I Have Movie Idea

OmegamanOmegaman Join Date: 2004-01-11 Member: 25239Members
<div class="IPBDescription">And I Need Feedback</div> Why? Because I plan on filming it.

Okay, okay okay okay. There's these three guys. Basically, they're trying to run an experiment to see if literary terms happen in real life. You know, like Symbolism and Foreshadowing and crap. They're going to do this by taking a camera and filming everything they see for a full day. Then they go back, and study the videos and see if they spot anything. I think it's a great idea for movie and it would be easy to film, but I cant decide on something...

Do I:
A) Make the final results exactly what would happen if the experiment was pulled off for real (Literary terms dont happen in real life).
B) Make the final results negatory but the movie itself has alot of it happen all behind their backs or something.
C) They discover some things that could be symbolic, but it's all very vague and up to the viewer. This sounds like the best choice, but it would be really hard to pull off.
D) They discover proof of literary terms and then something very ironic happens to all of them.

Suggestions?
Comments?
Ideas?

Comments

  • NEO_PhyteNEO_Phyte We need shirtgons&#33; Join Date: 2003-12-16 Member: 24453Members, Constellation
    i think that b would make for the funniest movie
  • docchimpydocchimpy Join Date: 2003-07-19 Member: 18266Members
    edited March 2005
    If you do anything other than C, I will hit your. Here are the reasons.

    A) That's just boring, unless you somehow make it into a piece about how mankind is so very alone. But then nobody likes a downer.

    B)Ech. The "comedy" copout. You had the chance to say something meaningful, and you blew it. Nice.

    C) Yay! Thought provoking films in a largely bland medium! Huzzah!

    D)I dunno, irony seems so passe.

    Note: Not serious. However, I would like to say that this is your time to shine. Try to make something thought provoking- God knows we've had too little of that lately.

    Alright, it's not like there aren't any thought provoking movies out there, but ALONE IN THE DARK was just released. We're losing grey matter, fast. It's up to you, Cap'n. Guide her straight and true.
  • flintlockflintlock Join Date: 2004-06-15 Member: 29320Members
    well, i'm a big fan of using ur medium to communicate something meaningful, so as long as u are filming a movie, go for thought provoking, never come out and say it, but hint that theres some deep meaning here if u just look for it.

    thats not to say it can't be funny, kinda the challenge of the filmmaker is to strike the right balance.
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    In all honesty, that just sounds a bit boring for a movie premise. Not meaning to be flaming, but... yeah.. it just doesn't seem interesting.
  • HazeHaze O RLY? Join Date: 2003-07-07 Member: 18018Members, Constellation
    Ask reasa, hes freaking awesome.
  • ShoeboxShoebox Join Date: 2004-11-15 Member: 32817Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-DOOManiac+Mar 2 2005, 08:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Mar 2 2005, 08:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> In all honesty, that just sounds a bit boring for a movie premise. Not meaning to be flaming, but... yeah.. it just doesn't seem interesting. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ya i kinda agree. to me it doesnt sound that interesting.
  • RatonetwothreetwooneRatonetwothreetwoone Join Date: 2004-03-23 Member: 27504Members
    make a natural selection movie


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  • Cold_NiTeCold_NiTe Join Date: 2003-09-15 Member: 20875Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-docchimpy+Mar 2 2005, 10:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (docchimpy @ Mar 2 2005, 10:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> If you do anything other than C, I will hit your. Here are the reasons.

    A) That's just boring, unless you somehow make it into a piece about how mankind is so very alone. But then nobody likes a downer.

    B)Ech. The "comedy" copout. You had the chance to say something meaningful, and you blew it. Nice.

    C) Yay! Thought provoking films in a largely bland medium! Huzzah!

    D)I dunno, irony seems so passe.

    Note: Not serious. However, I would like to say that this is your time to shine. Try to make something thought provoking- God knows we've had too little of that lately.

    Alright, it's not like there aren't any thought provoking movies out there, but ALONE IN THE DARK was just released. We're losing grey matter, fast. It's up to you, Cap'n. Guide her straight and true. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    This man speaks the truth. I too will hit you if you chose other than C.

    Save us Omegaman! You're our only hope!
  • AmbassadorAmbassador Join Date: 2003-02-24 Member: 13942Members
    How about this, the 3 guys who are your actors, and their shooting a movie trying to find out there are no literary terms in real life but what the viewer sees is that the people trying to find literary terms are actually doing them themselves.

    Example: The crew tries to find out if there is symbolism in nature or whatever. Well they're like "we can't find anything, there is no symbolism in nature." But what the camera will see, and the audience will see, is that say whenever they're really sad it starts to rain or if they're happy then everything's sunshiny outside.

