Unnatural Selection

c0mpleX

Posted the prolouge to this here a few months back, I've been keeping it up-to-date on AusNS.com but was too lazy to post it here until now.

Anyway, I've done the first 5 chapters; only Chapter 6 and the epilouge to go.

<a href='http://members.optusnet.com.au/unnatural/' target='_blank'>Unnatural Selection</a>

Click the link for the contents page, hope you enjoy. If you want to use it for anything (eg. link on your website) please ask me beforehand, my email is nicholas.kirkwood@gmail.com.

I hope you enjoy Unnatural Selection; I've put a lot of hard work into it. Unfortunately chapter 6 and the epilouge won't be finished until about mid-december (probably) because us Australians have exams rolling around this term.

Constructive criticism is welcome <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Thats_Enough

Very nice, I remember you posted about this a long while back, then I saw no updates for awhile <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> But it's very well written, good details. Some grammar things that you may want to look out for--some of your sentences are a bit confusing and wordy.

Other than that, keep it up!

Crispy

'epilogue'

Thats_Enough

Live!

Just wanted to breathe life back into this thread, as complex has finished the story (which, might I add was very well done).

Check it out here:

<a href='http://members.optusnet.com.au/unnatural/' target='_blank'>http://members.optusnet.com.au/unnatural/</a>