Mabase
samejima
Join Date: 2004-09-10 Member: 31569Members
<div class="IPBDescription">again?</div> ive redone the layout and some rooms and lighting basicly started over heres some new shots
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comments please
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comments please
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EDIT: Just noticed from screenshot 3 that that's almost exactly what you've done! Maybe try indenting the grate and red a little bit more?
Well, he pretty much said it for me.
exspecially when you start thinking about e_polies... *scared*
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the colortheme is just perfect. and the architecture is clear and sexy. go on with this solid work.
ok thanks for your comments and acctuly posting an oppion the red lights ive thought about doing things with not sure which way im going and as for the arcutecture being boreing and repetative and you want more stuff you love co_kestre dont you you do just admit it you love the caotic look of an unrealistic enviroment now that im done with that i will explain rationaly if it is an underground lab why would there be random pipes and stuff hangin all over the room that area of the map is ment to be very flat and clean and also almost every one commented on how flat it was <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
im sure this sounded very rude i apologise for that but just trying to explain the way i think
only thing i can whine about is that some places are a bit open, but they are so good looking no one will ever care
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hehehe i know it was at like 3 am here and i was lazy but normaly i dont even put periods sorry yall
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You don't use periods?
You don't use any punctuation at all =]
but normaly i dont even put periods sorry yall [/QUOTE]
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thtas all i have to say
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part of marien start i did tonight :/
The lighting also seems to be rather flat and bland, I say this to alot of people yes, but this area could really do with harsh lighting. Although I'd do it in that terribly eye bleeding blandly lit red corridor. Red and blue (or turqoise as some people call it) in a corridor doesn't look 'right' (for a lack of a better word).
Map shaping up nicely, although do something with those ceilings, I love playing around with a ceiling because it is probably the most creative area of designing a level possible. You can do absolutely anything to it and with alot of detail. Go for some ceiling lights in the corners like veil did, instead of red have a nice blue/turqoise to go along with the feeling of the map and area. Pipes (partly or fully spherical or just the 'pipe' texture set), wires, construction girders, height variation, lights, skylights etc. all go very well on ceilings. It will add alot more atmosphere to the room too. In that room I'd personally put pipes in the ceiling and make it look like they connect up all over the room from the ones behind the glass.
Agreed, your ceilings and floors need work. Maybe even some walls, like the ones with the red arrows - looks a bit flat. Nice work though.
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but in reply to all the above comments im gonna work to break up the roofs more and the floor i understand what your saying this is a start and for those lights thursday its just beacuse i have added a little light under it all it is is texture lights i was aware of that but thank you for pointing it out all advice helps i might not have seen it