Tsa Battle Rifle

Demiguise · February 2005

Well There is a concept thread <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=87522' target='_blank'>Here</a>

I have spent 2 days on this model so i hope you lot like it :/

Quick Renders:
<img src='http://img214.exs.cx/img214/1039/tsar10vh.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://img214.exs.cx/img214/7332/tsar22sn.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Of course better renders will be added but im tired and will do them later.

I have left out the Flip-Up sights as i do not really like them and cant seem to model them well enough.

GG.NN.

Owen1 · February 2005

grip seems a bit fat... might want to slim it down. Aside from that it does look rather neat, i get a very g36 vibe from it... and at the same time i get an AK feel...

Tak3r · February 2005

Looks pretty cool to me... but i don't know... well anything about modeling so don't take my word for it... But it looks like its coming along pretty good. <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />

Demiguise · February 2005

its meant to be finished lol
Ill do some tweaks but i dont want to do a huge change.

StarStarGrizzly · February 2005

great improvment over the last model you made <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' />

SkinnY · February 2005

nice work, let's hope it gets the skin it deserves

rabbity · February 2005

good start, but you should make with more bumps here and there, and chamfers on the sharp edges, to make it more ergonomic and less 2d
:)

Manta · February 2005

I agree with the fat grip and ergonomics statements, but it's looking nice.

BAshh · February 2005

it's nice. but:

* i dont like the position of the taclight

* the grip, the back of it, where there's a cylinder? it shouldn't be a cylinder, it should be an extrution of the grip, rounded off (imo, but if you dont want to, keep it as is)

* the grip itself should be more ergonomic (reiterating, i know)

* what i assume to be the ejection port needs to be bigger, if it's not, then nevermind.

* the reciever for the magazine appears a bit too thin, maybe even add a lip for it (i know it's not on the concept but it'd work i think)

* the trigger gaurd looks like it should be a bit more rounded on the inside, not boxy.

* you might want to slim down the ironsights/handle

* and for some reason the magazine just appears weird.. meh

well, I'd work on it more, but it's a good concept and great start, keep it up

Condizzle · February 2005

The thing that bothers me the most is the grip, but besides that I like it. <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />

funbags · February 2005

I like it.

Chubbieboi · February 2005

nice model, and yep the grip is fatty <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' />

and I love that mag, looks so kool <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /> for a mag <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />

Demiguise · February 2005

thx guys for all the comments and it seems Bashh always has something to say about my models <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />
But anyway, where would you more like the tac light? I dont understand what you mean about this cylinder. I know about the ejection port, i have trouble modelling them and so i made a placeholder so that i can model it later :/

Other then those needed things i will do what bashh says <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /> But ill still keep the oringal <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />

CFInsane · February 2005

heh looks really cool, i dont mind the grip that much since if it DOES get compiled you wont see it on the v_ model <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' />

you can always forget about the rear sights and just put in a reflex sight like this picture <a href='http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v157/rokentsu/assaultriflev2modified.jpg' target='_blank'>http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v157/rok...ev2modified.jpg</a>.
it can also be moved to the rear a bit.

i actually like how the light is placed

Demiguise · February 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>I have left out the Flip-Up sights as i do not really like them and cant seem to model them well enough.</td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>

Im sorry i couldnt model them properly but i havent really modelled lately.... or in ages so yeah

If you like it then im happy

<b>Changes made:</b>
- Ejection port on other side
- Handle at top shrunk
- Better bit at back of Grip
- Tried to improve the grip but not sure how
- Moved Torch back a bit

<img src='http://img180.exs.cx/img180/8350/tsar30xg.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://img180.exs.cx/img180/6392/tsar41kv.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

rabbity · February 2005

try to minimise sharp edges, eg those that are 90 degrees

for example, the handle could use some chamfers at the edges

i dunno how 3dsm work, maybe ask someone who knows about it :o

Demiguise · February 2005

Chamfered the edges...
Smoothed some crap
Apparttly this is a quick render that someone did for me.

<img src='http://img239.exs.cx/img239/9053/quick5sh.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

funbags · February 2005

The red circle on the top of the picture- Cut a hole in that, so it's like a site. You would look through it and level it with the front cut. Understand?

The lower red circle- Make it skinnier. It looks fatter than me on thanksgiving.

Thatamos · February 2005

This is going to be very akward when I have this on City 13.....but good work so far. I'm pretty sure I'm chaing that grip though, because it doesn't work well, the way you would hold it would bruise your trigger hand. Reminds me of one of the rifles in Killzone. Keep it up!

CFInsane · February 2005

well yours is a different variant so there would be a unique feel <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' />

btw, the mag seems a bit too boxy and the back stock is actually a cheek rest so it should stick out a bit, otherwise its great

Thatamos · February 2005

The one you gave me doesn't look taht differen't...contact me so we can figure out whats so different cuz I just don't see it <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' />

Demiguise · February 2005

Forget it then, if you want it have it..
Nothing ever happens to models anyway here they just get made and then ntohing happens...

Thatamos · February 2005

Well for those who wanted to see this dont dismay! I'll release a NS compile of it as well for the LMG when it's done ^.^

Demiguise · February 2005

I would finish it, i think its still a good model
I just got **** off with you and you keep on saying about your mod and ****

Thatamos · February 2005

No reason to stop making the model. If you had an issue you should have PM'd me instead of making it a big deal.

BAshh · February 2005

it's getting there ^_^

and thatamos, yes, please stop talking about city 13, you don't see me saying 'omg caliber this, that'.

CFInsane · February 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BAshh @ Feb 4 2005, 05:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> omg caliber this, that  </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> 
OMG YOU SAID IT

Thatamos · February 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BAshh @ Feb 4 2005, 05:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> 'omg caliber this, that'.  </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> 
omg...you poser! <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' />

BAshh · February 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Thatamos @ Feb 4 2005, 05:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> </div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BAshh @ Feb 4 2005, 05:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> 'omg caliber this, that'. </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
omg...you poser! <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' />  </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> 
Yes let's focus on something funny, and avoid the real point.

Demiguise · February 2005

I tried for my own pro rendar!

<img src='http://img148.exs.cx/img148/6350/tsap22do.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Hope u like it as it is pretty much finished
and looks complete *insert swear word*

Oh btw *Bump*

Edit: Forget Some smoothing had to be done. Thx REDD

Thatamos · February 2005

omg thats awsome. Hope you get it mapped and skinned with good anims

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