it as a JPG in Photoshop, at maximum quality, with 5 passes, you can get it 99% distortion-free, and still have it be signifigantly smaller than it's BMP counterpart....
  • CaptainPanakaCaptainPanaka Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4718Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Acid-Snake+Apr 29 2004, 03:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Acid-Snake @ Apr 29 2004, 03:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Actually....if you save it as a JPG in Photoshop, at maximum quality, with 5 passes, you can get it 99% distortion-free, and still have it be signifigantly smaller than it's BMP counterpart.... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I know, but it's still very big for a JPG that you put on the web. Also PNG is the best format for these things... but it lacks of support, so GIF should be your choice for graphics <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Acid_SnakeAcid_Snake Join Date: 2003-07-29 Member: 18550Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-CaptainPanaka+Apr 29 2004, 12:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CaptainPanaka @ Apr 29 2004, 12:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I know, but it's still very big for a JPG that you put on the web. Also PNG is the best format for these things... but it lacks of support, so GIF should be your choice for graphics <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ::shrug:: ya' never had a problem scoping one of mine...have ya'? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • NottinghamNottingham Join Date: 2002-11-26 Member: 10002Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Sushi08023+Apr 29 2004, 02:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Sushi08023 @ Apr 29 2004, 02:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> You mean WW1 disaster...

    Reason for that is that dust and other things can get between the rounds, <span style='color:orange'><b>increasing the possibility of jams and stuff.</b></span> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Not very likely that you get jam in your weapon during a combat that is beeing fought more then 1 feet away from the breakfasttable.... ok bad joke
  • CaptainPanakaCaptainPanaka Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4718Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Acid-Snake+Apr 29 2004, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Acid-Snake @ Apr 29 2004, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ::shrug:: ya' never had a problem scoping one of mine...have ya'? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Nope... I got DSL, but there are still some 56kers here I think <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Acid_SnakeAcid_Snake Join Date: 2003-07-29 Member: 18550Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-CaptainPanaka+Apr 29 2004, 01:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CaptainPanaka @ Apr 29 2004, 01:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Acid-Snake+Apr 29 2004, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Acid-Snake @ Apr 29 2004, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ::shrug:: ya' never had a problem scoping one of mine...have ya'?  <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Nope... I got DSL, but there are still some 56kers here I think <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ::shrug:: i still don't think that around 300k is unreasonable...
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