That_Annoying_KidSire of TitlesJoin Date: 2003-03-01Member: 14175Members, Constellation
okay I shall
just how much is a little time? <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
The hive looked around after its nap and saw that there was a new creature running around. It had a shooter with some sort of bright pain. It was very very hot and it went a long way. Needless to say the hive was anxious to win and get back to normal life. The hive ordered its builders to build another birth sac. This time in the farther away Creature housing. The creatures seemed to rest here, and for some reason that made the area almost perfect for Birth sac production, as there were very few boionanites attacking it there. So the builders set out to complete their order. As they were walking along, one of the new creatures jumped out at them and spat its hot pain and killed a couple of the builders. This Infuriated the hive. He sent his newest fades out to destroy the creature. He had the remaining builders get top the nearest healing organ and heal. And then he switched modes to watch the fades attack the creature.
The fades swarmed on the creature with painful speed. They tried claws first, but its pain was just too unbearable and so very fast to switch directions. So they tried acid. They spat their acid at it and for a while nothing, then all of a sudden, one fade was goin in to claw it again, and another spit its acid, and the creature Exploded. In a ball of pain and heat, it killed the closest fade and injured the others severely. Now the hive was perplexed, how could these creature have EVER thought of a way to kill and injure his minions even as they were dying. The hive told everyone to try and take one of these creatures alive to study its pain shooter and find out HOW it did its vengeance weapon. He gave orders for a builder to go with every fade, so as to web the creature and cocoon it up for trasport. And then he went back to watching for movement in the 3rd birth sac room. If the creatures took this room, the kharra might never get their home back.
Some time later.
The hive had captured one of the heat creatures, and it had its minions studying it. The thing wriggled and struggled but it couldnt get out of the webs the builders had spun its cocoon with. It made stange sounds and noises. After a few hours of studying, the research kharra took it to the hive, where the hive spoke to it.
"Why are you creatures attacking our home?"
-"Let me go you overgrown Nut sac!"-
"Once again i ask you, Why are you invading our home?"
-"How should i know, and how the heck are you talking to me?"-
"Very well then creature, you shall die now."
And with that the hive sent his minions to kill this creature. They took it out and he lost interest. He turned to the fade nearest him, and told it to scout around for any new creature activity. As the fade was doing this, the hive once again told the builders to build another birth sac. And this time he sent two fades along for the ride.
After several firefights, and many many casualties, the kharra had finally gotten a third birth sac. And with it, they got new upgrades, and new creatures. A few kharra evolved into the Tank Onos, and after a few hours the creatuers seemed to be defeated. Until a new creature machine came through a large door. It spat pain like they had never seen before, It took out all the kharra in its path. A distinctive -Ching ching ching ching ching ching ching ching- was heard coming from it, and several creatures were heard yelling, "Thank god for this gatling gun, Now eat lead alien scum." The thing could move as it had 4 legs that rolled around and around. Creatures came out the back, and spat pain at the kharra also. The hive sensed this was the end, and sent his father a mental message.
"Father, i know i was a shame to you in the past, but forgive me. I see now my plans were flawed and i am paying for it, probably with my life. I want you to know the creatures have a strange new device that allows them to shoot at a much higher rate of speed, as well as take out our onos tanks. It is a maniacle machine solely intent on killing our whole race. The creatures called it a APC mounted gatling gun. This is a warning father, we may lose that war with these creatures because of this machine. Now I must say farewell, as my minions are calling for me, and i am going to go down with them."
With that, he turned toward the entrance and saw some of the creatures come in, and spit pain at him. He unwrapped his tentacles from the ceiling and whipped a few of them, sending them all staggering back. He shot one of his tentacles at a creature, and impaled it through the chest. He waved it through the air and then threw it at the creatures, knocking them all over. Then the device came into view, and spat its pain so fast, and so hard, that he was unable to move. Screaming and writhing under the tremendous power, the hive finally gave up and sagged under its own weight. It apologised to its minions, took one last look at the cheering creatures, then blacked out, never to awake again.
