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SkinnY
Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7500Members
<div class="IPBDescription">By... me :)</div> i just made this render, and thought i would like to hear you peoples oppinion on it...
<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/bored.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i'm properbly going to make more on it tomorrow, but for now, im of to bed only 4½ hour till school... <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/bored.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i'm properbly going to make more on it tomorrow, but for now, im of to bed only 4½ hour till school... <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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Everything else, great job. Love the shadows, and the spot light thing, and the akimboness, just needs a back drop.
Someone had to say it.
Maybe add a little bit of flail to the legs, but otehr than that... nice work!
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i. hate. you.
other then that, thx for the great replys <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> i'll see if i get time to work on it later to day, gotta go to school soon <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
Hovering, or hovar--Damn you, Legionnaired.
It looks nice, but I think there should be green blood splattered or something. Evil looking, neh?
1 - feet... if you were jumping like that, your feet wouldn't be pointing up
2 - shadow... teach me how, and i'll stop gripeing... and we,, other's have said it. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
3 - Guns... use a real sprite instead of drawing them in?
4 - trigger... what's he using to pull the trigger?
5 - skinny... eat something, and stop being skinny dang you!
<!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> nifty
Imagine if we had bullet time in NS <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
is he using mini-flamethowers?
1 - feet... if you were jumping like that, your feet wouldn't be pointing up
2 - shadow... teach me how, and i'll stop gripeing... and we,, other's have said it. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
3 - Guns... use a real sprite instead of drawing them in?
4 - trigger... what's he using to pull the trigger?
5 - skinny... eat something, and stop being skinny dang you!
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1. it was late and done quick, i'll try to fix them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
2. huh ? :S
3. I wanna try to make the muzzles 3d if i can <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
4. ssshh unimporten detail <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ( i'll fix that too, or block you're view or something )
5. Can't, not hungry <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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no it's my pathitic attempt at making a muzzle-flash :S
oiii english teacher.. gtg <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/nolight.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
In order to add some life and movement to the scene, though, why not adding bullet cases flying in mid-air from the guns and showing somehow the trajectory the marine has followed in his jump? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
In order to add some life and movement to the scene, though, why not adding bullet cases flying in mid-air from the guns and showing somehow the trajectory the marine has followed in his jump? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
whoa... easy now.. im learning as i make.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> but the bullet cases shouldn't be to hard... but that jump-thingy... i think that is going to be kinnda hard, and give me headaches :S
<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/motion_thing.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
maybe ? yes ? no ? are you insane ?
Well, sorry if I got you confused <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
I don't think this should be really hard to do though. I've made some (crapy) schematic showing you (somehow) what I meant (I would have done a scan, but right now I can't).
We see the scene from the left.
Imagine the little stars are the bullets.
Imagine the strange thingy on the right is an arm holding a gun (I didn't bother retracing the entire dude <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->).
Imagine the line at the bottom is the ground.
Is it clearer now? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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What I meant was that the place where bullets are "hovering" would show the trajectory of the marine <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Because adding bullet cases floating in the air is already adding some life to the pic.
Now if these bullets follow a certain curve, then automaticaly the brain will retrace the movement suggested by the positions of the bullet cases <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
It's like drawing a guy from front view. He's holding two pistols and aims at the reader.
If I want to suggest that he's slidding from left to right, I'll add bullet cases placed in 2 beautiful curves each one starting from one pistol and going to the left of the drawing.
See what I mean?
Here's another try at illustrating what I mean (damn scanner)... Only one curve of bullet cases drawn (the (8) is a gun viewed from front)
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<img src='http://www.skinny.frac.dk/uploads/better.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
any better ?
ps.
( i'm very open to suggestions on how to make nice muzzles... )
DAMN GOOD WORK
I really want akimbo now! <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
Next instead of flames like they are make it look more like a burst of hot gasses (like IRL)
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___N<span style='color:black'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span><span style='color:black'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
____|||<span style='color:yellow'>*******</span>
____|<span style='color:balck'>..</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span><span style='color:black'>.</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
<span style='color:black'>.............</span><span style='color:orange'>*</span>
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WEll, on the muzzles part, I'll have to pass, but if I can add something, for the love of details, if you can manage to give a random direction for some of the cases, it would be even better (if you look close, each case is directed toward the same direction, while usually they fly in a random behaviour...) <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Don't do anything yet to it, I'll post a pic as soon as my scanner is fixed in order to show you more properly what I'm meaning <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
GW! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->