Femme Marine 2

girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
<div class="IPBDescription">completed!</div> Sorry about this post, I couldnt' find the option (if it exists) to change the title and subtitle in the previous post. ^^

Anywho, she's done. About 3 hours on OpenCanvas 3+ and with my Wacom tablet.
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  • Raven_NevermoreRaven_Nevermore Join Date: 2004-05-29 Member: 28996Members
    edited August 2004
    Wow!
    Great Job! She looks very realistic!
    Although the recoil from the shotty, might take off an arm...
    Excellent Work!
  • NzNexusNzNexus Join Date: 2004-02-16 Member: 26605Banned
    looks cool. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SariselSarisel .::&#39; ( O ) &#39;;:-. .-.:;&#39; ( O ) &#39;::. Join Date: 2003-07-30 Member: 18557Members, Constellation
    edited August 2004
    Very well done overall.

    The only criticism I can come up with right now is that the helmet visor seems to be a little bit too high for the helmet to be on, and a little bit too low for the helmet to be not on.

    In other words, the visor isn't positioned correctly.

    EDIT: The torso and abdoment seem to be slightly out of proportion, and the shoulders are a bit misaligned. Otherwise, not much to pick on for a 3 hour effort. Good job.
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    Woot! someone took a suggestion of mine!

    incredable so far, once it's done i think i have a new desktop....
  • antifreezeantifreeze The guy with the goods&#33; Join Date: 2003-05-12 Member: 16232Members, Constellation
    edited August 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-Raven_Nevermore+Aug 3 2004, 06:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Raven_Nevermore @ Aug 3 2004, 06:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Although the recoil from the shotty, might take off an arm... <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I dont think that she would fir it like that. Nobody would be that silly.

    <!--QuoteBegin-Mr. Headcrab+--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Mr. Headcrab)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Woot! someone took a suggestion of mine!
    incredable so far, once it's done i think i have a new desktop....<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It is done. Look at the title

    I really love these pictues of yours. They have all been very impressive so far
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    well, skin my back and call me baldy, new desktop time!
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Mr. Headcrab+Aug 3 2004, 05:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Mr. Headcrab @ Aug 3 2004, 05:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> well, skin my back and call me baldy, new desktop time! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Do you want me to make it desktop size? Because all I'd have to do is change the background a little. o-o
  • SkySky Join Date: 2004-04-23 Member: 28131Members
    mmm, shotteh....gj

    And I take it your name's Minerva?
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-5kyh16h91+Aug 3 2004, 11:25 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (5kyh16h91 @ Aug 3 2004, 11:25 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mmm, shotteh....gj

    And I take it your name's Minerva? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    yep
  • DragonMechDragonMech Join Date: 2003-09-19 Member: 21023Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
  • TheDestroyerTheDestroyer Tooobah Join Date: 2003-07-12 Member: 18123Members, Constellation
    *bows down*

    Great work!

    Now if only I had some inspiration. That, and a pencil around this &@(&ed place!
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-TheDestroyer+Aug 3 2004, 02:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (TheDestroyer @ Aug 3 2004, 02:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> *bows down*

    Great work!

    Now if only I had some inspiration. That, and a pencil around this &@(&ed place! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ^_^ Just keep a-doodling. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • MavericMaveric Join Date: 2002-08-07 Member: 1101Members
    edited August 2004
    <i>This</i> is the sort of concept work that spawns a thousand properly-proportioned player models. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    The helmet looks screwed up only because you didn't draw the rest of the head/face...
    [Armor seems a bit minimal, too...]
  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    Add a red laser beam from the ... laser... pointer... thingy. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Looks very nice btw.
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Maveric+Aug 3 2004, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Maveric @ Aug 3 2004, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <i>This</i> is the sort of concept work that spawns a thousand properly-proportioned player models. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    The helmet looks screwed up only because you didn't draw the rest of the head/face...
    [Armor seems a bit minimal, too...] <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    lol yeah. I totally forgot most of the designs on the armor, especially on the shoulder and arm guards. For now, it's just a matter if I wanna edit the picture or not.
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    premission to tweak, ma'am?
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Mr. Headcrab+Aug 4 2004, 10:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Mr. Headcrab @ Aug 4 2004, 10:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> premission to tweak, ma'am? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    permission granted, soldier.
  • DoZ3RDoZ3R Join Date: 2004-06-10 Member: 29224Members
    I like this piece, the artwork is very good. I agree that there needs to be a laser though, that would make it pretty damn cool. Good job and keep up the good work.
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    As reqested, ma'am, your "Tweaked" pic


