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Moconnor

<div class="IPBDescription">PICS INSIDE.....</div> Ok sorta hit mappers block while doing this map <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> . i've got about 30% done.
Here is some pics of whats done so far! comments and criticism please.

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Brodin

Oooh, looks nice =p.

The water in the third picture looks a bit odd, maybe its just the angle....

Pegenator

Pretty good for a 30% finished map!

Maybe you should work a little bit more on the textures and the details... Dunno.

MeanMrMustard

Looking good for 30% done.

The 5 pic, is that rock at the top right just flat? If so, add some shape to define its natural look, as it looks to man made at the moment.

Also the 7 pic, the crack in the floor, with the water. Although the crack/hole is a good idea it needs work on it. also the water texture looks to clean, in my opinion. It could even be Evian Natural Mineral water, what a NS storyline...... .... ....joke.

Apart from that, looking good. Obviously texture replacement and detail adding will be added at a later date.

Keep it up.

Tequila

Looking good, but as Mustard said the water texture looks like it's been blessed by John Paul the 2nd; it's too pure. Dirty it up!

blueman

really nice. i like the arquitecture.

MilitaryPolice

The organic matter on the last page looks as if a gorge with an architect degree came and design it, make it more.. mm how should i say this.... not straight? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> or at least make the texturs sorta blend in as if the organic stuff was trying to expand itself onto the ground, otherwise nice job keep up the good work <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Evil_bOb1

Nice work there. My little 2 cents would be on the lighting. It nearly looks fullbright with a few colored lights that seem to fade away such the white light is strong. try playing with the -gamma and -scale compile parameters to get more contrast in your lighting making it more atmospherik... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

Moconnor

Thanks for the comments guys.
ok

Mr.mustard: I fixed that rock it doesnt look as flat now and evian water removed
+ added a dirtier water.

Military police: Unless i completly cover the floor with infestation then there
isnt a good infested texture for the job. but i'll work on it and see what i
can come up with.

Evilbob: It must be your monitor because noway does it look fullbright(at least not
to me <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo--> )!!Anyway i'll be goin over the lighting again when i get more done.



Also its a pretty small map and the areas that i have done are almost complete
so i cant add much more detail! anyway it looks WAY better ingame. But i'll let you
decide when i get around to completing it.

MeanMrMustard

Loved the structure of your last post. Very organised <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

Great, Im glad to be of some help. Keep up the good work.

Moconnor

Now you see that there is the kinda comments
makes me wana finish my map <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
I'm already working on the lighting and other small detail.
I'll try get another pic or two up tomorrow.
thanx a bunch

Moconnor

Here is more pics of two new areas i made today!
I think this first area is a bit crap <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> .and maybe its too bright
what do you think??

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different angle

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and here is the second area(i really needa get names)
I kinda like this <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

tseepra

Man those look wicked, especially those lights, those turquoise ones. And I don't think it's too bright, you can't have your whole map dark.

Wirhe

That lower pic has too few shadows... Add a few, and more details to everyone of them. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->

MeanMrMustard

them pics are very good indeed.
I especially like the last one, with the res point elevated above some natural water. Very nice. Because you have added rockfaces try and add some more natural occurences, like cracks for example. Also Darken the last pic a little, make it a bit more scary, as it is a res node.

Apart from that, its looking fab <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

CaptainPanaka

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mhm anyone in here remembers "Fallout" <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

aonomus

It seems too clean, but I like it still, possibly have some broken beams, pulled up floor grates or wall panels, something that makes the map look like life was going on like normal until the Kharra arrived

Moconnor

OK what do you think now!!! -notice the cracks <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Moconnor

aonmus.r2: once i get aroun to completing the story line you
will see that life was goin on but not for very long so there wasnt much
time to do alot of things.Thats were i got the idea for the little blue bars of light...
sort of temporary lights <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> !!!

Icarus

That last shot looks awesome!
Try to use the shadows to your advantage!