Finaly Taking Time To Finish

SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
edited June 2004 in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">coming soon</div> I posted this marine a pretty long time ago and i asked if i should finish it, ppl said yes sooo... i dident do a crap until now when summer comes.

<a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=69635&hl=' target='_blank'>Old pic</a>

This is a little uppdated and i hope i will finish it soon.

Suggestions, like it or not, etc

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  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    About the back its kinds messed up because i dident get the propotions right <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    well there are some... problems with his anatomy <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    like mentioned before, his back.
    legs are ok

    but where the h4x is his neck?
    his arm seem to be a bit thin too

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  • FlufFluf Join Date: 2004-04-05 Member: 27744Members
    No Chin?
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  • BallistoBallisto Join Date: 2003-05-19 Member: 16503Members
    I'm going to be blunt, and a little mean. For all the time you've spent working on it, I think we should be seeing more.

    Most things they say quality over quantity, but in art go with quantity. Fill a sketchbook. Practice practice practice! And then quality WILL improve.

    I do like the legs though. Not quite proportioned, but the stuff on them is money.
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  • RPG_JssmfulhudRPG_Jssmfulhud Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4006Members
    It's a good start, but yes... You'll have to redo the head and back, I'm afraid... The marine is way too fat, you'll have to make him thinner, somehow...

    Imagine the spine and draw the back accordingly, not making it bulge out like that. The chest, on the other side, can be drawn like that...

    Gah... Not getting enough sleep and a headache... Terrible mix for me, that's why the text is so messed up.. *sigh*
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  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    edited June 2004
    thx for the replys everyone. Il try redo the head so it fits the back or if it dosent work il scrap it and work on something new.

    Btw i've rotated the pic so it all would be in. Think that the right foot should be on the ground like his tripping he aint supposed to walk.
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  • OmegamanOmegaman Join Date: 2004-01-11 Member: 25239Members
    He's fat. Needs a liposuction. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    Redone head and back (no more fatty) new arm and crappy pistol added (im trying to learn how to make fingers right) Thought the helmet needed some spice so i added flames. Made TSA logo infront of helmet not on the side.

    Right now im figuring where to put the right arm and what it should do and if i should try to shade it or not <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> .
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    looks like he is falling

    well its better then your last one <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    arm is still kinda... broken... tip: look at your own arms, thats the best method! for hands the same, position your fingers like your holding that pistol and try to draw it <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    I did <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    edited June 2004
    Added body armor, right arm and "reason" for tripping.

    I think this is final enjoy! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    *Story* While hunting down the last Kharaa after the destruction of their last hive.
    Pvt Jonsson heard a thump in the nearest vent. It was pretty far up to the vent so Jonsson dropped his lmg so he could jump and throw his grenade into the vent.

    Just when he triggerd the nade and was about to jump. A skulk came flying out of the vent right at him. Jonsson jumped away from the skulks fall but just to see it bounce up and come leaping at him.

    With no time to think Jonsson got his trusty home made pistol up with no thought of the activated nade in his hand...


    Maybe i should make a sequel heh.
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