[mwip] Queens Nest

douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
edited April 2004 in NS Customization
<div class="IPBDescription">for the el sensoryo</div> im thinkin this is lookin pretty good, suggestions welcome

1392 polies
<img src='http://www.battle.net/images/battle/scc/zerg/pix/buildings/adv/nest.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • lillbrorsanlillbrorsan Join Date: 2003-08-21 Member: 20060Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
  • g0opyg0opy Join Date: 2003-11-02 Member: 22233Members, Constellation
    As always..
    akalafetehe
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    omg itz the bl0b again with it's unattached lookin tentacles!!!

    Seriously, it is just a blob o.0 And the parts on top are unattached o.0
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    what do you mean unattached?
  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    The faces of the tentacles fo right through the faces of the main blob-part, without any connection :/

    And the whole form doesn't match the reference at all. OK it is round and it has tentacles, but proportions and shape of the blob are very VERY wrong <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SudzzSudzz Join Date: 2003-08-01 Member: 18663Members, Constellation
    Seems pretty big. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    <!--QuoteBegin-Obst & Gemuese+Apr 2 2004, 01:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Obst & Gemuese @ Apr 2 2004, 01:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> The faces of the tentacles fo right through the faces of the main blob-part, without any connection :/

    And the whole form doesn't match the reference at all. OK it is round and it has tentacles, but proportions and shape of the blob are very VERY wrong <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    well professor, what would you suggest i do? is there a magical fixall button i am not seeing in milkshape?

    how are the proportions wrong?
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    looks perfect0 to me <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    This is your blob:
    Notice the red outline and the teal lines
  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    That's YOUR concept:
    Notice how the red outline completely differs from the model while the blue parts don't even exist. And compare the relations between the teal lines, too.
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    well notice how the ref is a 2demensional object, and notice how it is at a random rotational degree. there are those tube things coming out that make it seem wider in some parts than others. also notice how since there is stuff on the top of my model, but nothing on the bottom. this would allude to the fact that i am working from the top -> down. you said many things but in the end it was all about how the bottom half widens out, and i plan on doing that. in fact i already have done it. i also plan on making those tubes. also notice how that picture that go0py posted is kickass.
  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    I wrote about what you showed here not "what you ahve in mind". So heres another comparison shot of what you did until now. Also notice that your blob's bottom is flat while the SC one isn't , which isn't marked
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    edited April 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-6john6doe6+Apr 2 2004, 02:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (6john6doe6 @ Apr 2 2004, 02:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i also plan on making those tubes. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
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    i mainly made the base flat because thats what im used to. i usually start at the top and work down also, so when i get there it will be fixed.
  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I wrote about what you showed here not "what you have in mind". <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I work from up to down <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    Here is another comparison shot: Red line shows how round and how much up the upper "sphere end" of the blob/ref go. Blue line shows that angle of the tentacle's bases.
  • AnarkiThreeXSixAnarkiThreeXSix x_x Join Date: 2003-12-31 Member: 24894Members
    edited April 2004
    chamber looks neat, more detail and stuff and it should kick **** <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • FamFam Diaper-Wearing Dog On A Ball Join Date: 2002-02-17 Member: 222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    edited April 2004
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  • RaVeRaVe Join Date: 2003-06-20 Member: 17538Members
    Looks pretty good, but you ned to flatten the top of the nest like Obst said.

    ATM it looks rather good, but it needs a little bit of work.
  • Badly_bROWNEDBadly_bROWNED Join Date: 2004-03-15 Member: 27358Members
    edited April 2004
    I think it looks good. But I do kinda agree it looks a little skinny for the queens nest. Cant wait for ya to finish it up!
  • vinnyrulez270vinnyrulez270 Join Date: 2002-11-11 Member: 8235Members
    yup can't wait <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    update, mainly beefed out the bottom, and flattened the top some
  • Badly_bROWNEDBadly_bROWNED Join Date: 2004-03-15 Member: 27358Members
    Now that looks beefy! Good job! Keep up the good work!
  • MalambisBZMalambisBZ Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9559Members
    Way too many spikes, you got 4 too many. The Queens Nest in SC only has 8 spikes on it.
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    well the reason i put 12 is i think it looks better, also thats just the way it fit symetrically. if its really a huge deal to anyone i can fix it, but i would have to completely start over, to fix the amount of slices in the body.

    also i have been toying with a tube idea, what does everyone think of this. wanna see everyones opinion befor i go all the way around.
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    flatshaded front view
  • douchebagatrondouchebagatron Custom member title Join Date: 2003-12-20 Member: 24581Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    well to save polies i only put the tubes at every other space its spose to be.

    2328 polies

    i think its about finished.
  • RestrikRestrik Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19392Members, Constellation
    holy ****, nice!!

    looks great!
  • ThiefThief Ownage Join Date: 2003-08-09 Member: 19214Members, Constellation
    looks freakin sweet with those pipes
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    they look sexeh <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • MilitaryPoliceMilitaryPolice Join Date: 2003-10-12 Member: 21623Members
    That was some great constructive criticism. I noticed it seem wrong but couldnt figure out what. LoL!


    If only every constructive criticism was like obst.. wed have greatER models...
  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    well, to be honest it looks a bit <b>too</b> fat down below <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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