    The symbolism there would be the sky itself so that a change in weather would be a change in their moods.

    You could do this 1 of 2 ways.

    1. Have little notes indicating for the stupider viewers that the 'hey it's raining, character 1 = sad'
    2. Don't have it but let them figure out on their own.


    Not really sure if that made any sense at all, but it works.
  • Cold_NiTeCold_NiTe Join Date: 2003-09-15 Member: 20875Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Ambassador+Mar 3 2005, 12:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Ambassador @ Mar 3 2005, 12:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> How about this, the 3 guys who are your actors, and their shooting a movie trying to find out there are no literary terms in real life but what the viewer sees is that the people trying to find literary terms are actually doing them themselves.

    Example: The crew tries to find out if there is symbolism in nature or whatever. Well they're like "we can't find anything, there is no symbolism in nature." But what the camera will see, and the audience will see, is that say whenever they're really sad it starts to rain or if they're happy then everything's sunshiny outside.

    The symbolism there would be the sky itself so that a change in weather would be a change in their moods.

    You could do this 1 of 2 ways.

    1. Have little notes indicating for the stupider viewers that the 'hey it's raining, character 1 = sad'
    2. Don't have it but let them figure out on their own.


    Not really sure if that made any sense at all, but it works. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Wow I rather like this. It has the whole dramatic irony thing going for it, but it's not needlessly comedic in that vain sort of way that is totally unecessary. And if you do it right you can also leave it up to the viewers to draw certain conclusions about the movie, which is the best way to please a critical audience.
  • SkulkBaitSkulkBait Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13423Members
    I think the premise is interesting. Although I can't really offer any suggestions as to what to do with it. I'd definatly make it a commedy though. Maybe you should just sort of merge it all in a meaningfull way, like some couple that watches too much TV is all forumlaic and literary and whatnot, while some other group completely isn't... I dunno.
  • Sub_zer0Sub_zer0 Join Date: 2004-05-09 Member: 28569Members
    Cant say i would go and see it it sounds poop sorry i am being honest
  • Sub_zer0Sub_zer0 Join Date: 2004-05-09 Member: 28569Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Ratonetwothreetwoone+Mar 2 2005, 11:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Ratonetwothreetwoone @ Mar 2 2005, 11:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> make a natural selection movie


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    Hell yeah!
    picture the scene a group of marines are walking through an abandoned place( ship/station/planet) radio chat to a minimul then sudenly there is screaming - but its no human then trough the dark they see shapes (not staying in flash lights for too long) then stomping chargin comes this gant onos the all hell breaks loose raido chater goes wild shot guns lmg fireing nade but they still come they fall back in later scenes you can have the big fight near end where ha's come stomping (far bigge than game) and when tehre hmgs fire THEY FIRE BABY! and above flying comes jp's with shotties and special effectas and uber computer gened skulks onoses etc. - wow
  • ZunniZunni The best thing to happen to I&amp;S in a long while Join Date: 2002-11-26 Member: 10016Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--><!--QuoteBegin-Ratonetwothreetwoone+Mar 2 2005, 11:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Ratonetwothreetwoone @ Mar 2 2005, 11:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> make a natural selection movie


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    Hell yeah!
    picture the scene a group of marines are walking through an abandoned place( ship/station/planet) radio chat to a minimul then sudenly there is screaming - but its no human then trough the dark they see shapes (not staying in flash lights for too long) then stomping chargin comes this gant onos the all hell breaks loose raido chater goes wild shot guns lmg fireing nade but they still come they fall back in later scenes you can have the big fight near end where ha's come stomping (far bigge than game) and when tehre hmgs fire THEY FIRE BABY! and above flying comes jp's with shotties and special effectas and uber computer gened skulks onoses etc. - wow<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    Get on the phone with your millions of dollars to ILM and make this happen original poster!!!11!! </sarcasm>

    SubZero = typical action junkie (which is OK), I was actually pm'd by a guy who wanted to do exactly the above.. I asked him for a sample treatment and a chapter of possible dialogue, but never heard back <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Back on-topic..

    The premise isn't interesting enough for a full-length movie... I hate movies that have no real point, at the end there isn't a clear message that makes me walk away and want to discuss the film with others... (Napolean Dynomite being the most recent example of this, take a guy.. film 2 random weeks in his life, edit.. release..)

    Perhaps look at making it a short (30 minute) film.. Shorts seem to be able to get away with premises that wouldn't stand up to a 1.5 hour film and allow the most impact in the shortest film time..

    My 2 cents..
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