Ns Gendo
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Join Date: 2004-02-16 Member: 26605Banned
Join Date: 2004-02-16 Member: 26605Banned
<div class="IPBDescription">the work in progress</div> <b>My vacation starts tomorrow. So that means im not here tomorrow but my thread is here for a long time. And suddenly something small comes like this : new map from me in work? yes but Oberon? yes oberon is soon finnished so it will turn out in a real combat map. The layout makes it combat way. But anyway my proper english is not good so i try explain on the best way.</b>
This map is very inspired by ns eclipse and ns veil together. Here you got the MS:
The map is in development a month maybye because im not here but when im back i will finnish oberon and release it like my own first real map. And this map is somewhere very after oberon is out gonna be done in near future. Well here you can see my inspired map ns gendo : marine start.
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<b>Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down. </b>
and visit my new site, well not new but remaked <a href='http://www.nz-nexus.tk' target='_blank'>Webpage</a>
This map is very inspired by ns eclipse and ns veil together. Here you got the MS:
The map is in development a month maybye because im not here but when im back i will finnish oberon and release it like my own first real map. And this map is somewhere very after oberon is out gonna be done in near future. Well here you can see my inspired map ns gendo : marine start.
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Comments!!</span>
<img src='http://www.freewebs.com/nznexus/geo1.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<b>Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down. </b>
and visit my new site, well not new but remaked <a href='http://www.nz-nexus.tk' target='_blank'>Webpage</a>
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Black magic, obviously.
And "Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down. " really got to me, man. You should be a poet. An analogy to cherish and live by.
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Oh, right! Didn't think of that.
Nice map though, I like the lighting. Looks very much like Eclipse/Veil (which was your goal) so nice work. Assuming its your work of course.
Edit: somebody needs to record all these stupid and meaningless (uh i mean insightful) things that he says... "Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down."
A) Do they even MAKE tetris machines?
B) Tetris blocks only move down.
But they build up, Up, UP!!! And then, by luck you manage to get them back down a bit. And the whole repeats itself, untill you lose... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
So in a way it aint such a stupid analogy of life;)
Back on topic.
Nice work there, you really managed to get the eclipse/veil mood. I just find the coloured lights a bit too coloured and it looks a bit weird in my opinion(especialy on the back wall of the pic).
Keep it up!!
Nice map though, I like the lighting. Looks very much like Eclipse/Veil (which was your goal) so nice work. Assuming its your work of course.
Edit: somebody needs to record all these stupid and meaningless (uh i mean insightful) things that he says... "Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down."
A) Do they even MAKE tetris machines?
B) Tetris blocks only move down. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
<b>well opps. I belived i writed in MIRC. sorry about my tetris stories. It has nothing to do with the map. The text was to IRC. I apologize. </b>
Thanks for map comments <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Nice map though, I like the lighting. Looks very much like Eclipse/Veil (which was your goal) so nice work. Assuming its your work of course.
Edit: somebody needs to record all these stupid and meaningless (uh i mean insightful) things that he says... "Life is a tetris machine. up and down, up and down."
A) Do they even MAKE tetris machines?
B) Tetris blocks only move down. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
<b>well opps. I belived i writed in MIRC. sorry about my tetris stories. It has nothing to do with the map. The text was to IRC. I apologize. </b>
Thanks for map comments <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
How the hell can you confuse forums and IRC?
Looks nice, nexus, but kinda empty feeling to it.
Looks nice, nexus, but kinda empty feeling to it. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Fair enough. It's got some good, solid geometry, but the wall_lab textures are kinda well-worn now, try and mix it up by drawing on all the NS .wads to create your own unique style.
~ DarkATi
ns_eclipse.wad
last one in the set..
"wall_lab_eclips"
is that the one your talking about sir?
Well, the good thing is that we will get rid of him tomorrow <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
The texture lighting adds to it. /me likes
This map is a start : It's gonna be beautifully conceived, atmospheric and hugely entertaining ..and should be soon when its done a - Light & Art Technology hit!
yes! dont ask me more for christ, my grammar is better nooow! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
About the map, could use something to fill up the empty floor.
This map is a start : It's gonna be beautifully conceived, atmospheric and hugely entertaining ..and should be soon when its done a - Light & Art Technology hit!
yes! dont ask me more for christ, my grammar is better nooow! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Your grammar hasn't improved the slighest bit from what I can see.
Because i was gone in 1 and ½ months i dont know how the forums changed or what is new in here. But the work never stops, i promess to all that this map will be done. During my vacation i got some special ideas how to make this a new atmospheric map with this time balanced lightning and good layout.
Well. Its allways comfortable to get home.
Details coming soon.
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The Marine Start is Done
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The Marine Start is Done <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Not too bad but I have a few comments.
KFS has requested before that people not use the Eclipse logo so find something to replace that.
The pit the CC is in could use a trim texture around the edge.
The CC appears to be floating
And I only see one entrence into MS. I suggest adding a second entrence if there isn't one already.
Not a bad start. Keep at it.
To stop that "floating" look of the cc why not put in in that that small pit in front of it? I mean it looks like that was your intended plan <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Oh and the eclipse logo has to go, I agree with KFDM there. You could alway post a topic in the artwork forum requesting a logo for your map if you are out of ideas/for some reason can't make one
Also, more spotlights and gamma and such. And yes, we've seen this before, another veil/eclipse-ish map.
Lightning needs work & Trim for hole in front of CC <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->