I R Not Stoopid

BaconTheory

<div class="IPBDescription">My new test comic.</div> I know its not finished firstly. OK, so here is my first attempt at a web comic. I need some feedback so I know whether or not to complete it. f you want to write lines for me or something please let me know. OK, here it is:

RhaAL

i hate u for all the right reasons

Gliss

<!--QuoteBegin-Skidzor+Aug 16 2004, 05:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Skidzor @ Aug 16 2004, 05:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I know its not finished firstly. OK, so here is my first attempt at a web comic. I need some feedback so I know whether or not to complete it. f you want to write lines for me or something please let me know. OK, here it is:<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
What font are the speech bubbles in?

TranquilChaos

Hmmm, well, after reading it over twice, (and choking down the bile that began to accumulate in my throat) I spent 15 minutes trying to think of something good to say about it...












... it's slightly less repulsive than goatse, well done.

Crono5

That's being a little mean :X

But you might want to hold out for a better idea, this one seems...

Well, they're just people against white backgrounds, and none of 'em have any particular reason to be serious or smart...

And neither of them are serious/smart, which hurts when you're trying to make something seem silly/stupid...

All in all, to me, it seems like a newspaper comic... A tad simplistic.

Gotta love that title text, though.

Fox_One

<!--QuoteBegin-TranquilChaos+Aug 17 2004, 12:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (TranquilChaos @ Aug 17 2004, 12:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ... it's slightly less repulsive than goatse, well done. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Harsh, bro. <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/nerd-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
It's not <i>that</i> bad. Just...dumb...and...CS-ish, which doesn't have much of a good rep around here. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

TranquilChaos

Ok, maybe a little harsh, but for a webcomic to be any good at all it either has to be well-written and amusing, or extremely well-drawn, and preferrably both.
Unoriginal images and stupid fart jokes do not a funny comic make.

RhaAL

onw question, where can i obtain that terror crew for my cz, that mask looks good

SinSpawn

lol certain hardcore mod fans never like other mod fans <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

<!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> But I just hate the CS people that talk with their 1337 and the type that can not handle people better then them i.e. me, and maybealot of majority or little kids that will diss you/your familycause he thinks hes hardcore over the net.

Oh yea and the CS models that are used, where did you get that terro model? is it the CZ version? I have a short memory and can't really remember it.

P.S why does he say far not fart?

RhaAL

yes that terror is a cz model, but its reskined, and i wants it, i wants it now, TELL ME FOR THE LOVE OF GAWD! u can download cz player models now if u know where to google :\

JediYoshi

It's not reskinned at all.

CZ models originally were all just different parts as submodels, as shown in CZDL, so they're just different parts compiled together.

BaconTheory

<!--QuoteBegin-pjofsky+Aug 17 2004, 12:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (pjofsky @ Aug 17 2004, 12:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Skidzor+Aug 16 2004, 05:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Skidzor @ Aug 16 2004, 05:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I know its not finished firstly. OK, so here is my first attempt at a web comic. I need some feedback so I know whether or not to complete it. f you want to write lines for me or something please let me know. OK, here it is:<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
What font are the speech bubbles in? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Blambot Custom. You can get it for free if you look around.

Ripzaw

What we need is another counter-part for www.ctrlaltdel-online.com .... It already has a Mac one - www.applegeeks.com/index.php ... Need a linux one <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Edit - ctrl-alt-del is Microsoft one.