Ns_storage

NyRoNiC

Download
<a href='http://www.geocities.com/nyronic/ns_storage.zip' target='_blank'>http://www.geocities.com/nyronic/ns_storage.zip</a>
(geocities has a small amount of bandwith, so it will prolly run out D:)

Pictures:
(They may take a while to load, about 400kb each so if you're on 56k sorry <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->)
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My first ns map so be nice <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Any tips to do better in future maps will be greatly apprechiated.

carioca

<!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> good start, better than me, but too open in the doorways and square.
r_speeds?

NyRoNiC

bout 500ish

Kezei

Looking good.. Fix the red light in the second picture..

If you'd like, I can host your map for download.

Swiftspear

Very nice architexture... Try to be a little more creative with texture and lighting but other than that it's very nice.

I expecially like how you acctually gave that scale texture a slant in the wall where the texture shows slants.

TOmekki

nice map, but please change the name :/

some comments:

-in pic 50 youve overused red lights. tone them down.
-same case in 59, except blue.
-the generator thingies in pic 51 look really odd... and the wall texture could be better, maybe.
-pic 52: the room is way too big to be a hiveroom, and the wall texture is overused. also, why is the infestation only on the floor & ceiling?
-in pic 53 the (floor) texture on the right wall is scaled pretty big.
-pic 58: the tables dont fit and the room itself is pretty large. size it down & try grating on the floor, it could look better.

in any case, nice job.

intensityrising

It looks awsome. But I'll have to play it to get a feel of it.