In the end, the battle for Outpost Zx-547 on the Planet Hoftel2, Took about 3 months, and there were well over 3,000 marine casualties. Every kharra on the planet was destroyed. The TSA rebuilt the mining complex on the planet to mine precious titanium ore. After several years, the battle with the kharra was goin very very well for the marines. All becuase of the gatling gun on the APC's that were first tested on Outpost Zx-547. The TSA mining complex Zx-547 was goin to be the first complex to host the TSA's president on his first ever visit to battled territory. The techies and marines were cleaning up when one marine found a small formation of pulsating green goop in the automated mine shaft.. He was confused, and touched it, only to be immediately killed by a sharp claw in the back followed by a chuckle.
The End
----------Tell me what you think, ill compile it at a later time, i dont feel like it right now.------------
<!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> its over. bwahahhahahha! it was a good end though. i hope you'll make a continuation <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> there is hope in this dark hour <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
There arent <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> its an armored personell carrier. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
besides, i needed some drastic realistic way to kill off the aliens. It was the apc, or the though of a backpac nuke crossed my mind. Yes they are realistic, but not likely to be used by anyone but Jihading terrorists becuase the person carrying the backpack.....well...yeah.
That_Annoying_KidSire of TitlesJoin Date: 2003-03-01Member: 14175Members, Constellation
true, I don't see the TSA blowing themselves to bits
and the APC is a realitic way of smacking some aliens up
I imaged this story taking place on tanith, and they alien hive was in fusion, but thats just me, the apc came thru the door of cargo storage and pwned the hive
HAHAHHAH!!! yeah it did pwn the hive all over the map <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> It came in and said..... Bend over baby.
I was imagining Hera for the marines start, Eclipse for the First fade encounter, and Nancy( right map?) for engine room hive. Hive core was in a made up area of my mind <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
<!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> ok bast i remember. i ahvent actually played NS in a few weeks...
that does bring up an idea. what if a map maker added a vehice into his map? just like lets say, de_jeepathon2k, de_airninja, blackhawkdown,or the old cs_siege with the apc. and then he mounted a weapon on it. Its possible, as shown in cs_drugwars. that would be sweet. marines running the onos with an APC. CHARGEEEE!!!!!!!111oneone <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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just how much is a little time? <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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The hive looked around after its nap and saw that there was a new creature running around. It had a shooter with some sort of bright pain. It was very very hot and it went a long way. Needless to say the hive was anxious to win and get back to normal life. The hive ordered its builders to build another birth sac. This time in the farther away Creature housing. The creatures seemed to rest here, and for some reason that made the area almost perfect for Birth sac production, as there were very few boionanites attacking it there. So the builders set out to complete their order. As they were walking along, one of the new creatures jumped out at them and spat its hot pain and killed a couple of the builders. This Infuriated the hive. He sent his newest fades out to destroy the creature. He had the remaining builders get top the nearest healing organ and heal. And then he switched modes to watch the fades attack the creature.
The fades swarmed on the creature with painful speed. They tried claws first, but its pain was just too unbearable and so very fast to switch directions. So they tried acid. They spat their acid at it and for a while nothing, then all of a sudden, one fade was goin in to claw it again, and another spit its acid, and the creature Exploded. In a ball of pain and heat, it killed the closest fade and injured the others severely. Now the hive was perplexed, how could these creature have EVER thought of a way to kill and injure his minions even as they were dying. The hive told everyone to try and take one of these creatures alive to study its pain shooter and find out HOW it did its vengeance weapon. He gave orders for a builder to go with every fade, so as to web the creature and cocoon it up for trasport. And then he went back to watching for movement in the 3rd birth sac room. If the creatures took this room, the kharra might never get their home back.
Some time later.
