First shots of ns_vortex
MrSaturn
Join Date: 2002-03-07 Member: 284Members
Heh, NS_Vortex is just a catchy name to get you in here, you gullible person, you ;p. The map hasn't been named. It's a vareity of atriums, corridors, and rooms you would expect to see on a ship going a long distance - except it's carrying alot of earth plants onboard, which aliens, I'm going to invent, have an appetite for. Enjoy!
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and yes, I realize there's some work to be done. I HAVE updated the map, but it's too late for me to take more pictures <!--emo&;)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'><!--endemo-->
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and yes, I realize there's some work to be done. I HAVE updated the map, but it's too late for me to take more pictures <!--emo&;)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'><!--endemo-->
Comments
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The shots look great. Very nice, creative architecture. I <i>really</i> like those tall translucent lights in the first shot.
I don't venture into the IRC channel much... it's scary in there. <!--emo&;)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'><!--endemo-->
I love the cluttered feel in the first and third shots. It's all very colorful. I love the walkways and hanging crates as well.
The only thing I'd suggest working on is your lighting. There's not a lot of contrast or interesting light falloff in here yet. Maybe you could use a few less regular lights and a few more spotlights?
Looking swanky!
Gasfiend
He tries so hard..thats why it's so funny when he fails
I think there's some real promise in this one.
Only comment I really have is, the button at the start isn't too obvious. I ran around in the little room a little before trying to press it. It didn't have that "PRESS ME" look to it <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
Minus 10 points for extra thick railing, and texture errors on the end of it
10,000 bonus points for excellent first map, great detail in the last pic, and interesting architecture
Looks great.
I just noticed this <b>the glasses have a wrong alignment of the texture! They've a vert line in the middle! :o</b>