    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SkySky Join Date: 2004-04-23 Member: 28131Members
    ooooooh ahhhhhhh
    smoooooooooke
    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    oh, and i forgot my "Remix" of the original too....
  • kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge Master Australia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    edited August 2004
    very nice. now for crits

    (yes lately ive been giving crits to people because i feel i should now so dont take offence to this im trying to help ya out here for any future pics you do)

    the straps holding the armour dont look like theyre holding it. let alone dont really look like straps. they just look like band patterns on her pants. i would suggest to make the straps look like theyre holding the armour and to give them a little darker shading to make ti look like they are over the pants.

    her face is very well done, its her chin strap which bothers me, it has no shading on it.

    the shotgun is done well. it could do with a little more detail and my only other crit is it slightly dont look like shes holding it.

    id suggest you get familiar with using layers to do pictures. it is infact alot easier than to do it on only one or two layers. even if it comes to having 60 layers for a small picture. its easier to work with and fix things up without having to delete a portion of a part your happy with.

    im not sure if you use a mouse or a tablet. but either way i know how far you can improve with either tool (i used to use a mouse for all my art. only recently been using a tablet ) .

    you are showing great progress. i hope these crits will help you to learn to pay attention to every detail and focusing on a more improved finished product. the only way to learn is to get some crits now and then from people.. im not saying im the best. im still learning. but i now feel eligble enough to give my opinions and crits to some people to help acheive what i did.

    like i said, excellent work. just use more layers etc <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> the worst thing to do is to do a whole picture on one layer'

    im not trying to hassle ya or anything. but if i never got crits for my very first ns art from some people, id never have improved. so yer <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> im doing you a favour

    infact im bloody glad theres another female artist <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> we need more. i now know 3 female artists. you me and lerky.
  • girl_tweedgirl_tweed Join Date: 2004-07-31 Member: 30267Members
    Woo very nice crit Kylie. I did catch most of what you said, and what a great eye you have!

    But I do disagree with you on using multple layers for digital painting. I prefer to do it as if it was like the real thing- on one big canvas- and constantly layer and rework the colors as I progress, working VERY loosely. It feels way better for me because then I can see the whole picture very quickly and tweak as I go along.

    I use a tablet in all digital painting I do. For coloring line work for cel-shading, I use the mouse. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Thank you so much again for that VERY good crit kylie.
  • SkySky Join Date: 2004-04-23 Member: 28131Members
    Yes, kylie does love her layers......meh.
    To each her own. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SudzzSudzz Join Date: 2003-08-01 Member: 18663Members, Constellation
    <i>Very</i> nice job. And the remixed versions are great too. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • hE4RThE4RT Join Date: 2003-10-07 Member: 21510Members
    i like the smoke effect
  • kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge Master Australia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    glad you took the crit to mind more than to offence <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    yeah i can understand the canvas style and yes it is a good feeling tho with canvas its the same. you do the bg first, then you go from the back to thr front to your finished product. which is more or less layering anyway, just flattened layering.

    myself i always go from back to front. my worst mistake in my early experience was i did the front image first and then i had no interest to do the back. but if i did the back first i paid more attention to doing all of it than just a part of it. many artists warned me that no matter how much i wanna do the front and all of it. do the back first..

    yes i love my layers lol. just makes it easier to redo things im not happy with <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    i know youd want to see what your image looks like basic and then tweaking etc but usually its best to go back to front. ie the black bg, then the smoke, then the skin, then the hair, the clothes, the armour, the weapons etc. doing them one at a time instead of all at once and fixing up after the base colours are on . <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    thats why i like layers i can put the basic colours on in dif layers so its easier to tweak etc and so i can change them .
  • CaptainPanakaCaptainPanaka Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4718Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Mr. Headcrab+Aug 4 2004, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Mr. Headcrab @ Aug 4 2004, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> As reqested, ma'am, your "Tweaked" pic


    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I'd smooth the edges on the armor a bit more. Do it and you got a winner (ns_hera, isn't it? 0.o )
  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    agreed, didnet even notice em


    and yup, Hera
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