[wip] Smg

Rapier7

<div class="IPBDescription">Not NS related.</div> <img src='http://www.haxorsoft.net/pics/albums/album01/smgbeta.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

I know, the stock of it is freaking ugly as hell, but I'll fix that later.

Not to mention not much detail has been given to it, but so far...

Here's the gun's backdrop:

Zhukov Weapons Limited SMG23

Zhukov Weapons is known for its ruggedness, reliability, simplicity, and power. Its most capable SMG incarnate ZWI SMG23 does not fail to live up to that reputation. Its relatively simple design is easy to manufacture and its improved internal cooling system allows it to fire at an incredibly high frequnecy. It had seen heavy use in the old civil wars in the Mykarian Sector when Imperial and local ground forces battled over the iridium mines of the Echo Corridor. Its popularity (as all of Zhukov's arsenal) lies within its high combat effectiveness at a low price point.

What do you guys think?

Drfuzzy

I like the overall design, but the clip and clip area seem a little out of place.

Owen1

the concept it was based off doesn't do it justice. I'll be blunt, it needs work, lots of it. It doesn't look at all ergonomic

Rapier7

Yeah...Owen, you could at least specify which parts bother you the most. I'm here for critique, not just saying that it needs work.

wnn

Could we get a look of what it's based off ?
I agree with Fuzzy that the clip and the clip area is outta place, seems too large aswell, but i can't really say anymore as i can't see much, post wireframs or other angles if you want better crits.

Rapier7

Well, I removed the stock, as I'm still trying to figure out what to do with that, but I updated the clip.

<img src='http://www.haxorsoft.net/pics/albums/album01/smgbeta_1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />