Post Your Haiku!
DOOManiac
Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
It's that time again
No, not for Fam's period
Post your own haiku!
Music to my ears.
Swing your arms from side to side.
Do the Mario.
DOOM 3 is out now.
Half-Life 2 is on its way.
Goodbye GPA.
If you post your own
be sure to remember this:
It's five-seven-five.
(I'll post more later)
No, not for Fam's period
Post your own haiku!
Music to my ears.
Swing your arms from side to side.
Do the Mario.
DOOM 3 is out now.
Half-Life 2 is on its way.
Goodbye GPA.
If you post your own
be sure to remember this:
It's five-seven-five.
(I'll post more later)
Comments
Do we have to remind you,
Haiku's are too hard. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
hehe, I had written a 100 link Renga with 2 other people for class(related to Haiku, exept it went round robin with people alternating 5-7-5 and 7-7), I unfortunatly seem to have lost it (aside from the first 11 links).
I am bored again,
The answer to my problem,
Playing more NS.
It seems a little too easy.
I guess it's just taste.
It Loves To Bonk Everything.
Why Are You Crazy Cat?!
Now It's Looking At Me.
Laying On My Desk, Staring.
Why Does It Bother Me?
Haiku's are just too easy,
Let's do an Epic! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
A thousand-verse long haiku...
On second thoughts, no.
You've added a syllable,
Your first line is wrong.
Back to the matter,
I think an epic sounds good,
We should at least try.
Forget these Haiku's,
I'm looking for a story,
Epic's are my love.
I thought "epic" was just one.
Well, it goes to show.
Let's ditch these tired gimmicks,
I want something new. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
invade other threads with this
haiku post are fun.
co_ unbalanced for large games,
Where is beta 5?
--Scythe--
But yet I still post here
Now I spam haiku
Gah! Haikus are hard!
Hey wait, I can invent words!
This got easier.
Noob enters forum
Doesn't use the search function
OMG NOOB USE TEH SEARCH!
That last one is pance
How many syllables is OMG?
This line is also wrong
I have spyware now
Screw internet explorer!
I download Opera
I spam pointlessly
Haiku is excuse for spam
Spam spam spam spam spam
My avatar sucks
It still has a christmas hat
I am real lazy
This is an inverse haiku
It goes 7-5-7
I need not follow your rules
It's 5-7-5 you nub...
...And sif play NS.
Thansal, that's naughty,
We can't overflow these threads,
One stop trip to locked <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Guys, some kind advice:
Watch your bloody syllables,
It's five, seven, five.
simply, think all your posts through
to make them haiku
this will actualy slow down
the rate at wich you post at.
that was not haiku
instead this becomes renga
is it not simple?
It doesn't sound very good..
But haiku's stay here.
Let me explain why:
Haiku's dont take long to write,
And it's all just spam.
I saw a noob get owzored,
It was dang funny.
And I have to go to bed.
I'll see you later.
the first part of a renga
google to know more
the second link in renga
is made by seven - seven
renga was also
writen by different people,
an old party game
they would impose certain rules
to make sure that it flowed on
masters would travel
visiting nobel houses,
officiating there
they would be given free food
ahh, what a wonderful life.
Beep Beep I'm a Jeep
SUYF AND DIE
yeah its not a haiku but its still poetry
this thread is so retarded
i should not be here