ok, but what does "star-wars grade worldbuilding" mean?(thats funny but i never watched any Star wars movie, maybe i should...). I still think there are none future stuff in Bz, maybe except Mercury 2 lore(which is not confirmed).
Couple of points:
No characters:
I can agree with points on characters, but I feel like you want them all to be some kind of super human beings, while in story the point IS that they are just ordinary people + some of them just exist to …