The Terror Of Ns
<div class="IPBDescription">A first person view of Ns</div> <b>The Terror Of Ns</b>
"It's time to move" The Commander said,
And off on our mission us soldiers tread.
We marched along with our weapons raised,
For one sight of movement and our barrels are at blase.
We moved as a pack, in rows of two,
For if you got lost they wont come back for you.
Everyone knows a marine should have no fear,
Everyone knows a marine wouldn't shed a tear.
But still that feeling sits in me strong,
That feeling when your certain something is going to go wrong.
But still I feel safe amongst the others,
To me they are family and we are all brothers.
Everything is dead silent, no one makes a sound,
Apart from our boots trodging along the ground.
Even with these heavy bags we lift,
We move so quickly we move very swift.
Suddenly I fall and hit the ground,
It hurt so much I did not make a sound.
I finally came to mind and the pain got worse,
It felt like my backside had suddenly burst.
I slowly examind it with my right parm.
But I soon looked down and was quite alarmed.
There was an unusual amount of blood dripping from my hand,
Also a small puddle which started to expand.
All of a sudden I got quite dizzy,
I couldn't think cause I felt all wizzy.
Everything was weird, everything was wak,
When suddenly my head dropped and everything went black.
To be continued...........
Do you like it so far? I'm working on the second one, it should be done soon.
<span style='color:red'><b>™®-Rusty- 2004 'This peom was worded by -Rusty- and it is ©'</b></span>
"It's time to move" The Commander said,
And off on our mission us soldiers tread.
We marched along with our weapons raised,
For one sight of movement and our barrels are at blase.
We moved as a pack, in rows of two,
For if you got lost they wont come back for you.
Everyone knows a marine should have no fear,
Everyone knows a marine wouldn't shed a tear.
But still that feeling sits in me strong,
That feeling when your certain something is going to go wrong.
But still I feel safe amongst the others,
To me they are family and we are all brothers.
Everything is dead silent, no one makes a sound,
Apart from our boots trodging along the ground.
Even with these heavy bags we lift,
We move so quickly we move very swift.
Suddenly I fall and hit the ground,
It hurt so much I did not make a sound.
I finally came to mind and the pain got worse,
It felt like my backside had suddenly burst.
I slowly examind it with my right parm.
But I soon looked down and was quite alarmed.
There was an unusual amount of blood dripping from my hand,
Also a small puddle which started to expand.
All of a sudden I got quite dizzy,
I couldn't think cause I felt all wizzy.
Everything was weird, everything was wak,
When suddenly my head dropped and everything went black.
To be continued...........
Do you like it so far? I'm working on the second one, it should be done soon.
<span style='color:red'><b>™®-Rusty- 2004 'This peom was worded by -Rusty- and it is ©'</b></span>
Comments
So I thought not many people have done it befor so i'll be a bit creative and make one <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Also look out for version 2 "The Continuation" comming out soon. It will be posted in this forum.