The hive had captured one of the heat creatures, and it had its minions studying it. The thing wriggled and struggled but it couldnt get out of the webs the builders had spun its cocoon with. It made stange sounds and noises. After a few hours of studying, the research kharra took it to the hive, where the hive spoke to it.
"Why are you creatures attacking our home?"
-"Let me go you overgrown Nut sac!"-
"Once again i ask you, Why are you invading our home?"
-"How should i know, and how the heck are you talking to me?"-
"Very well then creature, you shall die now."
And with that the hive sent his minions to kill this creature. They took it out and he lost interest. He turned to the fade nearest him, and told it to scout around for any new creature activity. As the fade was doing this, the hive once again told the builders to build another birth sac. And this time he sent two fades along for the ride.
After several firefights, and many many casualties, the kharra had finally gotten a third birth sac. And with it, they got new upgrades, and new creatures. A few kharra evolved into the Tank Onos, and after a few hours the creatuers seemed to be defeated. Until a new creature machine came through a large door. It spat pain like they had never seen before, It took out all the kharra in its path. A distinctive -Ching ching ching ching ching ching ching ching- was heard coming from it, and several creatures were heard yelling, "Thank god for this gatling gun, Now eat lead alien scum." The thing could move as it had 4 legs that rolled around and around. Creatures came out the back, and spat pain at the kharra also. The hive sensed this was the end, and sent his father a mental message.
"Father, i know i was a shame to you in the past, but forgive me. I see now my plans were flawed and i am paying for it, probably with my life. I want you to know the creatures have a strange new device that allows them to shoot at a much higher rate of speed, as well as take out our onos tanks. It is a maniacle machine solely intent on killing our whole race. The creatures called it a APC mounted gatling gun. This is a warning father, we may lose that war with these creatures because of this machine. Now I must say farewell, as my minions are calling for me, and i am going to go down with them."
With that, he turned toward the entrance and saw some of the creatures come in, and spit pain at him. He unwrapped his tentacles from the ceiling and whipped a few of them, sending them all staggering back. He shot one of his tentacles at a creature, and impaled it through the chest. He waved it through the air and then threw it at the creatures, knocking them all over. Then the device came into view, and spat its pain so fast, and so hard, that he was unable to move. Screaming and writhing under the tremendous power, the hive finally gave up and sagged under its own weight. It apologised to its minions, took one last look at the cheering creatures, then blacked out, never to awake again.
In the end, the battle for Outpost Zx-547 on the Planet Hoftel2, Took about 3 months, and there were well over 3,000 marine casualties. Every kharra on the planet was destroyed. The TSA rebuilt the mining complex on the planet to mine precious titanium ore. After several years, the battle with the kharra was goin very very well for the marines. All becuase of the gatling gun on the APC's that were first tested on Outpost Zx-547. The TSA mining complex Zx-547 was goin to be the first complex to host the TSA's president on his first ever visit to battled territory. The techies and marines were cleaning up when one marine found a small formation of pulsating green goop in the automated mine shaft.. He was confused, and touched it, only to be immediately killed by a sharp claw in the back followed by a chuckle.
The End
----------Tell me what you think, ill compile it at a later time, i dont feel like it right now.------------
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but I thought there weren't tanks in NS....
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besides, i needed some drastic realistic way to kill off the aliens. It was the apc, or the though of a backpac nuke crossed my mind. Yes they are realistic, but not likely to be used by anyone but Jihading terrorists becuase the person carrying the backpack.....well...yeah.
and the APC is a realitic way of smacking some aliens up
I imaged this story taking place on tanith, and they alien hive was in fusion, but thats just me, the apc came thru the door of cargo storage and pwned the hive
umm....right....<!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
I was imagining Hera for the marines start, Eclipse for the First fade encounter, and Nancy( right map?) for engine room hive. Hive core was in a made up area of my mind <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
it's cool to see the writers POV on where he imagines the story to take place
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that would be interesting, but unbalanced
oh, and I though you meant bast....