An Every Day Task?
Lt.Realness
Join Date: 2004-03-17 Member: 27379Members
Join Date: 2004-03-17 Member: 27379Members
<div class="IPBDescription">-roleplay-</div> First of all I'd like to make myself clear! Obey the rules and write normal/smart things! I don't wanna see any stupid pots who're destroying the roleplay!
This is a chaining story, so you can include yourself without much introducing yourself if you gonna write about yourself.
ps. forgive me if my posts are too long, but I'm a ff and novel writer so mostly I can't just write a few sentences *grinning*
-edit-
the discussion in the beginning isn't supposed to be the mainpart of the story. so carry on and feel free to bring it to a mission for us on a planet,spaceship,or whatever.
I marked the text where you can insert your person with italic (exept the beginning)
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<i>01:22am ES22 Simplex TSA Transport and Attack Ship</i>
Lieutenant Realness walked towards his quarter door. It opened with a little hiss and he stepped out of it. He moved down the long corridoor and greeted every Marine who greeted him. As he arrived at the cafeteria, one Officer of the neighbor squad walked towards him.
"Hey wanna join us? We're currently talkin' about the last drop we made on Sentac 7. But pay attention, there are some "important guys" sitting at the table" he said and knocked him softly on his back.
"Sure" Realness answerd and moved to the table where currently five other Officers where talking loudly. He sit down and listened to their conversation. They really talked about the drop on Sentac 7 and made it look like it was one of the easiest things ever. And honestly it really wasn't. It was a big challenge for everyone who went down there and risked his life, even for experienced Officers of the Frontiersmen.
"Hey wich squad are you from?" asked one and grinned to him.
"I'm the leader of the Roughnecks" Realness answered shortly and touched his nose for a short time.
"Ah I heard that you guys got some problems during the final phase of clearing out the last hive area on Sentac 7" he added and leaned back in his chair.
"Didn't anyone of us have that?" he answerd and stopped. "Those Xenonforms where the most impressive and scariest I've ever seen!They killed many good Marines" he went on. The Officers tryed to stay cool and laughed.
"Yay we know that some of 'em got "raped" by those Kharaa but it was their own fault. They weren't attentive enough to realize that they even gotta shot an enemy, before it's reaching you and slashing your balls off!" he said and laughed again. Realness looked at his shoulder strap and saw his badge of rank. He's an admiral.
"You don't know anything about Sentac 7 and how it was down there!" Realness answered furiously but controlled. The talking of higher Officers like the general made him upset every single time. The General looked a bit angry and twisted his mouth. "What do you mean with that Lieutenant?" he asked directly. Realness took a long breath and then answered.
"Sir, you weren't down there yourself and you are talkin' about it like it was an every day task for us! I lost three of my best men down there! And you dishonour them with talkin' like that"
The General got upset and stand up. "So you are saying that I'm a fool ya? You do that. fine!" he answered and looked him directly into his eye. Realness clenched his fist.
"The most generals and admirals like you are a bunch of cowardly politicans in uniform. You don't know anything about what it is like to be down there!" he said and raised his voice a bit.
"You're behavior is becoming worse Lieutenant! Be careful!" the other General warned him and raised his voice too.
"What has this to do with my behavior?" Realness asked directly. The General looked down to the other one.
"No no, you have to let him. He's a Frontiersmen. They first shot and then they talk" he added. Realness got more upset inside and clenched his fists much harder.
"Do you've got something to say about the Frontiersmen?" he asked him and looked into his eyes.
"Think you can hit me? Try it" the General reacted and nodded despising.
"No Sir, the Frontiersmen doesn't include a lot of stupid Marines" Realness answered. His heart started beating faster.
"So this is about ranks, right?" he began and pulled up his sleeve a bit. <i>Now the cafeteria door opened and another frontiersmen walked in. He looked at the table.</i> "Let's disregard ranks! Did anybody hear that? Rank does not count here" the general shouted around.
This is a chaining story, so you can include yourself without much introducing yourself if you gonna write about yourself.
ps. forgive me if my posts are too long, but I'm a ff and novel writer so mostly I can't just write a few sentences *grinning*
-edit-
the discussion in the beginning isn't supposed to be the mainpart of the story. so carry on and feel free to bring it to a mission for us on a planet,spaceship,or whatever.
I marked the text where you can insert your person with italic (exept the beginning)
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<i>01:22am ES22 Simplex TSA Transport and Attack Ship</i>
Lieutenant Realness walked towards his quarter door. It opened with a little hiss and he stepped out of it. He moved down the long corridoor and greeted every Marine who greeted him. As he arrived at the cafeteria, one Officer of the neighbor squad walked towards him.
"Hey wanna join us? We're currently talkin' about the last drop we made on Sentac 7. But pay attention, there are some "important guys" sitting at the table" he said and knocked him softly on his back.
"Sure" Realness answerd and moved to the table where currently five other Officers where talking loudly. He sit down and listened to their conversation. They really talked about the drop on Sentac 7 and made it look like it was one of the easiest things ever. And honestly it really wasn't. It was a big challenge for everyone who went down there and risked his life, even for experienced Officers of the Frontiersmen.
"Hey wich squad are you from?" asked one and grinned to him.
"I'm the leader of the Roughnecks" Realness answered shortly and touched his nose for a short time.
"Ah I heard that you guys got some problems during the final phase of clearing out the last hive area on Sentac 7" he added and leaned back in his chair.
"Didn't anyone of us have that?" he answerd and stopped. "Those Xenonforms where the most impressive and scariest I've ever seen!They killed many good Marines" he went on. The Officers tryed to stay cool and laughed.
"Yay we know that some of 'em got "raped" by those Kharaa but it was their own fault. They weren't attentive enough to realize that they even gotta shot an enemy, before it's reaching you and slashing your balls off!" he said and laughed again. Realness looked at his shoulder strap and saw his badge of rank. He's an admiral.
"You don't know anything about Sentac 7 and how it was down there!" Realness answered furiously but controlled. The talking of higher Officers like the general made him upset every single time. The General looked a bit angry and twisted his mouth. "What do you mean with that Lieutenant?" he asked directly. Realness took a long breath and then answered.
"Sir, you weren't down there yourself and you are talkin' about it like it was an every day task for us! I lost three of my best men down there! And you dishonour them with talkin' like that"
The General got upset and stand up. "So you are saying that I'm a fool ya? You do that. fine!" he answered and looked him directly into his eye. Realness clenched his fist.
"The most generals and admirals like you are a bunch of cowardly politicans in uniform. You don't know anything about what it is like to be down there!" he said and raised his voice a bit.
"You're behavior is becoming worse Lieutenant! Be careful!" the other General warned him and raised his voice too.
"What has this to do with my behavior?" Realness asked directly. The General looked down to the other one.
"No no, you have to let him. He's a Frontiersmen. They first shot and then they talk" he added. Realness got more upset inside and clenched his fists much harder.
"Do you've got something to say about the Frontiersmen?" he asked him and looked into his eyes.
"Think you can hit me? Try it" the General reacted and nodded despising.
"No Sir, the Frontiersmen doesn't include a lot of stupid Marines" Realness answered. His heart started beating faster.
"So this is about ranks, right?" he began and pulled up his sleeve a bit. <i>Now the cafeteria door opened and another frontiersmen walked in. He looked at the table.</i> "Let's disregard ranks! Did anybody hear that? Rank does not count here" the general shouted around.
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